So, having finished the update, this how it looked to me:
- Motoko's house scene: The drama part felt a bit boring to me. It's supposed to develop Kenichi as a character and ¿make us grow some sympathy for him? But it isn't only too late for that, the dialogue and the jokes aren't quite as funny as they used to. And worse of all, what started with Maki suddenly speaking like she was an illiterate from a rural area has spread and now EVERYONE is starting to talk in all sorts of vulgar and uneducated ways.
- The sex scene with Jira is okay. It isn't outstanding but it isn't bad either.
- Shirohime's scene: Expands on Kenichi (I don't think anyone really cares about that) and technically advances the story a little bit at the part that's had the less focus and relevance until now and that's furthest from the MC. Boring stuff if you ask me.
- Nightmare scene: Complete garbage from start to finish. Large amount of dialogue that serves no purpose at all and it's not that it isn't funny or interesting any more, no. This part is so nonsensical that a text straight out from random bullshit generator is easier to understand and more relatable. Then comes the worst sex scene of the game by far. First by spoiling the fun of having sex with Motoko by doing it through a nightmare. Second because out of the three featured girls, we just come from having lewd scenes with two of them two scenes ago and the third one is a semi-new character that contributes nothing to the scene. Third, the sex is ultra rushed. Last and most important the 3 girls have orgasms, one of them multiple orgasms even, just like the MC: none of them make it to the screen. In fact, despite there being animations for the sex, the orgasms occur in black screens.
Short update. Very short if you remove the bullshit from the dialogue. Decaying style. Unfinished delivery.
By the way, wasn't the dev supposed to properly finish the Honey Bee scene at some point? It's going to be just like every other thing that didn't make it in their own update and got pushed to "later", right?