VN Ren'Py Vulgar Reverie [v0.14] [Saxonado Studios]

[Tripfriend]

The pacing problem is one of the reasons for the lack of spice in Brandon's scene. Inserting that after a couple of vanilla scenes and the biggest advance to the story kinda felt distracting. My other problem is that Brandon is boring; he's as Blacked as Blacked can be, and his scene felt like appeasing the obsessed raceplay NTS crowd.
It is kinda weird because the gym and blowjob did have that exciting spice.

 

[nidezrel]

The pacing problem is one of the reasons for the lack of spice in Brandon's scene. Inserting that after a couple of vanilla scenes and the biggest advance to the story kinda felt distracting. My other problem is that Brandon is boring; he's as Blacked as Blacked can be, and his scene felt like appeasing the obsessed raceplay NTS crowd.
Wish is kinda weird because the gym and blowjob did have that exciting spice.

Yeah he kinda feels like just a walking trope, and not a real person.

 

[turmio]

I feel ya. "No impact" really says it well. Maybe it was that they had to rush the art due to the hand/arm injury? It's hard to tell what caused this to be anticlimactic.

I think it stems from her roleplaying as cheating wife which limits mc's presence and their interaction in situations. And additionally she was acting so submissive that she was just going with the flow instead of being in charge of the show. It was hot seeing her be that submissive but the problem is it's not true to her nature. So that combined with the roleplay and the whole thing ends up with a layer of "fakeness".

On top of all that Amelia left to conference only three and half days ago ingame time so the couple's schedule has been quite full since 0.09. It's not major factor but events being so condensed together does create bit of busy atmosphere.

Mafia arc will probably be back to dominant Amelia as she has to emulate her old self as mafioso's daughter. Hopefully she proceeds to sexually torment grunt(s) who is afraid of her and her father.

 

[Fusionzone]

I feel ya. "No impact" really says it well. Maybe it was that they had to rush the art due to the hand/arm injury? It's hard to tell what caused this to be anticlimactic.

Its the writing and pacing. And it's compounding mistakes from pretty much since their vacation. I think the author is good at tease at dirty talk but he doesn't understand the actual appeal of the fetish and that it isn't about her fucking someone so much as her devotion to her husband and her focus on it. People don't like hearing it but the reality is shes enjoying it too much for herself, and the point of the fetish is making porn for him since she's his favorite woman and being both the source of his jealousy as well the one who sooths that very jealousy she caused, all to take him on a roller coaster to turn him on and get him off, and that in turn makes her get off more and better because she is her husband's pleaser first and foremost, even when it's more if a femdom dynamic her goal should be her husband's pleasure and satisfaction. The moment it deviates from that intention and it being demonstrated in the actual writing and not coping out with "it should be assumed", the story of these nts always start to fall off. It's just how it is.

Nobody cares about her sex with Brandon, anyone can go on porn hub and watch exactly the same thing but in HD. The value of the story is the writing and her dynamic with the husband, and it's easier to get in writing in a vn. Nobody cares about the mafia stuff either. It's not me trying to disrespect the author it's just not why people care about the game or about ammie. If he has a vision great and I respect and admire it and hope he follows it through to his satisfaction, just its not gonna turn on a fan of the genre to get random exposition that has nothing to do with nts.

 

[mmm1374]

And the vanilla squad is back at it again

 

[Naira48]

Ok this version felt a lot better since it was fixed but i don't know why the brandon scenes felt so shallow for me absolutely no impact like it was fake one of the only time i felt turned off by watching nts sex

Probably cuz it's still the beginning I guess

 

[Fusionzone]

And the vanilla squad is back at it again

I like vanilla spice i cannot lie. Good pillow talk is hard to find

 

[T20zh]

Ok this version felt a lot better since it was fixed but i don't know why the brandon scenes felt so shallow for me absolutely no impact like it was fake one of the only time i felt turned off by watching nts sex

This is exactly how I felt perfect explanation

 

[Yougiblack]

Question is when will Brandon be their official bull and when will Amelia be gangbanged

 

[mmm1374]

