HTML Veil of the Heir [v0.0.6.B] [Nexisphere]

[latenight]

"The foundations of a monster-hunting storyline have been established", good, now to extensive monster-fucking storyline.

 

[POne1]

Это только у меня проблема с тем что после интро, игра заканчивается?
Is this only my problem with the fact that after Intro, the game ends?

It's something wrong with your download or your PC. Worked fine on my linux PC with FireFox

 

[cdn]

Is there only one event with respect to Lady Serelyne's training? After completing the meeting with Torin there is no progress or triggers while meeting her. Have completed all available transformation as well.

 

[Mirality]

I'm rather confused at the pacing in this game.

Day 1, you get told to grab three ingredients from the vault, but it doesn't show you the recipes while you're in the vault so I hope you remembered that screen several pages ago. Oops, you got the wrong ones, no potion for you.
Day 2, you paid more attention to the recipes, and got enough ingredients for a potion, yay, one minor transform done. But you have to go to bed early because you spent too much time walking around the castle.
Day 3, you're asked to go do a M/M scene for no readily apparent reason. At least you can skip it. Maybe one more transform if you remembered the right ingredients.
Day 4, you're sent to a forest, have to sit through like 40 pages of dialogue for some reason first. The forest has a bunch of "combat" minigames, and apparently you breeze through them because all this combat is much easier than walking around the castle because it doesn't dent your energy bar at all. And you get like 12 potions worth of ingredients in a single day instead of the "maybe 1 if you're lucky" from the daily vault.
Day 5, end of content.

Also, all the monsters in the forest are constantly belittling you for how feminine you've become after several weeks (on day 4) and pointing out various body features that you don't have because you've at best had two transforms at this point. What?

Ok, I know it's a sandbox and you can take longer and do more transforms before you go to the forest if you want, but the game just doesn't seem to take any of that into account. I know it's early days but still.

I'm also very confused by the tone of everyone constantly belittling and humiliating the Prince for starting on the path to becoming a ruling Queen in a matriarchal society where only women can rule, and expecting that role to be submissive. This just doesn't make sense. Especially as the current Queen seems the exact opposite of all of that.

 

[riadhloch]

I'm rather confused at the pacing in this game.

Day 1, you get told to grab three ingredients from the vault, but it doesn't show you the recipes while you're in the vault so I hope you remembered that screen several pages ago. Oops, you got the wrong ones, no potion for you.
Day 2, you paid more attention to the recipes, and got enough ingredients for a potion, yay, one minor transform done. But you have to go to bed early because you spent too much time walking around the castle.
Day 3, you're asked to go do a M/M scene for no readily apparent reason. At least you can skip it. Maybe one more transform if you remembered the right ingredients.
Day 4, you're sent to a forest, have to sit through like 40 pages of dialogue for some reason first. The forest has a bunch of "combat" minigames, and apparently you breeze through them because all this combat is much easier than walking around the castle because it doesn't dent your energy bar at all. And you get like 12 potions worth of ingredients in a single day instead of the "maybe 1 if you're lucky" from the daily vault.
Day 5, end of content.

Also, all the monsters in the forest are constantly belittling you for how feminine you've become after several weeks (on day 4) and pointing out various body features that you don't have because you've at best had two transforms at this point. What?

Ok, I know it's a sandbox and you can take longer and do more transforms before you go to the forest if you want, but the game just doesn't seem to take any of that into account. I know it's early days but still.

I'm also very confused by the tone of everyone constantly belittling and humiliating the Prince for starting on the path to becoming a ruling Queen in a matriarchal society where only women can rule, and expecting that role to be submissive. This just doesn't make sense. Especially as the current Queen seems the exact opposite of all of that.

Right? It feels like there are three different people writing this game with three different perspectives.

 

[ffive]

v0.0.5

A small suggestion about the game's UI:



Leaving aside that, as you can see, it doesn't handle smaller resolutions to well and results in overleap, there's unnecessary redundancy in having the MC's portrait effectively shown twice.

I'd suggest removing the half-portrait and use that extra space for the stats, so it results in something like this instead:



This way you also get a bit more room for the current objectives, etc.

Can also swap the left/right panes around, if the goal is for the MC's image to have more focus.

edit: also, the game seems severely bugged -- even before you perform any transformations both the MC and the NPCs are acting like he's already undergone multiple transformations. E.g.



Dude is literally drinking his first potion ever. And right before it he's talking how the guards and other people are reacting to his changed appearance. And even earlier when taking a dump in the bathroom or taking a bath he was constantly spouting lines about his body acting different from before and getting feminine urges. This is on freshly started game in the current build, so it's not like some bug from old save or anything.

 

[lexxus]

So just checking. Is this still a sexless dud?

 

[Larsung]

no rattings so far?

 

[Nymphonomicon]

I'm rather confused at the pacing in this game.

