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- May 7, 2020
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If I could extend a bit of advice to the developer and i don't mean this in a rude way.
Get someone who is a native English speaker to translate the dialogue for you, because some of the words you're using don't mean what you think they mean. I'm sure there are plenty of people on this site who would be glad to do it just to improve our own experience.
Some of the dialogue as it is now is frankly painful to read.
Get someone who is a native English speaker to translate the dialogue for you, because some of the words you're using don't mean what you think they mean. I'm sure there are plenty of people on this site who would be glad to do it just to improve our own experience.
Some of the dialogue as it is now is frankly painful to read.
- Jan 9, 2018
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So we won't get to tap Abby? Bummer, she seems to be an ass freak, just like me.
- Jul 30, 2018
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Just a little bug report from my side:
After the whole check on Ashley at the sorority thing, my MC wakes up with Carol in his bed. Even though i declined her and didnt went on a date with her.
Not that i would mind a surprise like that in the morning, but i dont think thats intended...
After the whole check on Ashley at the sorority thing, my MC wakes up with Carol in his bed. Even though i declined her and didnt went on a date with her.
Not that i would mind a surprise like that in the morning, but i dont think thats intended...
- May 7, 2018
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Couldn't agree more... I'm really enjoying the story. Renders and models are well done. However, the current dialogue really, really needs the review from a native English speaker. There are times when I'm not able to interpret the meaning of certain conversations; a lot of the discourse simply makes no sense.
The developer has the potential for a great product with the use of a good English speaking editor.
Great update!
(w)hen the whole morning routine was done...
MC: Why does she need these difficulties? -- problems?
Rachel: Ta-da! We've been given jobs. -- work? or "a job"
Nikki: This happy cock that just became a little richer,this (not wrong, but sounds repetitive and is unnecessary i believe) is my brother, Mickey
Vlad: Members of the fraternity?Are(Do) we look like dumbass(es --> plural)?
MC: Hmm... I don't see any reason why Vlad and Marco wouldcheat(lie?).
MC: Shit, she's still a virgin, but she already thinks Abby's methods are 'a slightly unconventional'
Marco: Shut your rotten mouth! No one gave you your word. -- (not sure about that expression, perhaps "No one said you could speak!")
Marco: MC, respectyour man. Didn't leave the girl in offense. (not sure about that expression perhaps "Didn't leave the girl get disrespected")
Sara: Umm... How bad is it? I don't know much about sorority(sororities --> plural or "about this sorority")
Sara: How did she wind up in this ("that" unless she is talking about the university and town as a whole) hellhole again? --> (If by "this" she refers to the situation, not sure to reffer to it as "hellhole", i believe its used mainly to reffer to places, not situations)
MC: Fuck! Anyway, it's not torture to try. (It's torture not to try?)
(w)hen the whole morning routine was done...
MC: Why does she need these difficulties? -- problems?
Rachel: Ta-da! We've been given jobs. -- work? or "a job"
Nikki: This happy cock that just became a little richer,
Vlad: Members of the fraternity?
MC: Hmm... I don't see any reason why Vlad and Marco would
MC: Shit, she's still a virgin, but she already thinks Abby's methods are '
Marco: Shut your rotten mouth! No one gave you your word. -- (not sure about that expression, perhaps "No one said you could speak!")
Marco: MC, respect
Sara: Umm... How bad is it? I don't know much about sorority(sororities --> plural or "about this sorority")
Sara: How did she wind up in this ("that" unless she is talking about the university and town as a whole) hellhole again? --> (If by "this" she refers to the situation, not sure to reffer to it as "hellhole", i believe its used mainly to reffer to places, not situations)
MC: Fuck! Anyway, it's not torture to try. (It's torture not to try?)
- Jul 25, 2019
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can you update your WT mod?
- Jul 5, 2018
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There should be a screen after that saying it's the end of the update. If you just talked to Carol after helping Yuki, then yes, its the end of the updatedefinitively another good game to check im in love with Carol
Great work DreamNow beautiful renders, solid update, translation still needs a little work but nothing too game breaking. If this doesn't end with a harem tag, then I'd have no problem playing solo for each girl as I love all of the different personalities. Especially Mrs Cooper. Hope we get a chance with Abby too. Love me a bad bitch
- Mar 14, 2020
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First time trying this and it seems like it's femdom. First the MC's little dream of Carol and then the sisters at the gym. If that's what this I'm going to pass. I got to the scene in the shower at the gym and I was like nope. Rolled back and went back to the dorm.
- Sep 26, 2016
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A bit hasty because....
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Maybe a bit hasty, but, I'm not into even light femdom. I'll go back and get through it then. I'll hold out for now and thanks for the tip.
- Jun 26, 2018
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I'm not interested in the first scene, neither I'm interested in this one that exists in the last update. These kinds of things aren't for me.
- May 5, 2018
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The Walkthrough is now up to date.
- Nov 27, 2019
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