This is exactly how I felt perfect explanation

Do you think there is hope for the future patches or it will be just like this going onward i kinda feel like he is somhow scared to make it impact full like for example the coworker patch that patch felt so good and nice

 

[mok135]

Its the writing and pacing. And it's compounding mistakes from pretty much since their vacation. I think the author is good at tease at dirty talk but he doesn't understand the actual appeal of the fetish and that it isn't about her fucking someone so much as her devotion to her husband and her focus on it. People don't like hearing it but the reality is shes enjoying it too much for herself, and the point of the fetish is making porn for him since she's his favorite woman and being both the source of his jealousy as well the one who sooths that very jealousy she caused, all to take him on a roller coaster to turn him on and get him off, and that in turn makes her get off more and better because she is her husband's pleaser first and foremost, even when it's more if a femdom dynamic her goal should be her husband's pleasure and satisfaction. The moment it deviates from that intention and it being demonstrated in the actual writing and not coping out with "it should be assumed", the story of these nts always start to fall off. It's just how it is.

Nobody cares about her sex with Brandon, anyone can go on porn hub and watch exactly the same thing but in HD. The value of the story is the writing and her dynamic with the husband, and it's easier to get in writing in a vn. Nobody cares about the mafia stuff either. It's not me trying to disrespect the author it's just not why people care about the game or about ammie. If he has a vision great and I respect and admire it and hope he follows it through to his satisfaction, just its not gonna turn on a fan of the genre to get random exposition that has nothing to do with nts.

What is wrong with her liking sex though? It would have been cruel if she was just forcing herself to go through with this without the slightest bit of enjoyment. She absolutely does her best to tease and satisfy her husband's fetish and she is absolutely loyal to him. There is literally no chance of ntr. I don't get the complaints.

Not only that, but it is much hotter when a women actually enjoys sex instead of just silently suffering for her husband's satisfaction.

As for the mafia stuff - the story had been honestly getting rather stale for a while already before this new conflict was introduced. So I am very glad that it is moving at least somewhere.

 

[Fusionzone]

What is wrong with her liking sex though? It would have been cruel if she was just forcing herself to go through with this without the slightest bit of enjoyment. She absolutely does her best to tease and satisfy her husband's fetish and she is absolutely loyal to him. There is literally no chance of ntr. I don't get the complaints.

Not only that, but it is much hotter when a women actually enjoys sex instead of just silently suffering for her husband's satisfaction.

As for the mafia stuff - the story had been honestly getting rather stale for a while already before this new conflict was introduced. So I am very glad that it is moving at least somewhere.

Probably different strokes. I don't take an interest in actual cuck stuff but rather find it arousing the idea of a woman so pathologically devoted that she's like hey if you're addicted to a certain kind of porn I'll make it for you and then jerk you off or fuck you while watching it with you. The more focus she shows on "you" the better. The point of her fucking someone else is so she can focus purely on making a porn scene for him. Maybe that's not nts idk. But I'm pretty sure there's a strong part of the fan base of the genre that feels the same. It's about seeing how far a woman will go to pleasure a husband. If she enjoys the process fine but ideally it should be because she knows he's watching or she only gets excited teasing him or jerking him off or watching him etc. Its just taking it to an extreme and I frankly don't care what she gets out of it as long as the focus is on her husband. Her suffering for her husband is better than the standard cuck nonsense in my book, her suffering means something and says something for how devoted she is.

There's some hentais where the girl shows disgust for the guy but she acts the part and when he feels confident tears him a new one saying she's just acting to make her real partner more turned on. That's hot, because it shows she's willing to do something purely for him. That's selfless love, that's peak.

 

[sanchotx]

Its the writing and pacing. And it's compounding mistakes from pretty much since their vacation. I think the author is good at tease at dirty talk but he doesn't understand the actual appeal of the fetish and that it isn't about her fucking someone so much as her devotion to her husband and her focus on it. People don't like hearing it but the reality is shes enjoying it too much for herself, and the point of the fetish is making porn for him since she's his favorite woman and being both the source of his jealousy as well the one who sooths that very jealousy she caused, all to take him on a roller coaster to turn him on and get him off, and that in turn makes her get off more and better because she is her husband's pleaser first and foremost, even when it's more if a femdom dynamic her goal should be her husband's pleasure and satisfaction. The moment it deviates from that intention and it being demonstrated in the actual writing and not coping out with "it should be assumed", the story of these nts always start to fall off. It's just how it is.

