Fuck me that was hot. Her teasing and the MC's palpable anticipation was written so well. Though, I like both NTR and NTS, so I did think the moment before Amelie leaves in the evening maybe had her being a bit...too wary and considerate, when she kept double- and triple-checking that MC wanted her to do stuff with Jack and was okay with her doing stuff with him etc.
I realize this maybe "enhances" the whole trust dynamic between Amelie and MC, which maybe NTS purists specifically want or whatever, but I kinda wish Amelie was more...spontaneous and dominant in the dialogue in this update. Like, they've already discussed their arrangement pretty extensively, they've already made the first step (of Amelie actually physically interacting with somebody else, such as briefly in the club and with Geist in the last update) and they always behave like they have the deepest trust with each other, so I just kinda wish Amelie was a bit bolder and maybe even kinda genuinely surprised MC more with the end scene (which would have made MC's whole struggle of "I wonder what she's doing I wonder how far she'll go" struggle even better). I don't think it would ruin their dynamic, and I think her just going for it would be hotter.
With that said, small niggle over a couple lines of dialogue. Fantastic update.
