Does Caly start straight and discover her bisexuality or was she always bisexual? I may have missed some dialog, but I'm not sure if it's ever clearly stated. I suppose it doesn't matter, but still I'm curious from a narrative perspective.
I think looking back I wish there was more a gradual unveiling of her sexuality in general. I know you aren't making a corruption game, but it would be nice to see her react more to the really exotic partners she has and most likely will have. I'll never tell you how to write your own game I'm just simply hoping that when she ends up getting with the guy with a canine cock that she has some kind of feelings about that.