In comments people asking you about way MC will be corrupted and you answer that it's still in planning stage. Judging by short intro you want to use her social inexperience in communication.
I grew up in very strict, religious and hypocritical family (that is why now I am grim cynical atheist), and knew many girls from same surroundings, and some of them when they were out of family control turned into total turbo sluts.
When kids grow under constant despotic control their sexuality not developing with healthy speed, so when they face real world without their parents they can be affected by any dominant person who will take place of "parental figure".
That is why I think that inclusion of "kind" granny is a good plot step. If You describe Lily's family as conservative and strict, it will give You way to explain Lily's total lack of knowledge about sex and her readiness to see old people as authority.
How I see further story development:
Fuck, written too much again. Sorry for this idea vomit, too much coffee and bad news, wanted to help somebody. One last thing, don't listen too much of Patreon subs and commenters like Me, do what You like and want, good luck and stay safe.
P.S. i would keep writing shit but need to stop, so this is last last thing, add rich old asshole who searches for personal fuckdoll, for trophy wife ending.
I grew up in very strict, religious and hypocritical family (that is why now I am grim cynical atheist), and knew many girls from same surroundings, and some of them when they were out of family control turned into total turbo sluts.
When kids grow under constant despotic control their sexuality not developing with healthy speed, so when they face real world without their parents they can be affected by any dominant person who will take place of "parental figure".
That is why I think that inclusion of "kind" granny is a good plot step. If You describe Lily's family as conservative and strict, it will give You way to explain Lily's total lack of knowledge about sex and her readiness to see old people as authority.
How I see further story development:
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Fuck, written too much again. Sorry for this idea vomit, too much coffee and bad news, wanted to help somebody. One last thing, don't listen too much of Patreon subs and commenters like Me, do what You like and want, good luck and stay safe.
P.S. i would keep writing shit but need to stop, so this is last last thing, add rich old asshole who searches for personal fuckdoll, for trophy wife ending.