Short and sweet aproach. Verry good for what it is keep it up. Only thing i would coution to the creator, its hard for a game to be one of the best when they are this short. No doubt this is good but it'll be hard to stand out when they are this short.
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Could someone share me games like this, where the m/s are forced to do the deed...
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The introduction is not really credible.
Like, okay, they try to pressure you and force you to do something that disgust you, you know that the contract can easily be denounced due to contradictions it includes and they now it too, then there is another revelation they make that invalidate it completely and so they start physical threats. Until then, okay.
But why the young boy stay there? He is near the door and know it’s unlocked (since he crossed it just a few minutes ago), so he should escape and call the cops or someone to help. Yes this will leave the mother behind, but at this point there is no many option left, but I don’t think they would beat her for that and maybe one of them run after him or, more likely they will left and try to come back later.
Also, there way too many stops in this short game.
Anyway, about the following:
The following is a small patch for those that are interest in changing the MC’s name (this also remove the stops in the overwritten part, except one that I transformed in timed stop):
Just save it as something like 'patch.rpy' and put it under '{Path to the Game}/game'.
Like, okay, they try to pressure you and force you to do something that disgust you, you know that the contract can easily be denounced due to contradictions it includes and they now it too, then there is another revelation they make that invalidate it completely and so they start physical threats. Until then, okay.
But why the young boy stay there? He is near the door and know it’s unlocked (since he crossed it just a few minutes ago), so he should escape and call the cops or someone to help. Yes this will leave the mother behind, but at this point there is no many option left, but I don’t think they would beat her for that and maybe one of them run after him or, more likely they will left and try to come back later.
Also, there way too many stops in this short game.
Anyway, about the following:
This can in fact be patched, though not that much.
This is in fact not the good way to fix it since it will only change the display name of the one who speaks, not the name mentioned in the text (128 occurrences) since the Dev. didn’t use brackets ('[...]') to interpolate the name.
The following is a small patch for those that are interest in changing the MC’s name (this also remove the stops in the overwritten part, except one that I transformed in timed stop):
Python:
init 99 python:
config.label_overrides['start'] = 'introduction'
_rpy_input = renpy.input
def rpy_input(prompt="", *args, **kwargs):
prompt = prompt.replace("Jacob", str(Jacob))
return _rpy_input(prompt, *args[1:], **kwargs)
renpy.input = rpy_input
def maybe_not_Jacob(s):
return s.replace("Jacob", str(Jacob))
config.say_menu_text_filter = maybe_not_Jacob
Jacob = Character("[MC_name]", color="#ffffff")
define MC_name = "Jacob"
label introduction:
"Everyone in this story is 18 or older!"
stop music fadeout 3.0
scene bg_0
Dev "Just a heads up, this story features mature content like NSFW scenes, so you gotta be 18 or older. Thanks for your understanding!" with dissolve
menu:
"I am 18 years old":
Dev "Very good." with dissolve
"I'm not 18 yet":
"I'm sorry, but you're not allowed to play the game yet."
return
#-------------
Dev "Now tell me, you play the role of a young man {i}(over 18){/i}, but what’s the name of this man?"
$ MC_name = renpy.input("What’s its name?", default=str(Jacob))
#-------------
scene bg_0
scene bg_1 with dissolve
Dev "Hey, just a few things about me..." with dissolve
scene bg_2 with dissolve
Dev "I'm a student and I do this as a hobby alongside my studies. I appreciate any support as it obviously allows me to spend more time on my stories, but I'm not reliant on it." with dissolve
scene bg_3 with dissolve
Dev "My goal isn't to create long and complex games since I don't have the expertise for that, and it would bore me too much." with dissolve
scene bg_2 with dissolve
Dev "I just enjoy crafting short and spicy stories." with dissolve
Dev "If you don't like the story or the fetishes don't appeal to you, I'm open to suggestions and inspiration." with dissolve
scene bg_1 with dissolve
Dev "However, this is just a fun project for me and I'm unlikely to engage in anything I don't enjoy. " with dissolve
scene bg_2 with dissolve
Dev "Also, before we start, I'd like to mention that English is not my native language, so there might be grammatical errors or sentences that sound unnatural." with dissolve
Dev "I'll do my best to make everything sound as good as possible." with dissolve
scene bg_3 with dissolve
Dev "Let's get started! :)" with dissolve
#-------------Erzähler/storyteller----------
play music "audio/The-City-of-Ice.mp3" fadein 3.0
scene bg_0 with dissolve
scene bg_4 with dissolve
scene bg_5 with dissolve
scene bg_6 with dissolve
MysteriousWoman "Oh, hello!" with dissolve
scene bg_7 with dissolve
MysteriousWoman "I didn’t even see you there, haha." with dissolve
scene bg_8 with dissolve
MysteriousWoman "You must be wondering who I am and where we are, right?" with dissolve
scene bg_9 with dissolve and Pause(0.5)
scene bg_10 with dissolve
MysteriousWoman "Well, I'm something like an all-knowing narrator" with dissolve
scene bg_11 with dissolve
MysteriousWoman "and we find ourselves here in the infinite library of the sauciest stories!" with dissolve
scene bg_13 with dissolve
MysteriousWoman "The story we’re going to read today is about a young man named Jacob and a middle aged woman named Anna." with dissolve
jump scene_one
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Just looking at the screenshots, it seems to be awafully like a story i read on Literotica,com not long ago.
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