VN Ren'Py Unnatural Instinct [v0.8.5] [Merizmare]

[Ozygator]

Update:
Ok, so eventually got my answer by finishing the story to the latest update....and so there IS a scene with Nelly. But, is Nelly still a full girl even if the player picked her to have a vag...or is she actually a trans character that completed the process to become a girl? (Just wondering...if all trans or futa content will be removed when the player picks the vag choice?)

We can probably safely assume that "picking a gender" means she was born either male and is trans, or female and never had a dick.

Going by common sense here and not the BS stuff the media and others try to act like someone born biologically a dude, somehow magically becomes a woman due to surgery. We have NO gene replacement at the DNA level and that's what it would take to literally have someone born one way change to the opposite.

 

[mandudeman]

As much as I want to keep following this story I just cannot get behind the whole VN theme when it is in fact a Glorified KN.


The choices you do get don't feel like anything actually has any Neg or Pos outcomes as the story feels super linear.


Good luck and maybe some revisions later on choices will convince me to come back.

 

[rai1230]

I love this game mom seducing and dominated her son

exactly 100%

 

[Combat Wombat]

Pretty decent game but i do have a few issues with certain things.

The engrish. For the most part you can understand whats trying to be said but then other times it's questionable.

The MC is rather annoying. I find him pretty badly written. He can go from being super uncomfortable by having a chub in front of his mom or sister or seeing a bit of skin to throat fucking kelly. His inner monologue is full of bitching about this, that and everything. I just find him to be really unlikeable. He's not the usual gotta fuck everything which is refreshing but i dunno, there's just something about the way he interacts with the characters that is just really off putting.

Speaking of throat fucking. That last scene with MC and kelly (meaning the last scene they were in together), why did it have to be one of them dominating the other. I get kelly is bit of a femdom but for those that don't enjoy that kind of thing why couldn't there have been a third option where the interaction between them was a bit more amicable. This isn't a complaint as such, just my personal preference.

All the characters either have a constant serious look on their faces or an evil smirk. There's no inbetween. Like when the mom is telling the mc that she loves him or something really sweet or lighthearted, her expression looks like shes about to tell him his dogs dead. They all just look so bland, there's no emotion to them whatsoever.

There's a few good things about this game as well though, it's not all negative.

The character models are great, especially the mom. The neighbour milf though looks like she's been plucked straight out of the 1920s though. The renders look really good also.

I like that its the mom pursuing the son for once. I personally haven't seen that since milfy city.

Like i said, it's a decent game. The issues that i have with it are exactly that, issues that i personally have. They are not gonna deter me away from the it. There is plenty of room for improvement however but pretty decent nonetheless.

 

[Adoringfan]

In a world where the mc is the only male and every female is scheming to fuck him. One man... child, against all odds, will act like an asshole, creep on everyone, talk like an incel and lose his spaghetti.

This is a struggle, I have to go through this game in small bits. The mc is just such a mess. Like I've played bad games that are goofy and fun, they are what MoistCritkal would call 'fun bad.' This is not that. It's like struggle bad and it's not all bad. The character models look good, the animation is fine, yeah the facial expressions are iffy at best, but you can see the dev is talented. Where it hits a brick wall is the writing. If you like holding ctrl to stop the cringe, you're in the right place.

I don't just wanna bash it, there are some good ideas for sexy scenes, but it's just that, they are sprinkled in like a few chocolate chips in an otherwise stale cookie. Ofc sex scene for sex scene sake doesn't quite work either, instead of neuron activated it just sorta reads like alien behavior. A good example is like the movie Showgirls. If you've seen it you know, if you haven't may want to avoid it for your sanity's sake.

 

[Incest games fan]

Incest patch please

 

[Combat Wombat]

Incest patch please

You dont need one

 

[bighunter]

heh funny i am Martin and bartander is also Martin ... it is just soo funny

 

[Deadmanvs1]

Well, finished the game. And it was fun to play. The engrish is there, but it's already mentioned from the dev her/himself. Looking forward to the next update.

Since the game has so far no music itself I've made a quick Mod for that while playing the game


Sept. 10, 2023
Updated my Mod for the new game version v0.5
Info: added a Mod button to swith the trans/female variable for Nellie


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Some ingame pics of the Mod:
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Only issue is it doesn't remove the incest even though it's in the script it shows non incest

 

[UnDoubleUpUhUh]

Merizmare - really enjoyed the game so far, and would have provided some $ support...but Russia-based payments are still insecure from a global perspective, so I can't use Boosty and feel that my info is going to be safe. If you open a Patreon, or SubscribeStar, or BuyMeACoffee, or even a Venmo, I'd be happy to send some $.

Only things I'd love to see are more animations and sex sounds/voices. KoGa3 is doing a fine job adding music via his mods, but that extra bit would help a lot.

 

[Eagle1900]

Unnatural Instinct [v0.6]​

Updated Italian translation

Made by a fan of ITALIAN TRANSLATIONS BY EAGLE 1900

Double version (clean + koga3 mod already inserted)

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[Havenless_]

I would like the relationship between Kelly and the MC to be not just maledom or femdom. More genuine, of love and caring like with the rest of the girls.