Nobody cares about her sex with Brandon, anyone can go on porn hub and watch exactly the same thing but in HD. The value of the story is the writing and her dynamic with the husband, and it's easier to get in writing in a vn. Nobody cares about the mafia stuff either. It's not me trying to disrespect the author it's just not why people care about the game or about ammie. If he has a vision great and I respect and admire it and hope he follows it through to his satisfaction, just its not gonna turn on a fan of the genre to get random exposition that has nothing to do with nts.

interesting thoughts. the coworker was definitely a much better scene. it was surprising and new. the brandon thing is a bit cliche. it definitely didn't do as much.

 

[nidezrel]

Probably different strokes. I don't take an interest in actual cuck stuff but rather find it arousing the idea of a woman so pathologically devoted that she's like hey if you're addicted to a certain kind of porn I'll make it for you and then jerk you off or fuck you while watching it with you. The more focus she shows on "you" the better. The point of her fucking someone else is so she can focus purely on making a porn scene for him. Maybe that's not nts idk. But I'm pretty sure there's a strong part of the fan base of the genre that feels the same. It's about seeing how far a woman will go to pleasure a husband. If she enjoys the process fine but ideally it should be because she knows he's watching or she only gets excited teasing him or jerking him off or watching him etc. Its just taking it to an extreme and I frankly don't care what she gets out of it as long as the focus is on her husband. Her suffering for her husband is better than the standard cuck nonsense in my book, her suffering means something and says something for how devoted she is.

There's some hentais where the girl shows disgust for the guy but she acts the part and when he feels confident tears him a new one saying she's just acting to make her real partner more turned on. That's hot, because it shows she's willing to do something purely for him. That's selfless love, that's peak.

I'd say that's 100% NTS, and my favorite kind too. I don't know if I'm so gungho that I'd want her to do it even if she suffers - I think she at least needs to grow to enjoy it partway through it, or it ends up feeling a bit depressing - but the fundamental idea that it's an ultimate show of devotion is something I relate to strongly. People who're into humilliation NTS seem to see this as the man just wanting to lord over his woman and making her a slave, but I think it's more that he's insecure (aren't all cucks insecure?) and he craves the affirmation of her love (in this twisted way). Her pushing herself to meet his kinks is inherently more narratively satisfying than doing it just cause she wanted to do it anyway. Crossing barriers, going past your comfort zone, that makes things exciting.

 

[obaid124]

it's not like other NTR stuff where dick is the only thing that matters and FMC goes crazy about it and leaves everything. It's love that even having sex with others she loves to tease him that what he likes and he reclaims her that whatever you do you will remain mine. Don't pay heed to the criticism. Can't please everyone. If you change the storyline because of what people say you will abandon this project so bro love your game and keep it up

 

[Busty May]

any save games?

 

[P.Y.M]

You guys are right, the spice that is going off is that the story seems to be a true NTS rather than a NTS to NTR. Not what i prefer, but that's the way it seemed to take from the beginning. I'm glad if this game becomes a true Netorase story, the first of them i dare to say.

 

[Fusionzone]

The first part is vanilla with some sharing fantasies here and there but then the actual sharing begins, of which there's lots. I think the actual debate people are having is that, recently, the focus has shifted too much to the wife being shared and her intimate moments with the MC are being pushed aside. Or something like that. I haven't played the latest version yet so I can't say who's right and who isn't.

Exactly this. If you want sex scenes the game is fine as is but if you want nts writing you don't have much after they actually start to get other dudes involved.

 

[zonezoneman08]

is there an android port for this latest version?

 

[sosoisdas]

i dont understand why if i would play on porngameshub.com i can skip, but i cant on my downloaded version. Does anyone else have that problem??