Glad to see it's still alive, I really liked the past updates.
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Juerhullycin
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- Feb 4, 2024
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Rift Studios solid game you have here but its pretty rough about some edges.
you have a couple missing words here and there you didn't capitalize all the names.
in the photo hunt in Nicole's house if you grab the photo in the bed room it doesn't show the photo but it shows the "to be continued render" which stays in the background afterwards because it flashes up every time you change location in the house afterwards.
that Ashley is the daughter of Mia isn't properly explained i did wonder why MC comes to this conclusion only because Ashley worked for 4 years at the cafe.
If you play without femdom Mia doesn't ask the MC about being disappointed that Ashley didn't show up because that only happens in the femdom route but MC still answers as if he was asked.
you are using the interim screens like carped bombs which leaves the story feeling disjointed at times you should replay the game and look if the screen is needed at that time or if it could be solved with a bit of more text i really just wrote down a few instances at the end of the game after i decided to comment on it but there are many more. My examples are:
1)Kat and MC in the Kitchen after she stayed the night. they talk > cut > they stand in the exact same position and go "what do you plan doing today" the cut you use is a hard cut that indicates in TV and Film that a lot of time is skipped if its just a few moments or a quick commute to work they use soft cuts and fades to indicate that only a bit of time is skipped. what you did there feels jarring AF and could be solved by a simple text on the same render "after some small talk with Kat" or let them talk a bit about what happened the night before according to choices made. If you go both or rom she could say she is happy that MC still is sexually interested in her despite the vulnerability she presented to him. when you chose fuck she could rile him up a bit flesh out her character after a pivotal moment she had.
2)Angela is bunking with MC and asks him a like 4-5 questions, MC starts answering the first 2 questions > hard cut > MC answers the last question. The cut indicates that MC was ranting for hours. Maybe its better if you just let it play out without cut. Great moment to character built both of em and connect.
Another thing that could do with a once over is the stammering the MC is doing constantly. He acts assertive and knows what he is doing flirting with girls and taking the lead in the encounters they have and in the next second he is a stammering idiot because a girl is talking to him. The MC is really good but that flip flopping when it happens is jarring as if he has a split personality.
could you explain a bit more what your plans for femdom are? i dont mind spoilers. Because if Mia is a Lezdom dominating other women but bowing to a MC who is doming her in the future, that is something i would have great interest in. Far to few games that do stuff like that. Femdom towards the MC is something i despise on the other hand.
you have a couple missing words here and there you didn't capitalize all the names.
in the photo hunt in Nicole's house if you grab the photo in the bed room it doesn't show the photo but it shows the "to be continued render" which stays in the background afterwards because it flashes up every time you change location in the house afterwards.
that Ashley is the daughter of Mia isn't properly explained i did wonder why MC comes to this conclusion only because Ashley worked for 4 years at the cafe.
If you play without femdom Mia doesn't ask the MC about being disappointed that Ashley didn't show up because that only happens in the femdom route but MC still answers as if he was asked.
you are using the interim screens like carped bombs which leaves the story feeling disjointed at times you should replay the game and look if the screen is needed at that time or if it could be solved with a bit of more text i really just wrote down a few instances at the end of the game after i decided to comment on it but there are many more. My examples are:
1)Kat and MC in the Kitchen after she stayed the night. they talk > cut > they stand in the exact same position and go "what do you plan doing today" the cut you use is a hard cut that indicates in TV and Film that a lot of time is skipped if its just a few moments or a quick commute to work they use soft cuts and fades to indicate that only a bit of time is skipped. what you did there feels jarring AF and could be solved by a simple text on the same render "after some small talk with Kat" or let them talk a bit about what happened the night before according to choices made. If you go both or rom she could say she is happy that MC still is sexually interested in her despite the vulnerability she presented to him. when you chose fuck she could rile him up a bit flesh out her character after a pivotal moment she had.
2)Angela is bunking with MC and asks him a like 4-5 questions, MC starts answering the first 2 questions > hard cut > MC answers the last question. The cut indicates that MC was ranting for hours. Maybe its better if you just let it play out without cut. Great moment to character built both of em and connect.
Another thing that could do with a once over is the stammering the MC is doing constantly. He acts assertive and knows what he is doing flirting with girls and taking the lead in the encounters they have and in the next second he is a stammering idiot because a girl is talking to him. The MC is really good but that flip flopping when it happens is jarring as if he has a split personality.
could you explain a bit more what your plans for femdom are? i dont mind spoilers. Because if Mia is a Lezdom dominating other women but bowing to a MC who is doming her in the future, that is something i would have great interest in. Far to few games that do stuff like that. Femdom towards the MC is something i despise on the other hand.
Son_of_ogre
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- Oct 2, 2024
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Why not get inspired by the lesbian content of the reunion game, the women focus on the MC, but MC lets them play when he's with other girlfriends and they ask permission to interact with other women
ppl that don't like lesbian/Bi stuff still won't like that because is still implies lesbian/Bi stuff. Like it's going on off screen or something. If they ask to it means they want to but i'm not letting them and i'd rather not want my women to be Lesbian/Bi. And that includes flirting and talking about being with other women. There is tons of other harem games out there that has lesbian/Bi content in it, I for one am glad to have a dev to actually try to either remove it or make it completely avoidable, I mean not every guy like lesbian/Bi content. Would it hurt to have a few VN's that doesn't have it?
because thagt game is a terrible example asks multiple times if you like the lesbian stuff until eventually it just forced it on you and basically said fuck you to those of us that hate that content
Hermann Paschulke
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- Mar 13, 2023
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Is something wrong with my game? From the point where I go to Nicoles' house the animated scenes are very sharp and look clean but the renders themselves are all very blurry and just don't look very good. Is that just on my end or what happened?