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I hope MC can step up he's just relying on Amelia right now. Anyway, I like this update!!!
Honestly this update was a nothing burger. The writing is unnecessarily contrived and takes the focus off the relationship and especially off the husband. The point of nts is the wife pleasing the husband at its core. He's too sidelined at this point like you can write that he likes it but he's not really a part of the story anymore except for the occasional "btw I love you teehee". Every patch is less actual nts than the last. I don't care about this mafia crap and the way the mc is written to be a sidelined beta without agency and perfectly fine with it is lazy and stupid. You may as well delete him and make the story all about some mob bosses daughter fucking around and you have a more coherent story at this point.
Can tell the writer doesn't know where to go at this point because now that she crossed the sex threshold there's nowhere to take it. That's the issue with nts in general it's meant to be very short stories because the climax is if they actually do something then it drops off and they have to force ntr to escalate and at best be like haha jk I love you. It doesn't turn me on to hear ammie has to fuck some douche to sign a contract, that's not sexy. First 3 patches were sexy the rest is just ever increasing slop. Sorry to be so harsh to the author just he really dropped the ball with this one and it's been headed in that trajectory for a while now.
Can tell the writer doesn't know where to go at this point because now that she crossed the sex threshold there's nowhere to take it. That's the issue with nts in general it's meant to be very short stories because the climax is if they actually do something then it drops off and they have to force ntr to escalate and at best be like haha jk I love you. It doesn't turn me on to hear ammie has to fuck some douche to sign a contract, that's not sexy. First 3 patches were sexy the rest is just ever increasing slop. Sorry to be so harsh to the author just he really dropped the ball with this one and it's been headed in that trajectory for a while now.
Stop coping btw. Mc clearly enjoying it is plot armor. The audience not enjoying it is what makes it not good nts. It started good then fell off, that's not complicated.
baeklaw
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Not gonna lie, im jealous of the people that will find this game in a year or so and have so much content without waiting and having to deal with these discussions here
Same at this point, best thing to do for this game is to wait and comeback, I'd buy it on steam if it comes out. ITs that good of game, but I don't want to give money through patreon mostly for my own cost saving.
The update was a bit on the short side for me but i like where it's heading...
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Illustrivity
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It's hilarious to me that this game spends 13 shitting updates setting up MC's and Amelia's relationship, re-inforcing how in love they are and how much MC enjoys every single fuckin' moment of her whoring herself out, and then they are put into a situation where Amelia has to do something quickly and in desperation, and they lose their minds because we didn't have another 5 minutes of dialogue where MC and Amelia assure each other that, yes, honey, I want to see you get fucked by other men, where Amelia smiles at us and MC thinks to himself "man, I'm so lucky".
Like, dear fuckin' lord, I have nothing to do with the development of this game, and I'm exhausted reading this whiny shit.
As for the game itself, baaanger update. As with some other games on here, it's really cool that this game is taking the plunge beyond just being a slice-of-life, day-to-day kind of game. Major props to the dev. Also, the art is getting better and better.
Like, dear fuckin' lord, I have nothing to do with the development of this game, and I'm exhausted reading this whiny shit.
As for the game itself, baaanger update. As with some other games on here, it's really cool that this game is taking the plunge beyond just being a slice-of-life, day-to-day kind of game. Major props to the dev. Also, the art is getting better and better.
Perv_Old_Robot
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No how dare it set up expectations for us in the last 13 updates. I don't even know what I want so I am angy. Um... For some reason.
Can we please talk about the game again? Like I hope the dev is like "Tyeah those forums are awful."
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You guys are going to get this thread closed down again lmao god damn
In this very same update she says I love you like 3 or 4 times and tells the mc shes gonna seduce the other guy TWO times. Then tells him to go to bed to a room near where shes taking the guy and surprise surprise the door is open. Then she screams mcs name while getting fucked. But no, this is clearly ntr.
Lord Bradley
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Personaly I really don't want anything to do with Freya as Amelia is more than enough, if it's up to choice I don't mind that being an option, but I would not feel good about being forced to do sexual stuff with her. It does feel like for past couple of update scenes are a bit mundane if that's the right word. And I am not just saying that because I enjoy kinky sharing sex (which I do), I wouldn't mind there being more MC x Wife sex either, but it needs to get back to the level it was earlier in the game with creative poses, situations and dialogue. Ending of this update seemed to indicate things would get more interesting at least in my playthrough not sure if that is on other "routes" as well. I still really enjoy this game and appreciate the quick update schedule, but I worry it might turn into industrial level content dump which loses the artisan flavor it had so far.
