- Sep 5, 2022
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It's well done tbh. Though it's nothing new if you're an avid reader. Not only the writer managed to show Geist was being protective of Ammie and being skeptical of MC but he also managed to have MC break the mold of "beta male MC" in porn as well.I'm not bothered by this kind of things honestly.
I liked a lot the whole Geist situation too! It felt realistic that this kind of fetish didn't get understood by Geist since it's very niche. I'm sure he will get back, now understanding how all of this works and that they love each other a lot, and he'll play along with them.
And personally, I don't really like those beta MC anyway, so I'm glad the dev doesn't go for it. I just like the immoral aspect of NTR.
But welp, since people used to worse writing already. So most of them didn't catch that and jumped the gun on the dev.