VN Ren'Py Veneta Bay Erotic Stories [v0.2.1.1] [QueenBuz]

[sandredee]

Really liked what I played so far, will never get tired of the dual protagonist idea to carry the plot forward, glad to hear you are taking inspiration in Eva Kiss' works those are great, of course I hope you truly allow Aaron to grow there has been some encouraging signs like being able to increase his charisma during his first conversation with his father but I really enjoy character growth and seeing him grow out of his shell and become a more confident lad will be cool, regarding Lola's route she is already in top of her game she can of course lose charisma stars as we saw when she worked on that shop but beyond that she is enjoying her school life fully there are some threats to that stability like her boyfriend lamely named Chad cheating with the cheerleader or the landowner hoping to exploit her family and perhaps fuck her in exchange of still living there(while I dislike she getting with Aaron's dad cause that would suck for the lad, I entertained the flirting with the redhead dude, so yeah plenty options for Lola), we need more character interactions and more plot really the first release was a small thing but overall left me with a good taste.

I hope I can meet expectations, there is a lot of love and effort involved in this game.

 

[Tunak23]

I hope I can meet expectations, there is a lot of love and effort involved in this game.

You guys are doing great, keep your plans clear and I'm sure we will end up loving the result nevertheless I will give my impressions(and hopes) when I can.

 

[Viet9999]

Next Update — Version 0.1.1 is coming!



Hey everyone! Just dropping by to let you know that the 0.1.1 update for Veneta Bay Erotic Stories now has a release date:
✅ Tuesday (July 2) or Wednesday (July 3) for all paying members
And Saturday (July 6) for everyone else here on Patreon


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What’s new this time

This is a small story update, but an important one: we’ll wrap up Lola’s chapter, showing all the consequences of whether she did (or didn’t) get the rent money.
Bug fixes, some writing tweaks, and smoother dialogue flow.
And something many of you asked for: most of the NSFW art has been redone or retouched, within the limits I have right now, to match a more unified visual style. It’s not perfect yet, but I’m putting in the effort to make everything feel more consistent and polished!


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️ Next chapter: I want your input!

The next chapter will bring:

Aaron’s choice of extracurricular activity

And a beach party with plenty of choices, surprises, and new paths to follow.


So tell me: Who do you want to see more of? Which character should have more spotlight?

Drop your ideas in the comments!
Your feedback helps shape the whole story.



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Thank you so much for supporting and believing in this project.
Let’s make Veneta Bay Erotic Stories something truly special — together!

XoXo Queen Buz

 

[Amogusamogusamogus]

Yeah, just like movies are a bunch of frames per second. Weird how humans turn visuals into stories, huh?

So literal static images for you are same as videos? Got it.

 

[sandredee]

So literal static images for you are same as videos? Got it.

Not me. Science says videos are sequences of images shot simultaneously.

 

[Sossse]

Not me. Science says videos are sequences of images shot simultaneously.

pls stop feeding the obvious troll

 

[bamachine]

Looks promising but will let it get a few more updates before I try it out, to see if I might be interested in supporting it. I have a limited budget and need a bit more content to see if it interests me enough.

 

[herrderr75]

That's the first time I've seen a game with an update that lasted less than 20 seconds.

 

[Look-see]

gave it a quick try and this game is probably not for me

first cant change the mc's names.

second minigames aren't optional.

third in order to avoid being taken advantage of i have to make choices in the shop i wouldnt normally go with in order to make the amount of money needed. so feels like i have to make Lola more flirty than i want. honestly it feels like if you dont wanna suck some dudes dick to pay off your dads debt even though you dont have any money it should be taken out on the dad. naybe they beat his ass or not and you could get to keep the money.

fourth. your not given a choice on how to interact with BF. no choice not to kiss or to kiss it just happens for example.

fifth. i dont care for other peoples sex lives that arent the MC(s). instead of choosing to spy or not spy. would be more interesting to prevent them from having sex entirely. at the moment it basically just skips over the scene.

 

[Crowangel]

sandredee Love the art work my only gripe is i pref to rename the main MC to feel a bit more immersion in the tale.. any chance this can be added please... (yes i know we can go into the files and change etc etc as often told but id sooner ask for it an official way)

 

[YogSothoth1982]

Can we make it so that the only one who has sex and romances the LIs (or any girl) is the male MC?

 

[Joratox]

Can we make it so that the only one who has sex and romances the LIs (or any girl) is the male MC?