I understand that her character development for now doesn't allow it because the MC fucked her girlfriend , but I mean, that eventually it's not just about dominating or being dominated. Let there be real feelings, I mean.

Anyway, I reeeeeally like this a lot.

 

[Yukariin]

I would like the relationship between Kelly and the MC to be not just maledom or femdom. More genuine, of love and caring like with the rest of the girls.

I understand that her character development for now doesn't allow it because the MC fucked her girlfriend , but I mean, that eventually it's not just about dominating or being dominated. Let there be real feelings, I mean.

Anyway, I reeeeeally like this a lot.

respectfully disagree, i think he should really put her in her place and teach her to be the obedient sub that she so deep down desires.

 

[Adoringfan]

I would like the relationship between Kelly and the MC to be not just maledom or femdom. More genuine, of love and caring like with the rest of the girls.

I understand that her character development for now doesn't allow it because the MC fucked her girlfriend , but I mean, that eventually it's not just about dominating or being dominated. Let there be real feelings, I mean.

Anyway, I reeeeeally like this a lot.

We've all seen this story before, it's one extreme or the other. You need to lower your expectations. If the mc is saying stuff like OMG I just had a wank in the shower, but she showed some ankle and now I need to fuck something FUCCCKKK!

 

[bulifun]

I would like the relationship between Kelly and the MC to be not just maledom or femdom. More genuine, of love and caring like with the rest of the girls.

I understand that her character development for now doesn't allow it because the MC fucked her girlfriend , but I mean, that eventually it's not just about dominating or being dominated. Let there be real feelings, I mean.

Anyway, I reeeeeally like this a lot.

I also disagree, I think she makes a hot domme and let’s be real, the MC really deserves to be put in his place with that attitude

 

[Saint Blackmoor]

All the characters either have a constant serious look on their faces or an evil smirk. There's no inbetween. Like when the mom is telling the mc that she loves him or something really sweet or lighthearted, her expression looks like shes about to tell him his dogs dead. They all just look so bland, there's no emotion to them whatsoever.

I agree with you on most points.
However, the facial looks the characters have do vary beyond your description. Yes, there are some bland looks, but there are many very spot-on looks. Ashley has amazing eyes that convey her innocent nature. The neighbor, Sophia, has that angelic look and personality that does not need extreme facial expression, but you get her meaning nonetheless. I think it's a case of coming across an occasional bland or a not quite spot-on expression and later thinking all the expressions are that way.

At this level, you have to give the Merizmare credit for the amazing work. Go back, and you'll see many very good expressions.

IMO, dialogue having a very natural flow is very important to immersion. In so many cases here on F95, it's the math and reading metaphor. We mostly all read better than we do math. In AVNs, the art is reading, and dialogue is math. We are visual animals predomitly.

 

[Combat Wombat]

I agree with you on most points.
However, the facial looks the characters have do vary beyond your description. Yes, there are some bland looks, but there are many very spot-on looks. Ashley has amazing eyes that convey her innocent nature. The neighbor, Sophia, has that angelic look and personality that does not need extreme facial expression, but you get her meaning nonetheless. I think it's a case of coming across an occasional bland or a not quite spot-on expression and later thinking all the expressions are that way.

At this level, you have to give the Merizmare credit for the amazing work. Go back, and you'll see many very good expressions.

IMO, dialogue having a very natural flow is very important to immersion. In so many cases here on F95, it's the math and reading metaphor. We mostly all read better than we do math. In AVNs, the art is reading, and dialogue is math. We are visual animals predomitly.

I just want to clarify that im not hating on the game or dev at all. It is a good game and you can clearly tell that the dev has put in a lot of work. I was just giving constructive criticism from my experience. Yes, what i said about them being emotionless in their expressions may have been a bit too exaggerated but for the most part that is exactly what it seemed to me. For the tone that the writing was trying to set, the expressions seemed....dead. Mainly with the mother, i don't think i noticed her smile once, if she did it was only slight.

I agree, we definitely are visual animals. What i said in the beginning about it being from my experience when reading through it was of my opinion that the expressions didnt match. So like for me personally, right at the start when the mc returns home and his mom sees him, from my opinion she should have been wide eyed smiling from ear to ear. but instead she looks like this....

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She hasnt seen him in a year and thats how she looks at him, just seems really emotionless. I will agree with you about ashley though, her face and especially her eyes express emotions that suit the mood more often than not.

Again i just want to say that im not hating on the dev, game or even you. Its just my opinion and as i said in my original message, its not going to deter me from the game.

 

[Saint Blackmoor]

Again i just want to say that im not hating on the dev, game or even you. Its just my opinion and as i said in my original message, its not going to deter me from the game.

Sorry if I came across as saying you were hating the game. I know you are not.

 

[Combat Wombat]

Sorry if I came across as saying you were hating the game. I know you are not.

Nah no worries bud, its all good!

 

[Havenless_]

The duality of man. lol

respectfully disagree, i think he should really put her in her place and teach her to be the obedient sub that she so deep down desires.

I also disagree, I think she makes a hot domme and let’s be real, the MC really deserves to be put in his place with that attitude

Perhaps not getting rid of the domination options, rather adding a more romance-centric option. Those who want to let themselves be dominated will have the option. Those who want to dominate her, will have the option. Those who want a more romantic relationship, will have the option.