DemonLad please take this part out of the game and add it as a Changelog in the main folder. We are abrubtly pulled out of a very intriguing storyline and it feels really weird. It's like watching an exciting movie and having the cameraman walk into the scene.
- Feb 19, 2019
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It was only for this update. Will revert back to the continuity from the next update.
Sometimes, when the only words you can think of amount to nothing but pointless drivel, the best course of action is to just say nothing at all.
With that out of the way... Interesting game, I'm enjoying it so far. I would like to see more interesting situations with Nicole though (perhaps an erotic encounter with some random characters here and there?), as it's all been pretty vanilla up to this point. Of course, it's still quite early in the story so I suppose that's not too unexpected for an AVN.
There is one small gripe I have though.. Why do nearly all of the male characters look like they came straight from a failed boyband career? Maybe it's just a result of the model used that makes me think this, but they all give off the same boring pretty-boy-without-a-shred-of-authority vibe. Well, maybe with the exception of Jonathan I guess. Wouldn't mind seeing a few more male characters that look (and in some cases, act) a bit more mature.
By the way DemonLad , Correct me if I'm wrong but I'm getting the feeling you're not the one writing the script for this, are you? Looking at your comments on this thread, your English seems to be pretty much perfect. Yet in the game there are quite a few mistakes when it comes to the characters' choice of words and oftentimes their general way of speaking.
Don't get me wrong, it's not even close to the worst I've ever seen, but you might wanna do some extra proofreading when you find the time for it.
Besides that, the game is looking good. The render quality is very nice, it's obvious you know how to make things look appealing. I'm curious to see what future updates will bring.
Almost forgot. I would like to add my two cents here and say I disagree with what was said above. Personally I think Nicole is more beautiful than Kelly.
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Yo! Thanks for this huge insights, makes me put in extra effortSometimes, when the only words you can think of amount to nothing but pointless drivel, the best course of action is to just say nothing at all.
With that out of the way... Interesting game, I'm enjoying it so far. I would like to see more interesting situations with Nicole though (perhaps an erotic encounter with some random characters here and there?), as it's all been pretty vanilla up to this point. Of course, it's still quite early in the story so I suppose that's not too unexpected for an AVN.
There is one small gripe I have though.. Why do nearly all of the male characters look like they came straight from a failed boyband career? Maybe it's just a result of the model used that makes me think this, but they all give off the same boring pretty-boy-without-a-shred-of-authority vibe. Well, maybe with the exception of Jonathan I guess. Wouldn't mind seeing a few more male characters that look (and in some cases, act) a bit more mature.
By the way DemonLad , Correct me if I'm wrong but I'm getting the feeling you're not the one writing the script for this, are you? Looking at your comments on this thread, your English seems to be pretty much perfect. Yet in the game there are quite a few mistakes when it comes to the characters' choice of words and oftentimes their general way of speaking.
Don't get me wrong, it's not even close to the worst I've ever seen, but you might wanna do some extra proofreading when you find the time for it.
Besides that, the game is looking good. The render quality is very nice, it's obvious you know how to make things look appealing. I'm curious to see what future updates will bring.
Almost forgot. I would like to add my two cents here and say I disagree with what was said above. Personally I think Nicole is more beautiful than Kelly.
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For now, I think I would like to bring a pace that isn't very fast or presented as a slow burn. It is vanilla because the exploring part will be later, depending on how you will present your MC as.
I know, and sadly, this is where I fail. Maybe because I get my female characters too good looking that these guys fall flat. Will work on improving on it, surely, with new projects to come.
Well, my command on the language is limited. So I can't throw in complex words or humanlike convos because I rarely speak English. Probably that is why I have got many complaints on this front. There will be a revamp version before this goes for sales so then I will be working on re-rendering some scenes and proofreading too.
Thanks! Art is important and sometimes even I miss portraying the right emotions, because I can't preview the scenes because of an old lap I use. Also, you can continue fighting Kelly and Nicole, but I am a big Sylvia fan
Thanks for the feedback, being a 'lad', I think I'm tryna create guys ugly looking than me, so that I have a chance at Nicole and Kelly both
Every time I download it, it keeps saying there was a problem parsing the package. What does that mean ?
Thanks for the reply, that does help me understand a few things a bit better. All good though, besides those few points I made I do think you're doing a good job overall. I've played games with English so bad I couldn't even understand what was being said, to the point of just giving up... So for having a limited grasp of the language I'd say you're not doing all that bad lol.For now, I think I would like to bring a pace that isn't very fast or presented as a slow burn. It is vanilla because the exploring part will be later, depending on how you will present your MC as.
I know, and sadly, this is where I fail. Maybe because I get my female characters too good looking that these guys fall flat. Will work on improving on it, surely, with new projects to come.
Well, my command on the language is limited. So I can't throw in complex words or humanlike convos because I rarely speak English. Probably that is why I have got many complaints on this front. There will be a revamp version before this goes for sales so then I will be working on re-rendering some scenes and proofreading too.
Thanks! Art is important and sometimes even I miss portraying the right emotions, because I can't preview the scenes because of an old lap I use. Also, you can continue fighting Kelly and Nicole, but I am a big Sylvia fan
Like I said the game looks great overall, especially after you've updated some things in episode 3. I'm sure it'll only get better over time so I'll be looking forward to futures updates!
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There have already been so many more male-protagonist games than female ones on this website; why is someone still whining about a game with a female protagonist? Unbelievable!
I'm putting in a lot of effort in terms of renders, and given that I have only the experience of a year i believe it will surely improve as time goes on. Hopefully more of such positive comments in the future