VN Ren'Py Vulgar Reverie [v0.14] [Saxonado Studios]

[BL45T]

For people who are afraid its going to NTR territory I will say this, if you fear its going there then the dev is doing it right. Not because its going to become NTR but because the NTS is done so well you start doubting it.

 

[Keko22]

For people who are afraid its going to NTR territory I will say this, if you fear its going there then the dev is doing it right. Not because its going to become NTR but because the NTS is done so well you start doubting it.

Didn't stop her from having fun though...

She didn't have fun at all lmao it showed in the first sex scene she came but rather than that most of the other sex scenes for her husband enjoyment as she mentioned that her being so tuned on was because he was watching because she knew very well it can come crampling all over their heads when she tells him about the big news of her family

 

[Keko22]

There must be a plot twist if they adding the mafia arc how can you include a barista husband who doesn't know how to fight or kill in a place where she will be the head of the family and all other enemies of the family will try killing her how can be protect her?

 

[Suntar]

She didn't have fun at all lmao it showed in the first sex scene she came but rather than that most of the other sex scenes for her husband enjoyment as she mentioned that her being so tuned on was because he was watching because she knew very well it can come crampling all over their heads when she tells him about the big news of her family

You didn't get my point. I responded to a guy saying MC wouldn't have been able to enjoy the Brandon stuff if he knew about Mafia plot.
I was insinuating that was stupid, because the knowledge didn't stop Ammie from having fun, so why should it stop MC?

Of course Ammie had fun. She came a bunch of times. Sure, it was mostly because MC was watching, but again, Mafia knowledge didn't stop her fun.

 

[Xill]

For people who are afraid its going to NTR territory I will say this, if you fear its going there then the dev is doing it right. Not because its going to become NTR but because the NTS is done so well you start doubting it.

I'm sorry but, if people fear that this is going to NTR territory then people just ain't reading the text correctly. And the dev isn't doing it right, because that isn't the devs intention at all.

The way I see it, there will be two things going on at once. The mafia arc, and the couples fetish. There will never be a part of the story that goes "oh no honey they're gonna gangrape me now, I'm so sorry, I have to do this." And then the husband watching in horror while getting aroused. That won't happen. No matter how anyone thinks the story will go, you have to keep in mind that the dev will always write it as NTS and never as NTR. So even if there's gangbangs involved, it will happen because the MC and Ame think it's hot and not because "they have to" or because they're in danger.

Of course I could be wrong and the dev might have been lying all this time or they just go crazy and start writing NTR out of the blue, but those are not the facts we have. The facts are, this is an NTS story and that's the premise. When you guys speculate about what could happen then you have to keep those things in mind. So when there's talks about manipulation, or Ame liking it so much that she will get addicted and betray the MC, that's just headcanon, or fanfiction. Speculation needs to make sense.

 

[Hobster]

Can anyone calculate how long it will take until the author's next preview? After checking the author's update schedule, it seems there's roughly a 40-50 day interval between minor version releases. Maybe we'll need to wait another month?This amount of content isn’t enough for me to explode—I’ll save it for another month.

 

[Adamska]

I'm sorry but, if people fear that this is going to NTR territory then people just ain't reading the text correctly.

I think it's because the dream of this MC is to be the protagonist in an NTR game, but stay together with his wife. I like this MC a lot more, but he gives the vibe of Tats from Indecent Wife Hana. The anxiety and jealousy and not knowing things is specifically what gets this dude off, on both blue and green paths. That's a specific preference that not every reader shares (and repels some).

The couple in this story love it, which makes this NTS, but some readers fantasies put them in control while this MC desires to be out of control. The disappointed readers turn into dehydrated Spongebob, then come here to find something new and vent on the way out. This is the circle of life in NTRS fiction.

 

[Keko22]

You didn't get my point. I responded to a guy saying MC wouldn't have been able to enjoy the Brandon stuff if he knew about Mafia plot.
I was insinuating that was stupid, because the knowledge didn't stop Ammie from having fun, so why should it stop MC?

Of course Ammie had fun. She came a bunch of times. Sure, it was mostly because MC was watching, but again, Mafia knowledge didn't stop her fun.

I think it's because the dream of this MC is to be the protagonist in an NTR game, but stay together with his wife. I like this MC a lot more, but he gives the vibe of Tats from Indecent Wife Hana. The anxiety and jealousy and not knowing things is specifically what gets this dude off, on both blue and green paths. That's a specific preference that not every reader shares (and repels some).

The couple in this story love it, which makes this NTS, but some readers fantasies put them in control while this MC desires to be out of control. The disappointed readers turn into dehydrated Spongebob, then come here to find something new and vent on the way out. This is the circle of life in NTRS fiction.

My friend you are coping so much this is the farthest from cheating did you play the last version after the sex scene when the MC and the wife in the shower She was getting so wet from his dominant reaction telling her that he will fuck the shit out of her and ordering her to kick that trainer out so he can she was so happy about it in the scene and told the Mc after she was so turned on because he was watching that is why she enjoyed it it's the furthest from cheating and I think I like the way that ending scene was different in both the Dom and the Sub I guess they are starting to shape the game about the two routes where in the Dom route he orders her around in the last scene which is perfect

 

[Xill]

I think it's because the dream of this MC is to be the protagonist in an NTR game, but stay together with his wife. I like this MC a lot more, but he gives the vibe of Tats from Indecent Wife Hana. The anxiety and jealousy and not knowing things is specifically what gets this dude off, on both blue and green paths. That's a specific preference that not every reader shares (and repels some).