Alright, everyone was waiting for my thoughts, so here they are (jk). I personally don't relate to some vanilla people that this feels like NTR, but I do agree that the story is continuing in the direction of maso NTS, which by now just seems like it's decidedly what this game is going for, despite the early choices for a dom route. There's many descriptions of the husband feeling intense humiliation at what's going on, the other man is yet another horrible scumbag, the sex scenes are forceful and she's basically treated like a whore. It's very degrading, and that stuff is just a huge turn off for me personally.
A while ago I'd theorized that this story was perfect for some blackmail content. Maybe someone would find their secret and she'd have to shut them up, or she might have to use it as leverage for something. So, it makes perfect sense to see this kind of plot point happen, and I think it's smart. However, I do agree with others that the couple's hand was basically forced here, in a kind of life or death situation, which makes it feel less consensual, and as a consequence less fun. It'd be nicer if they were more in control of the situation and the blackmailing was being done more for fun. Overall I still enjoyed this more than the trainer updates.
One last note, I'm still really not a fan of the screaming and dirty talk during sex scenes, stylistically. I just find it so embarassingly corny. I wish they felt more like just people enjoying sex, and less like they were doing some porn star impersonation.
ps: The blurred AI backgrounds feel a little distracting. As far as I know, it's the first time they've added AI art to the game. I understand the logistics, but it still stuck out to me.
A while ago I'd theorized that this story was perfect for some blackmail content. Maybe someone would find their secret and she'd have to shut them up, or she might have to use it as leverage for something. So, it makes perfect sense to see this kind of plot point happen, and I think it's smart. However, I do agree with others that the couple's hand was basically forced here, in a kind of life or death situation, which makes it feel less consensual, and as a consequence less fun. It'd be nicer if they were more in control of the situation and the blackmailing was being done more for fun. Overall I still enjoyed this more than the trainer updates.
One last note, I'm still really not a fan of the screaming and dirty talk during sex scenes, stylistically. I just find it so embarassingly corny. I wish they felt more like just people enjoying sex, and less like they were doing some porn star impersonation.
ps: The blurred AI backgrounds feel a little distracting. As far as I know, it's the first time they've added AI art to the game. I understand the logistics, but it still stuck out to me.
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Eidolic
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It comes down to questionable consent, basically. The fact that everybody's into it and everybody's saying yes is irrelevant when anyone can see that, if anyone wasn't into it or said no, it wouldn't matter--it wouldn't change anything.
Which is a pretty stupid thing to get in a twist in over a VN like this, imo. You get semi-frequent quality updates down one path, plenty of updates of shit quality that cover a lot of alternates, or quality updates with variety that take forever. You can't have all three. Dev has clearly chosen option 1 and clearly has a specific path in mind. Have some suspension of disbelief or move on to another project, it's not hard.
As for the update itself, it's interesting for me to see Amelia on the back foot like this. She was rather laughably bad at keeping her cool in front of her parents, which is both interesting to see and logical that this would be where she can't keep up the confidence. The parents themselves seem like they could be interesting characters a couple dozen updates down the line, but for now they're whatever.
Personally, it hasn't been very titillating for a while for me, so I'll probably just check out and come back in a year or so to see what's changed. This game was definitely best all at once when I started a few versions ago, the drip feed is far less enjoyable. I do consistently like that the dev clearly has a vision and is sticking with it, that's nice.
Which is a pretty stupid thing to get in a twist in over a VN like this, imo. You get semi-frequent quality updates down one path, plenty of updates of shit quality that cover a lot of alternates, or quality updates with variety that take forever. You can't have all three. Dev has clearly chosen option 1 and clearly has a specific path in mind. Have some suspension of disbelief or move on to another project, it's not hard.
As for the update itself, it's interesting for me to see Amelia on the back foot like this. She was rather laughably bad at keeping her cool in front of her parents, which is both interesting to see and logical that this would be where she can't keep up the confidence. The parents themselves seem like they could be interesting characters a couple dozen updates down the line, but for now they're whatever.
Personally, it hasn't been very titillating for a while for me, so I'll probably just check out and come back in a year or so to see what's changed. This game was definitely best all at once when I started a few versions ago, the drip feed is far less enjoyable. I do consistently like that the dev clearly has a vision and is sticking with it, that's nice.
Hmong-sama
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W Update once again! Well at least in my opinion. Even though my saves are gone once again...I'm gonna have try to find the time to do both sub and dom routes. For sure my sub route will have humiliating talk unlike the dom route. Only reason is I'm pretty busy and need to catch up story wise like WuWa and ZZZ for example. With NIKKE x Nier rerun event and Diablo 4 on the side.
Right now the only legit criticisms I hold are, the MC doesn't seem to have the chance to be dominant so having that as a choice early on is definitely pointless. However, they hinted in the next update you can either get femdommed by the mother or get I assume geist to help you so maybe that will make a difference. Second, the lack of CGs during the sex scenes definitely sucks. The writing is good but we got one blowjob CG and one mating press CG. I would definitely love to see more action with the CGs.
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