- Dec 7, 2021
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Lmao! You're harsh, but also being constructive by explaining where you're coming from so I'd argue that your opnion is just as important as those praising this game.That remains to be seen. I couldn't resist my curiosity and checked the reworked scene in question... It's still bad. Worse, even, if you've read the original scene, because this one basically just adds one more round of the exact same thing that was bad in the first place-- It still lacks the pacing and flow of previous scenes, and feels plastered together in a hurry, as if forced to do so.
Instead of a one and done, now we get a two and done... Not that two rounds are bad, that is not what i meant at all. Even a single round would be fantastic if it were to be a lenghty, well written scene. But what we got, once again, is a literalshitnothing burger! The "extra round" is there just for the sake of being there and adds nothing to the plot, because nothing happens! There's no effective dirty talk, there's no fondling, there's no making out, no sense of actual cuckoldry happening! Jack might as well have been a dildo, because there's nothing going on; cock in, pump it a few times, cock out... Change condom, cock in, pump it a few times, cock out... That's it! End of scene! No spice, no life, no soul. And let me say this again! Jackie boy still didn't even get a tit out (or, at least, did nothing to her tits, since they magically came out this time)!
It's the exact same scene that everyone was calling trash and made Saxonado lose patrons, just with an added round of nothing happening. Might as well copy paste the exact same scene, because that is pretty much what was done anyway. I'll point it out again: Amazing build up, extremely hot teasing scenes- the one in the club being one of the better ones I've seen in the genre. All that for the first actual cuckold sex to be one of the worse, most bland, milquetoast missionary sex I've ever seen in the genre- novels included. The dialogue is terrible! Everything that was added feels out of place in a way that I can't even begin to describe.
Seriously, if the author/developer thought that making jack say "I'm gonna fuck your wife multiple times!" then adding an extra round and the bit about them cumming over her would fix the scene, then they have no idea why the scene was bad and disliked on the first place, and I have no hopes at all for future scenes.
Might as well not even have bothered to "fix it", because what was done here is trying to make up to an angry customer who was served a meal with a literal block of shit on top, by serving them a meal with two literal blocks of shit on top.
So, yeah... If the "good stuff" the game is getting to is more of this, then no... I don't think people are gonna be drawn back, nor do I think it's gonna attract new people. A game that sells itself as being Netorase and delivers that pathetic of a sex scene Isn't gonna be very popular with Netorase fans. Go search for the best sellers and most read novels and doujinshis centered around Netorase and see what is it that actually sells.
For me, I'm here for the art and the build up. Those things are what make the scenes hot for me, not the actual scenes itself. Like, IW Hana's build ups before scenes was godly. This game started off that way as well with the club scene, but it's gradually lost it's ability to create captivating and gripping feeling of emotional anxiety from the MC's perspective imo.
I agree that the Jack sex scene can't be saved, they'd need to redo the entire update, because not only was the sex lame, the lead in and build up to it was as well.
I think the best way forward is to not get discouraged. Don't get caught up with an L, and just take in feedback and apply what you've learned into the next story instead. The game is still great overall, and I look forward to what you do with it.