She got it from DeformedWoodenSpoons.US. Half the spoons hold water like a fishing net but they give you 3 sets for the price of one at half off. A steal!
She also saved money on the building contractor to pay for a set of... other things. Still paying off the loan on those puppies.
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Loved your no bullshit critic man...and thank you for as a bystander I've learned about the 50K minimum...I knew it shouldn't be that easy for all these kinetic style wannabe game developers...THX
I am just tired of these new AI releases. They offer 5 minutes of content and then "gimme your mon33z".Loved your no bullshit critic man...and thank you for as a bystander I've learned about the 50K minimum...I knew it shouldn't be that easy for all these kinetic style wannabe game developers...
Sorry but even I can grab random AI sprites, some shit backgrounds and then write this amount of content in a day.
Why not at least write a good amount of the story so people know you are a good writer?
Anyway I see this, the writing is ABSOLUTELY NOTHING SPECIAL, the story is generic, and as many people pointed out, while the character sprites are beautiful, the backgrounds are all low effort. Dev didn't bother to crop out the sprites into good backgrounds, no they use full AI images without any editing or cropping. This game screams trash low effort moneygrab to me.
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Can I count on your critic whenever I make a game in Renpy myself? It will take time for I am a Daz Studio working 3d artist and amateur animator plus I've been sweating to write decent stories with my local but creative writing LLMs. Of course they have been busting my balls for explicit content but I decided to fuck them and fool them by writing a farce comedy story where they allowed foolery and grinding scenes between a mom and her son and daughter under the pretense of a pledge forced marriage by the deceased father(adaptation inspired on an incest Literotica story)...the text is ready 80k plus.
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Watermelon City [v0.0.1] Unofficial Android Port
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Yeah, echoing the other critics here.
- Bog-standard story setup
- Zero effort to personalize the game. Not even an image for the main menu, looks like any default Renpy project
- Asking players to define relationships is a guarantee that the dialog is going to be awkward as fuck. I know quite a few successful games do the same, it applies to them too
- Misspellings on simple words like 'college'
- Barely any content. Although considering the other problems, that's probably merciful
There was no reason to rush this out of the gate in the state it was. You only get one shot at a first impression, and I'm guessing most people who went through this won't be coming back for more.
- Bog-standard story setup
- Zero effort to personalize the game. Not even an image for the main menu, looks like any default Renpy project
- Asking players to define relationships is a guarantee that the dialog is going to be awkward as fuck. I know quite a few successful games do the same, it applies to them too
- Misspellings on simple words like 'college'
- Barely any content. Although considering the other problems, that's probably merciful
There was no reason to rush this out of the gate in the state it was. You only get one shot at a first impression, and I'm guessing most people who went through this won't be coming back for more.
Can try NovelAI, does good explicit content. I've tried adding a bunch of existing text and using it to follow up, and some of the responses are pretty good. Requires a bit of pruning and tweaking for best output, but decent results after that.
