Softys

Member
Feb 1, 2018
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So which version is working? QSP or Twine? I checked Twine and I can't find menu or any options during the game. Also in prison your fine grows every day instead of lowering, when you fight off other inmates 15 gems is added to the fine, is it normal?
EDIT: Looks like twine version is unplayable, maybe just in Firefox, not sure. I can't put on clothes or use any menus. ( 0.8.0 )
EDIT2: Okay it does work but only if internet connection is enabled. Is it loading anything from the web?
 
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somebodynobody

Engaged Member
May 11, 2017
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Vicindo. Html

Small changes.

Text should have better separation and maybe coloration the monotone of it is very hard to read.

Images should match your character gender. Like having Mai from yugioh be grabbed if you are male at the beginning is weird.

A mention of if you click images they will get larger.

Being html having large swathes on left and right not having anything is weird.

Lots of wrong grammar, word use, etc. " the swiftness of their swimming something to behind." behind should be behold.

$swamphorsename wanders the temple

Failed to load resource: net::ERR_FILE_NOT_FOUND img/hell/orgy10.jpg

Tracking Prevention blocked access to storage for https://fonts.gstatic(dot)com/s/ebgaramond/v30/SlGUmQSNjdsmc35JDF1K5GR1SDk.woff2.

Fooling with Lu in hut doesn't change stamina

Needs more feedback on when you level, get skill points, etc.

Also needs a lot of change up in the sex scene dialogue since it will get stale fast.

stripping in onsen doesn't remind you to put clothes back on before leaving

city is $AvedonGarrison-$AvedonCrime%

Bill, start peeling potatoes! She's staying for dinner.</p>

Prostitute in MC town Pussy sex
Error: <<if>>: bad conditional expression in <<if>> clause: Unexpected end of input
<<if $race is "Goblin" and ($sexname is "Drugged Goblin" or $sexname is "Goblin">>

The prostitute race should really stay the same through the images, a catgirl becoming a human is odd.

If you have the detonation thing and just click hive it is a soft lock.

Need to be able to just drop items you don't want or need. Duplicates like multiple of same armor, etc.

Used bust down, not sure if had no bust when was used.
Error: <<run>>: bad evaluation: Cannot read properties of undefined (reading 'bust')
<<run consumableEffect($currentItem.name)>>

Error: the passage "spiderden" does not exist

goblin caves living area explore is full of errors.
 

Daugorn

New Member
Oct 16, 2018
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Encountering the werewolf blocks you completely. You get stuck on the werewolf charges at you screen and then the only way to get out of it is to reload a save.
 
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