The couple in this story love it, which makes this NTS, but some readers fantasies put them in control while this MC desires to be out of control. The disappointed readers turn into dehydrated Spongebob, then come here to find something new and vent on the way out. This is the circle of life in NTRS fiction.

At the end of the day it doesn't matter what the MC thinks but what the FMC does because she's the one driving forward all the NTS stuff. She's the one choosing bulls and how and when to fuck them.

 

[norybrg]

I expected more from the update, but ok

 

[Keko22]

At the end of the day it doesn't matter what the MC thinks but what the FMC does because she's the one driving forward all the NTS stuff. She's the one choosing bulls and how and when to fuck them.

Did you play a different game? She never picked one of them except the second guy the other she suggested for the MC and he choose all the timings and what she does lmao or are you playing the Sub route ? Because for me the Dom route he almost choose everything

 

[Xill]

Did you play a different game? She never picked one of them except the second guy the other she suggested for the MC and he choose all the timings and what she does lmao or are you playing the Sub route ? Because for me the Dom route he almost choose everything

Suggestion is the same as picking. Which is what drives the MC to think to himself why she wants these guys. Everyone other than the guy at the beach is someone she chose. The husband just had to agree, but she's obviously doing most of the work.

 

[Keko22]

Suggestion is the same as picking. Which is what drives the MC to think to himself why she wants these guys. Everyone other than the guy at the beach is someone she chose. The husband just had to agree, but she's obviously doing most of the work.

Ya because he wants it nothing more if he says fuck that guy no for him then it's a no simple as that

 

[Adamska]

At the end of the day it doesn't matter what the MC thinks

MC's actions and thought patterns do matter if you want to answer questions about how readers are responding to that perspective.

 

[Xill]

Ya because he wants it nothing more if he says fuck that guy no for him then it's a no simple as that

MC's actions and thought patterns do matter if you want to answer questions about how readers are responding to that perspective.

You both misunderstand what I'm trying to say. When I say it doesn't matter what he thinks, is because the things he thinks are not necessarily true.

Whether this is NTR or NTS depends on Ame's actions and words, not the MC's. We understand this is the case because of how she constantly acts before, during and after the deed. She is constantly playing along. But for some reason people here only pay attention to what the MC says and what he feels even though he himself knows it's all just for his fetish anyway. It's like people only view the sex scene then skip the dialogue after that.

 

[XerxesM_]

can someone share their saved file

 

[Hobster]

Guys ,when I launch the game, nothing shows up, all white, what happened

 

[Hmong-sama]

Waited a few updates and it was well worth the wait! That was hot ngl. OMG Amelia!
But I feel like the next few updates is going to be more of a serious one. Maybe some scenes for MC and Ame at most.

 

[Adhdclassic]

Amelia sex is fine and all but I want to see how DEV incorporates the mafia into the story. Will do things for the mafia with her husbands blessings.

 

[nidezrel]

Is this it? I mean... It wasn't bad, but... All that hype for... this? Very mid update. Mid banter, mid teasing, bellow average sex scenes that were EXTREMELY short, in fact, shorter than the teasing scenes from the earlier updates.

The writing for those scenes was very poor, to say the least. Felt like a "well, let's get this out of the way so that we can move on" kinda scene.

People saying "Saxy is cooking!" probably can't even go to the gym without creaming their underpants, because seriously... Even though we finally got the long awaited sex scene with the coach, there was nothing hot about it. Actually, I think this is the worse I've seen the pacing and text for any update, so far.

It felt like watching someone rip apart the concept of "show, don't tell". Because we are told multiple times Ammie is getting fucked hard, intensely and losing her mind from pleasure... But we don't actually see that happening, because the author doesn't show us, he only tells us it's happening. And then you press enter a couple of times and the sex scene is over, without even giving you enough time to get a hard-on. Lmao.

You're telling me the jacked personal trainer who just so happens to present himself as a fuckboy could only mannage that? 2 positions in bed for what seemed like a couple of minutes, then a slightly longer and somehwat "spicier" (hair grabbing and spanking) scene in the bathroom with only silhouetes?

Again, there was no kissing, no breast sucking, no foreplay, nothing interesting going on. Straight to the bedroom, then straight to sex (very lame sex, at that), pump a couple of times, aaaaaand done! What an absolute shitshow of a sex scene.

And what the fuck is up with the dialogue? "ahhmm", "uhhmmmf", "aaargh", "fuck!"... We grade schoolers now? The fucking AI NTR games being spammed on this site have better dialogue for the sex scenes. For shame!

Great art tho. Karman is the one actually cooking.

I've come to the conclusion that Saxonado can't write sex scenes. The one with the coworker seems to have been a fluke.

Just wanted to say that I personally do not like overly long sex scenes. I think this was pretty much the limit of what I would consider acceptable. If I like a scene a lot, I'll replay it. I don't want to just be hearing the same canned moans and descriptions for 30 minutes. Of course, for the word count, I think they could've done a lot better. But in terms of length, much more than this would be a problem, imo.