Hah, didn't take too long for the weird requests to come around. Like dude, do you go into a pizza joint and ask them to only serve pepperoni pizza because you personally dislike the other flavors ? SMH

 

[Joratox]

I left a rating, but I want to touch up on some points of feedback/improvement areas.

1. Others have pointed it out, but I'll say it again since it's important, there should be a name change option. At least the first name if not the last name too. Lots of people self immerse into stories like this and it's not a difficult thing to provide for them.
2. There are few grammar errors or translation ones. For ex: there's the part where Chad and Vivi come to the locker room and there's Portuguese on screen (Voz feminina, etc).
3. I saw there were fixes done on the art from the first version, it's a good thing to notice and keep working on that.
4. There were some sex sounds added and it's a very good thing that you did separate volume tracks for it, people have different tastes, some don't like them and this way you can turn them off and still have music playing. If there's something to improve there, you could put the sex sounds on a loop, to make them last longer, instead of having them cut off after a few seconds.
5. Since it's a multiple protagonist story, the "cheating" tag should suffice when there are paths to do that, but again...people are weird and have wildly different tastes, so it might help to put the netorare or swinging tags if they apply in the future. You will avoid some comment wars here by doing that, although you will still have them, at least that will alleviate the issue a bit.
6. I personally like minigames, but you'll see a lot of people avoiding games that have them, so you should think of a system/option to make them skippable. Maybe add some incentives to play/win them, like for example the 1v1 volleyball between Lola and Vivi could have a 20$ bet on it and winning that could help with the rent situation, giving you the option to not take tables from Star and still not have to
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   Thanks for the game and GL with the development, I'll keep an eye on it and maybe support in the future if you are consistent with work/releases. Cheers

 

[Look-see]

Hah, didn't take too long for the weird requests to come around. Like dude, do you go into a pizza joint and ask them to only serve pepperoni pizza because you personally dislike the other flavors ? SMH

seemed more like he was asking if it's possible to do a playthrough as such.

essentially can we make choices where we avoid the female MC banging dudes. and only focus on the Male MC?

so far we can. although we cant prevent her from completely avoiding physical interactions with other dudes.

 

[sandredee]

Looks promising but will let it get a few more updates before I try it out, to see if I might be interested in supporting it. I have a limited budget and need a bit more content to see if it interests me enough.

I hope you give the game a chance, even if I can't be a supporter, being a player is already incredible for me.

 

[sandredee]

That's the first time I've seen a game with an update that lasted less than 20 seconds.

I'm sorry the update wasn't what you expected; it's really short, especially for those who managed to pay the rent. But Chapter 2 will be coming soon with more playable content.

 

[sandredee]

gave it a quick try and this game is probably not for me

first cant change the mc's names.

second minigames aren't optional.

third in order to avoid being taken advantage of i have to make choices in the shop i wouldnt normally go with in order to make the amount of money needed. so feels like i have to make Lola more flirty than i want. honestly it feels like if you dont wanna suck some dudes dick to pay off your dads debt even though you dont have any money it should be taken out on the dad. naybe they beat his ass or not and you could get to keep the money.

fourth. your not given a choice on how to interact with BF. no choice not to kiss or to kiss it just happens for example.

fifth. i dont care for other peoples sex lives that arent the MC(s). instead of choosing to spy or not spy. would be more interesting to prevent them from having sex entirely. at the moment it basically just skips over the scene.

Indeed, the game might not be for you. Veneta Bay Erotic Stories is a game that aims to delve into the sex lives of most of the characters through the eyes of Aaron and Lola. I'm sorry it's not what you expected, but it's impossible to make something that pleases me and everyone else at the same time.

 

[sandredee]

Can we make it so that the only one who has sex and romances the LIs (or any girl) is the male MC?

At the beginning of the story she has a boyfriend, but she only gets sexually involved with any guy, if the player wants.

 

[Sossse]

At the beginning of the story she has a boyfriend, but she only gets sexually involved with any guy, if the player wants.

alright, time to make aaron the gigachad he knows he can be

 

[nhnf85]

Indeed, the game might not be for you. Veneta Bay Erotic Stories is a game that aims to delve into the sex lives of most of the characters through the eyes of Aaron and Lola. I'm sorry it's not what you expected, but it's impossible to make something that pleases me and everyone else at the same time.

The multiple protagonists was already a red flag, time for the ignore button.