- Nov 11, 2017
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Review of Ep.1 [Demo]
Too short to have much of an overall opinion
quick feedback:
Too short to have much of an overall opinion
quick feedback:
- english has holes in it, the grammatical errors give a less than immersive read
- polished rendering with good lighting
- almost every render is live3d
- smooth animation
- clipping in groin and pants when MC is writhing in pain
- all the women are attractive and have nice bodies but look similar, from the same model face
- subtle use of audio
- go easy on the parallax/screen shake, it's too wobbly esp. when Rachel arrives in beginning. it's giving me nausea
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