- Jan 7, 2019
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Some feedback:
- Great art and animation. No critique there.
- Don't force the player to sleep, give them consequences for not sleeping.
- Same thing with locking the player out of the journalism/non-slut options upon starting prostitution. Make it a consequence, rather than just locking players out of content. You write and draw all these scenes and then you lock the player out of them, for what? Multiple playthroughs? This isn't baldur's gate 3.
- Some form of auto-save should be implemented if you want to keep these 'game over' scenarios. Or return the player back to the choice.
- The sex scenes are WAY too wordy. I appreciate the creative writing, but you're making a game for people to get off. Having one sex scene contain (what seems to be) over a thousand words of the girl reminiscing some high school trauma seems crazy for this kind of content.
- Sex scenes need some all-skip/art only option, they take way too long to even skip through currently (related to point before).
- If there's unreleased content, it should be labeled as such. Right now it's not clear if something is inaccessible due to stats or due to it being unfinished.