Thinking and Narrating are 2 different things, the mix of it makes the VN weird to read, also too much repetition of ideas.
The main character, dude got found out minutes in the academy, didnt even read or learn before going there, then get told he is wrong, and without any proof he believes everything, i dont know the intro feels stupid.
The idea is cool though.
The main character, dude got found out minutes in the academy, didnt even read or learn before going there, then get told he is wrong, and without any proof he believes everything, i dont know the intro feels stupid.
The idea is cool though.