Day 1, you get told to grab three ingredients from the vault, but it doesn't show you the recipes while you're in the vault so I hope you remembered that screen several pages ago. Oops, you got the wrong ones, no potion for you.
Day 2, you paid more attention to the recipes, and got enough ingredients for a potion, yay, one minor transform done. But you have to go to bed early because you spent too much time walking around the castle.
Day 3, you're asked to go do a M/M scene for no readily apparent reason. At least you can skip it. Maybe one more transform if you remembered the right ingredients.
Day 4, you're sent to a forest, have to sit through like 40 pages of dialogue for some reason first. The forest has a bunch of "combat" minigames, and apparently you breeze through them because all this combat is much easier than walking around the castle because it doesn't dent your energy bar at all. And you get like 12 potions worth of ingredients in a single day instead of the "maybe 1 if you're lucky" from the daily vault.
Day 5, end of content.

Also, all the monsters in the forest are constantly belittling you for how feminine you've become after several weeks (on day 4) and pointing out various body features that you don't have because you've at best had two transforms at this point. What?

Ok, I know it's a sandbox and you can take longer and do more transforms before you go to the forest if you want, but the game just doesn't seem to take any of that into account. I know it's early days but still.

I'm also very confused by the tone of everyone constantly belittling and humiliating the Prince for starting on the path to becoming a ruling Queen in a matriarchal society where only women can rule, and expecting that role to be submissive. This just doesn't make sense. Especially as the current Queen seems the exact opposite of all of that.

The dialogue and NPC interactions need a lot of work. I found some situations assumed you were a mostly femboy or mostly a boy. One amusing scenario saw me finding an early-game NPC on Day 50-something that the writer clearly intended you to meet while still male and she forced me to pleasure her with my no longer existing penis.

 

[nexisphere99]

The dialogue and NPC interactions need a lot of work. I found some situations assumed you were a mostly femboy or mostly a boy. One amusing scenario saw me finding an early-game NPC on Day 50-something that the writer clearly intended you to meet while still male and she forced me to pleasure her with my no longer existing penis.

I agree with you that. Some NPC characters in initial release are bit unrelevant to the current story arcs. When I get time I will fix those. Currently I am focusing on main story line.

 

[Bearclaw01234]

I also found that the quest to go to the Northland Forest triggers way too early. I had only just done my first potion, & the quest dialog talked about the MC already being fully feminine while I was still male. Nothing mattered being male in it.. so it seems that the quest either needs to be set to trigger at a much later time or the dialog needs to changed to match a male MC.

Maybe have the dialog changed to match a male MC, then when the MC is fully female, have the quest trigger a second time with the dialog matched to a female MC, so that it can be shown in the way it is obviously meant to. Currently, it's just confusing & greatly breaks immersion.

 

[GothBnuuy]

Sadly, it looks like you have to lose the penis if you want to progress the story. My next objective says I should speak with Veletia, but she says come back when you have a vagina

 

[Barrett74]

ok severial things i have noticed, not for sure if anyone else has had this problem, when it comes to this issue, first after doing the northern woods thing. your sent to valentia for new sessions issue is your not female enough to so therefore you get the message come back when you have breasts, even when totally female you still get the red flag saying you still dont need femal bra or didnt get the panties, when getting the panties you still get the message, either you still dont need a bra or you didnt get the panties, come back when you have breasts along with the current objective of new sessions with valentia. bra doesnt fit correct with female slim body with "E" size tits, Purple outfit doesnt seem to fit correctly with "D" size tits and above. Top wear 4 doesnt fit correctly with female slim body. if wandering around and end up talking to maera, path to head to the forest resets and cant be completed. therefore objective stays on investigate north forest.

 

[Bearclaw01234]

ok severial things i have noticed, not for sure if anyone else has had this problem, when it comes to this issue, first after doing the northern woods thing. your sent to valentia for new sessions issue is your not female enough to so therefore you get the message come back when you have breasts, even when totally female you still get the red flag saying you still dont need femal bra or didnt get the panties, when getting the panties you still get the message, either you still dont need a bra or you didnt get the panties, come back when you have breasts along with the current objective of new sessions with valentia. bra doesnt fit correct with female slim body with "E" size tits, Purple outfit doesnt seem to fit correctly with "D" size tits and above. Top wear 4 doesnt fit correctly with female slim body. if wandering around and end up talking to maera, path to head to the forest resets and cant be completed. therefore objective stays on investigate north forest.

The pic valentia 2, shows what ye have to do: ask for female underwear, then on the next visit ye will get a button to ask for a bra. The red lettered warning stays on there even after ye get the panty and bra (as far as i've seen).

 

[StaverBoar]

ingredients listed for first transformation in dialog do not lead to any potion
Moonpetal extract velmorian honey Eversilk thread.

Muscular to lean leg transformation triggers reverse of transformation dialog
Velvetfoot Elixir
Waist muscular to lean potion says 2nd transformation
Waistbind elixer

 

[nexisphere99]

ingredients listed for first transformation in dialog do not lead to any potion
Moonpetal extract velmorian honey Eversilk thread.

Muscular to lean leg transformation triggers reverse of transformation dialog
Velvetfoot Elixir
Waist muscular to lean potion says 2nd transformation
Waistbind elixer

I think I know the reason for this. After the creating dialogs between mc and thalara I have updated the potion ingredient heavily to make relevance. So that should have cause this issue. I will fix this in future versions. Thanks for brining this matter