VN Ren'Py Vulgar Reverie [v0.11a] [Saxonado Studios]

[Aenys_Faelin]

It seems to me that the issue could be at least alleviated with a simple rewrite. She could be saying things like: "Wait, Brandon, not yet" and "We can do this later, OK?"

That happened just nobody has posted 0.11a lol

 

[Yougiblack]

That happened just nobody has posted 0.11a lol

Wait he rewrote the scene why so?

 

[quandin]

I really feel like some people should get banned from reviewing games

 

[deviousstorm]

Just for the sake of discussion, do you really not understand those people's perspective? Her exact lines:

am "B-Brandon, stop...!"
am "W-We can't...!"
am "...I-I'm a married woman...!"
am "I-I can't do this to my husba-"

And she's making this face.
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If her looking pained and telling him to stop while she tries to hold him back doesn't mean "stop", then what does? This sounds like saying "no means yes", which people nowadays know better than to think that. Until she notices her husband and decides to turn it into a play, the scene looks indistinguishable from an assault scene.

Despite her being the supposed mafia princess, she hasn't really exercised that at all since the Geist situation. She's been more and more submissive, and has done nothing to talk back when they insult her or her husband. Not allowing disrespect is one of the key traits of mafioso types, and she just has not acted like that at all. And as for being physically dangerous, she hasn't exercised that either. Plus, Brandon is jacked. He could 100% overpower her if he wanted. I think the mafia princess angle is cool, but it feels largely forgotten in the story.

nah you correct here. It could be changed to be less rapey.

 

[dankselz]

honestly, gooners see one BBC in the game and it's all "downhill" from there

u right but don't act all high and mighty we're all gooners here bro

 

[Terry Zimmerman]

It seems to me that the issue could be at least alleviated with a simple rewrite. She could be saying things like: "Wait, Brandon, not yet" and "We can do this later, OK?"

Ok, that wouldnt be so bad. Just replacing the stop with a wait is enough. The whole set up of the scene it was obvious to me that it was planned from the beggining. She has been teasing Brandon this last two days, gives to his advances (flirting and touching and looking at his dick), follows him to the (I think they say its male, but could be wrong) locker room. Says "I cant do this to my husband" like?? What does she mean by that? I think at that point she is roleplaying as a cheating wife overcame with lust. Brandon literally says she could get away at any point, but it is obvious she wants it too and that he wouldnt stop her. She is moaning. She is reluctangly giving to his advances, but is just acting. She is roleplaying as a cheating wife. She literally smiles as she sees the mc and then does the sluttiest face and tells him (at least in the humilliation/sub path or whatv) yeah, its true, my husband cant satisfy me. Like come on people, how many signs do you need to get that ame planed everything since the begining, she was just waiting for the mc to find her and get off from his reaction.

 

[Terry Zimmerman]

And at the end of the day, its a porn set up for a porn game. Filming someone without their consent (like the guy in the hotel) is a shitty thing to do in real life, but is a hot scene anyways if you dont think too hard about it.

 

[BangB420]

u right but don't act all high and mighty we're all gooners here bro

no shit sherlock

 

[dankselz]

no shit sherlock

corny

 

[cryfane]

Just for the sake of discussion, do you really not understand those people's perspective? Her exact lines:

am "B-Brandon, stop...!"
am "W-We can't...!"
am "...I-I'm a married woman...!"
am "I-I can't do this to my husba-"

And she's making this face.
View attachment 4577366

If her looking pained and telling him to stop while she tries to hold him back doesn't mean "stop", then what does? This sounds like saying "no means yes", which people nowadays know better than to think that. Until she notices her husband and decides to turn it into a play, the scene looks indistinguishable from an assault scene.

Despite her being the supposed mafia princess, she hasn't really exercised that at all since the Geist situation. She's been more and more submissive, and has done nothing to talk back when they insult her or her husband. Not allowing disrespect is one of the key traits of mafioso types, and she just has not acted like that at all. And as for being physically dangerous, she hasn't exercised that either. Plus, Brandon is jacked. He could 100% overpower her if he wanted. I think the mafia princess angle is cool, but it feels largely forgotten in the story.

You don't know what acting is (or Ammy is really that good at acting she even made you believe lol)

 

[nidezrel]

You don't know what acting is (or Ammy is really that good at acting she even made you believe lol)

What acting? She only started acting when she saw that the MC arrived. Before that it wasn't acting. The shift in demeanor is extremely clear.

 

[Terry Zimmerman]

What acting? She only started acting when she saw that the MC arrived. Before that it wasn't acting. The shift in demeanor is extremely clear.

She is acting. She followed brandon to the locker room. Brandon literally says she could get away at any moment, but isnt. And she is saying stuff like "I cant do that to my husband". She is acting like a cheating wife. Its the typical cheating wife scenario overcome with lust that gives in to the hot trainers advances. She was just waiting for the mc to show up. She didnt turn the situation when the mc arrived, it was all acting. At the end Brandon gives his number to her to do stuff when the mc is not at home. Brandon thinks she is just a cheater.

 

[nidezrel]

She is acting. She followed brandon to the locker room. Brandon literally says she could get away at any moment, but isnt. And she is saying stuff like "I cant do that to my husband". She is acting like a cheating wife. Its the typical cheating wife scenario overcome with lust that gives in to the hot trainers advances. She was just waiting for the mc to show up. She didnt turn the situation when the mc arrived, it was all acting. At the end Brandon gives his number to her to do stuff when the mc is not at home. Brandon thinks she is just a cheater.

