VN Ren'Py Watermelon City [v0.0.2] [AAO Studio]

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Cornfield

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Perhaps enable MC to call stepmom by her first name (whatever it is) , it would make conversation more realistic.
I have enabled stepmom to call MC by his first name (not stepson).
 

hajdudu

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First, i have to say this before giving feedback.
- I love a good AI CG game and art if it's paired with good writing.
- Incest is wincest

Feedback for the dev:
- The images are not consistant. If you can't tell if it's the same character - generate other images.
- At least fix the grammar. Im not a native english speaker either, i get it, but i don't make games. i write comments. You can always paste the dialogue you wrote in a chatbot and ask it to fix your grammar.
- This wasm't a 0.1 release. A demo at best. Release more content.

Best of luck
 

Prokopije

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Hello. How much freedom of choice? Any forced sexual content involving MC currently present in the game or planned to be implemented in the future releases? Thanks in advance.
 

AAO STUDIO

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Hey folks! I've been reading your comments for last 2 hours and the main feedbacks I managed to collect are:

- Improve English and conversations, be more careful with the grammar.
- The version we released seems to be so short. Most of you gave your feedbacks as that is not even a 0.0.1 release and we actually do agree with that. We promise we'll satisfy you as best as we can at the next version we're gonna release.
- Some people commented about AI work is lazy work. Well that's obviously true, modeling with AI is actually easier than 3D modeling. But currently our sources and time is pretty limited. Depending on your engagement and feedbacks we would love to hire some new people to our team for the purpose of 3D modeling. But our current sources allows us that much. Our main focus is coming up with a better story with next versions other than improving the graphics at the moment. Future will tell us how everything's gonna be shaped.
 
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Beazlabub

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@AAOSTUDIO You asked for feedback. Very short first Content release. The Dialog is VERY poor. The few different renders of the "step-Mother" or Landlord's Second Wife are all different. This is one of the reasons people hate AI games. You need to find a way to have the same Character Model in Different situations. Like the Kitchen shot, The Woman looks nothing like every other scene of the same character even the Watermelons are smaller/different.
1.Bad Dialog - Nobody plays these for a griping story line but, when the Text is very bad it is a killer.
2. Far too many totally different renders of the same character. - If you want the game to do well, you need to keep the models consistent.
Good first attempt though. Good luck.
 

JoeHiggins1949

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I like the AI art. The story might go somewhere, but you need to learn how to construct sentences properly and how to spell. College is a school. Collage is a piece of art comprised of various components glued together. Work on those while you flesh out the story.
 

Lewd95zone

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Hope people will understand that Android js now a must for those games...

GL on project, previews look good.
 

Trasher2018

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That is solid demo or techtest. But this is not a Initial release.

Also - maybe add names to the characters and not jut relationships. Also - Step-Tenant? Rly? ... Make the Dad a Dad and the Step Mom a step mom - that makes sense and is legal and also make the "mom" a step mom too by default. Drop the landlords shit.

So the MCs mom died at child birth (or if you enter Mom) she didnt. Easy setup. The sisters are step-sisters by default. All fine. To be extra secure - the Dad is infertile and all girls are not from him - dunno if that is necessary - but hey, better save than sorry.

And then - add a game to the setup process. ;)
Oh and get the personal pronouns correct - nothing is more of a downer than male "sisters" ^^
 

Saint Blackmoor

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I've heard that before.
And you will hear again. ;)

Anything new or beneficial has starts and stops, but there is always progression. A person is born and progresses through life; they encounter ups and downs, but they always grow and move forward. Those who don't make progress in society are left behind.
You don't see it because you don't want to.

That article is very good at helping you understand this.

Do automobiles look and run like they did 100 years ago? It took 100 years to get where they are now. AI is at about the 25-year mark, IMO. It's a rebellious young person trying to understand the world it's been thrust into. Hopefully, it will mature and become a contributing part of society.
Do you agree that every person and everything should contribute to society?
Please don't sidetrack my question with a "well but" response. It's an easy question.
 
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Anyone using an AI image generator to make games should not be having issues with grammar and language. Using a free/subscription based LLM (GPT-4 is 20 bucks/mo?) is very feasible, and should work intuitively to translate and convey thoughts and concepts from other languages into English.
 

Saint Blackmoor

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Oh I don't mind AI art at all. It can look amazing but you need more than spaced out renders. It's usual for the text to be saying one thing but the picture is just a random pose. I can't wait until AI art gets to the point of being poseable with decent animations.
I agree with most of what you said.
Daz, etc, games do have the same issue with dialogue, sometimes not matching the images. That comes down to the developer and how much time and experience they have; AI has nothing to do with that.
I'm playing a non-AI game now that has those issues. A very popular one at that.
Like you, I can't wait for AI to get to the point where animations are decent.

My thoughts on AI are the same as anything a person creates: 80% effort, 15% creativity, and 5% intent.
 
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