It's accurate: the upcoming is still not there. Not sure about voyeurism, don't remember, otherwise, aside from thematic stuff, all current tags have been seen in the game.
Thank you for your very comprehensive replay ... your talk about the story of this game and I really appreciate the exchange of opinions ON TOPIC
For this paragraph I reply that I am waiting for the promised and not yet active tags ...
To be clear, I find the pacing has not been too slow. Generally the structure of a good story has been followed to a T. It's the execution that's the problem; there's probably only one convincing scene (and I might be positively biased because of the outfit and nature of the fetish_ it's where she's working behind the bar). I do not believe the struggle, I did not feel the resistance, I do not know how it was conquered. No character made the impact of its role on me (I've reviewed it in an earlier release, haven't changed my mind).
I played EP 3 and I knew right away that the developer did not want to delve into the introspective view of the main girl ... but instead wanted to describe the places where the story takes place ...
I find this approach of writing in an illustrated story very wrong because a few pictures are enough to describe the world in which the story takes place this is a good way to write a text-based book but certainly not suitable for a visual novella...
personally I prefer stories where you get straight to the point by letting illustrations describe the location and facial expressions describe the hidden emotions of the characters...
only a textbook has to dwell on descriptive aspects in words
I'm mostly annoyed of how the decisions are made. We're here to see a story of corruption, through temptation or pressure. Dev decided that the critical moments should be chosen by us_ fair enough, makes it interactive, makes us play her role rahter than the role of her corruptor, alll director's choice and matter of taste... the issue there is simply I am neither tempted (that there's a win for my gaming or that the character actually desires something) nor am I forced by a consequence (like a bad end for example) or other circumstance to make that choice of "transforming"... )The result is essentially that I break the immersion and decide to click the button that shows me scenes; I am not making a choice in a story, just clicking open...
I agree...with this and that is why before download again the game i'll wait for some of my favourite tags to be included
I've similar problems with Lisa's Investigation (I see you're a fan). There there's far more content, but that had a negative effect on me. I'm still keeping up with this VN and actually read, whereas I stopped playing Lisa since before the first party. Bad build up is one thing, adding an avalnche of confusin content to it is another.
Lisa was great up to the first part (season1) the new part2 is confused you are right but that game has the merit of having a lot of content.... is I downloaded it when the party was about to start...there are not too many unnecessary descriptions there...the dialogues to lead you to choose and decide to open all the scenes...
for the record I don't like games where making a choice means losing content...
and I'll give you another example of a poorly written game....
Mila AI... in this game the choices preclude you from gradually exploring the different paths...
basically if you choose the NTR path you preclude yourself from exploring the NTS path... in my opinion netorare and netorase are two very complementary fetishes and can coexist in the story by changing soo some dialogues
I really love LTI and i think there is still room to back the story in a very good one!
if you think about it Lisa Total Investigation is the exact opposite of this game with the first chapter being made in less than 1 year... on the other hand Village Slut Transformation which despite being in its 8th episode still hasn't taken off and it's been almost 2 years
this tells me that the author of Lisa had clear ideas of the story while here, the author seems to want to hide the meaning which is clear only in the title he chose...here the developer is tergiversating
The Title is perfect!!
One reason for optimism here is there if the text is rewritten it might become alright. Drastic change (in code and art) is not really necessary.
.. rewrite??? this meaning that this game will be delayed
the best way is to speed up the tags that aren't in the story yet...because it's obvious from your critique that the author doesn't know how to stretch the “broth” anymore...he's stretching the wine with water and the customers in his restaurant are noticing...if he keeps this up he's going to disappoint his entire potential audience IMO
I do still recommend a playthrough, as it shines here (vanity exhibitionism) and there (a groping scene), while still not being overly long to make you lose your patience.
I totally agree... but as you can see I lost patience because I realized that the story would take years to progress...but the more time passes...the worse it will be for the developer.
The title is perfect...but the execution of the work is lacking
I don't like games where the choices are; see the sex scene or skip it....
these kinds of stories only demonstrate the inability to create intermediate paths where the girl chooses to get laid and then eventually repents and goes back to pure,,, or to take the paths of sadomasochism, or engagement and then cheating on the boyfriend or deciding to create a stable relationship there always has to be a way for the protagonist to redeem himself from his mistakes or to take revenge for the wrongs done to him.
For example, a girl employed in a bar might even become the owner by having the boss arrested by whom she got laid by agreeing to do it for the customers
Thank you for talking about this game with me
I'm just trying to help... but i will wait for the other tag before write my definitive overview
) on this pirate website. Now I need another three days for therapy and a bunch of new braincells. Anyways, working on the next update afterwards, byeee. xoxo"