Right, she's been acting in the sense that she's been deceiving him all along, doing these flirty suggestive things that make him think she really is cheating, and hiding the fact that the husband was there today to see it all play out. But the bit wasn't meant to evolve into more than that until the husband arrived, and that's why she's reacting like that. She was just trying to get him in the right place and stall for time, and then she was gonna turn on the proper cheating wife act, but she underestimated how her signals were being received, and he came on much stronger than she intended, making for a bit of an tense situation, that looks kinda scary from the perspective of the MC who had no idea what she was up to. That's how it reads like to me.

Perhaps discussion about this scene has run its course. Hard to say much more with the limited information we have, and without seeing her POV of the events. I admit, since we heard Saxy's input on the intent of the scene, I feel like I understand the story less. Now I don't think I understand Amelia's motivations as well anymore, and it's less clear to me what's going on in her head. We'll have to see how the story plays out.

 

[turmio]

Right, she's been acting in the sense that she's been deceiving him all along, doing these flirty suggestive things that make him think she really is cheating, and hiding the fact that the husband was there today to see it all play out. But the bit wasn't meant to evolve into more than that until the husband arrived. She was just trying to get him in the right place and stall for time, and then she was gonna turn on the proper cheating wife act. But she underestimated how her signals were being received, and he came on much stronger than she intended, making for a bit of an tense situation, that looks kinda scary from the perspective of the MC who had no idea what she was up to. That's how it reads like to me.

Perhaps discussion about this scene has run its course. Hard to say much more with the limited information we have, and without seeing her POV of the events. I admit, since we heard Saxy's input on the intent of the scene, I feel like I understand the story less. Now I don't think I understand Amelia's motivations as well anymore, and it's less clear to me what's going on in her head. We'll have to see how the story plays out.

Amelia expected MC to be watching her all the time in the gym. So when she went to locker room with Brandon she assumed MC would follow shortly after. But he missed it and that threw a curveball to her plans. Now she was in pickle, does she just keep stalling, hoping he arrives or do something with Brandon and give MC the details later. But he did arrive so she could proceed as she had planned.

That's the point of Saxy's input. Amelia wanted MC to see her suck off Brandon. If MC didn't arrive she probably would have done something milder.

 

[T20zh]

I left for a few days and I come back WTF happened while I was gone it looks like a warzone

 

[Daedalus965]

Mfs will really be on NTS/NTR threads to blow their mind instead of their load.

 

[HappyCrab]

Amelia expected MC to be watching her all the time in the gym. So when she went to locker room with Brandon she assumed MC would follow shortly after. But he missed it and that threw a curveball to her plans. Now she was in pickle, does she just keep stalling, hoping he arrives or do something with Brandon and give MC the details later. But he did arrive so she could proceed as she had planned.

That's the point of Saxy's input. Amelia wanted MC to see her suck off Brandon. If MC didn't arrive she probably would have done something milder.

Don't wear down your keyboard on that moron's behalf. If someone has the reading comprehension of an overcooked spaghetti noodle, it's not worth it. Let them seethe about "oh it's netorare because so and so...". We all know that line of reason is fucking bullshit. This game describes what it is on the first page: a NETORASE game. Honestly I wish these fucking trolls would just get banned, they ruin these threads by just creating toxicity. Let's collectively ignore them.

 

[luccel]

Right, she's been acting in the sense that she's been deceiving him all along, doing these flirty suggestive things that make him think she really is cheating, and hiding the fact that the husband was there today to see it all play out. But the bit wasn't meant to evolve into more than that until the husband arrived, and that's why she's reacting like that. She was just trying to get him in the right place and stall for time, and then she was gonna turn on the proper cheating wife act, but she underestimated how her signals were being received, and he came on much stronger than she intended, making for a bit of an tense situation, that looks kinda scary from the perspective of the MC who had no idea what she was up to. That's how it reads like to me.

Perhaps discussion about this scene has run its course. Hard to say much more with the limited information we have, and without seeing her POV of the events. I admit, since we heard Saxy's input on the intent of the scene, I feel like I understand the story less. Now I don't think I understand Amelia's motivations as well anymore, and it's less clear to me what's going on in her head. We'll have to see how the story plays out.

 

[deviousstorm]

Don't wear down your keyboard on that moron's behalf. If someone has the reading comprehension of an overcooked spaghetti noodle, it's not worth it. Let them seethe about "oh it's netorare because so and so...". We all know that line of reason is fucking bullshit. This game describes what it is on the first page: a NETORASE game. Honestly I wish these fucking trolls would just get banned, they ruin these threads by just creating toxicity. Let's collectively ignore them.

Yeah i am hopeful sax does more stuff with the trainer. we need more bbc content and I am kind of tired of this half ass criticism on this thread. If its not for you thats okay. Leave a review if you aren't a big fan of the content or you know move on.

I am happy with the game its proobably the best NTS game on the site even with at little content as we have

 

[HappyCrab]

Yeah i am hopeful sax does more stuff with the trainer. we need more bbc content and I am kind of tired of this half ass criticism on this thread. If its not for you thats okay. Leave a review if you aren't a big fan of the content or you know move on.

I am happy with the game its proobably the best NTS game on the site even with at little content as we have

And one of the few in this genre who doesn't use ai to make the art. I think that is worth appreciating. That, and Saxo and Karman being such a small team, makes me wish more people subscribed to their patreon.