Just a quick note on the succubus seduction scenes: the mechanics of the power isn't explained well in Warlord yet, but it operates much like intoxication rather than mind control (this is explained a bit more in Euryale's Gambit). Ashmedai exploits the existing feelings the MC and Thel have for one another and lowers their inhibitions. Ashmedai mentions that she could sense Thel's desires and that she just "helped her get them out". With regard to the scene with Eisheth after the MC's transformation: The MC can't move, but nothing in the dialog implies he doesn't consent to what's happening to him (although, he is clearly reluctant and feels awkward and embarrassed about the situation). In fact, he explicitly tells Eisheth to continue.
Great feedback so far and I appreciate it. Thanks!
Well, rapey behaviour at the very least. Not that I mind, a demoness/succubus that asks permission before taking what she wants would be a rather pathethic demoness/succubus after all.
But as I pointed out, in one scene it is still mentioned that the mother has been raped. If you mean to strike this completely and only have the imperial soldiers kill her, you need to go back and look over the inner monologue of the MC when he finds the her.
Now you didn't answer this question. In case you just missed it, I'll ask again:
"Now, on that note, are you planing on giving the player the option of making dark choices in the future in regards to the erotic content? Or are the dark choices relegated to non-erotic parts of the game as well as what others do to the MC (as pointed out, the sex the two succubuses wrangles out of the MC through
mind controll intoxication, magically lowered inhibitions and blackmail kind of fit the bill for dark choices)?"