Thoughts/advice/issues v0.2
First i want to say thank you. i appreciate you taking the time to write this. i have been trying to make a game for years. I've already scraped two really don't want to scrap a third. i use grammerly on every passage. however it doesn't fix everything and sometimes tries to get to fix stuff that doesn't need fixing. So id really wish people would stop with that. I am not or never be able to use perfect English so its not going to happen.
Second you right about the concept I come up with things as I go. As a matter of fact I was writing the library scene i came up with the nexus thing. But right now the only path that has the items is the Dratorian path. The plan is to use the nexus room to back and try different outcomes. Early game stil so im just doing stuff as it comes the lore stuff.
Third about the lore stuff maybe i said two much with the dragon but his whole thing was intimidation dragons have always respected power. It why his daughter is into domination. He raided cause he needed two instilling fear into those who'd challenge him. People were always afraid of dragons so i thought saying what i did people would use common sense and see what i was saying. He wasn't merciful he was just a dragon dragon pillage and savage lands its just what they do. So people were afraid and knew better to do anything to incur his wrath further really didn't think i needed to clarify that because that's dragons 101 but ok whatever.
i dont know whats its called but where the guy is telling the stories hes narrating. me as person i like when narrators share their opinions about stuff so its not so stuff. hence the comments about not being realms being destroyed. it's just my style to mix opinion of the narrator and story teller in that way don't know if its a thing but its my thing.
Forth about the comment again thats an opiniong thing i added yes but i also dont know any father that would want his daughter to go out dressed like that. pervs love that kinda thing. especially around here. so to you might seems like forcing something on you but growing up Ive met plenty of people like that.
Again almost everything I do and write is written as it comes I'm not a planer never have been. Nothing ever goes to plan for me so i just wing it. its a style that works for me. that being said i always know how i want stories to start and how they end. For me ive always been the it doesn't matter if you know how the book ends kind of thing its how you get there there that matters.
finally several people have told me about the neighborhood thing i thought i fixed it but i cant find any passage named neighborhood so have no idea what you guys are talking about. however if its the thing with the rehab bit it should be fixed with version 2.5
most stuff that is unfinished i mark with stuff like hotel the which i did start but halfway through writing i realized way i was going will still take a bit to finish plus would lead to next day stuff anyway. I wanted to get a update out for you guys cause it had already been like three weeks so i paused it.
although I'll admit i did forget to add the alternate purchase of the hotel scene.
i noticed bank stuff was broken as i was finishing the Alteran day one end so i made some changes 2.5 should be updated to fix the bank.
i didnt know about the classes thing and honestly no idea how to fix that but that's what the walk through is for. i always hate having to ask peeps for walk through so build them into my games.
either i will take what youve written into consideration so thank you