He's asking the wrong question. Obviously the fans are gonna vote yes but his storytelling is still gonna be very sloppy, disorganized and ntr baitey on the dl and still no control in the hands of the mc like it's supposed to be in a good nts, so ur gonna have more of the same problems but exacerbated. The writing doesn't really get better until he addresses the mc complete lack of agency in the story, and how the writing trivialize his existence.
U may as well cut him out and have it be gangster daughter exploring her sexuality to the chagrin of mommy and daddy and u have the same scenes same story same feeling minus the blue balling of having a spineless cuck present with a self erasure fetish.
Ammie being sexy is a byproduct of her being a slut for her husband, not for herself. There's no indication other than platitude that it is so in practice, the dialogue he writes in is untested platitude there's no red button to push, no veto to be had, and all the other dudes 0 respect for her or her marriage, it's a sham and its not sexy imo. Him being backwritten to be fine with everything and anything he wasn't just swallow it down for her to not feel bad is nuts. Unless the writer understands why Jack dominating the interaction the way he does instead of being an obedient dildo grateful to just be there, and stops writing that kind of bs into the story, it can only get worse.
