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Stumble on this AVN because of the reference in another AVN. Sadly, it was pretty mediocre experience (except for visuals, those are great)
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- Apr 29, 2023
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I think your writing is pretty spectacular, overall. But maybe you're not into dialogue, or sex narration/dialogue. Which is fair, but might be a drawback in this particular medium. I think you can probably do better than opera singers echoing at each thrust, but it's a creative endeavour, and you do you. Expansion in descriptiveness in that area is the only thing I could think of that could benefit from more effort. Hopefully that's taken in the spirit it is given.
- Sep 3, 2022
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BlasphemyShe aight
She is the only reason I bought the game tbh, petty, maybe, don't care
You’re not the first person to say that. Alyssa is single handedly carrying this game from a financial standpointBlasphemy
She is the only reason I bought the game tbh, petty, maybe, don't care
- Sep 3, 2022
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What can I say for me she is giving Jaye from Chasing Sunsets a run for her money.....if you put a gun to my head, not sure I could chooseYou’re not the first person to say that. Alyssa is single handedly carrying this game from a financial standpoint
- Oct 10, 2022
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Now you are obliged to use this masterpiece in game.
- Oct 10, 2022
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I am not sure it is safe to talk shit about MC. Dude was one bullet away from being Batman.
- Mar 25, 2021
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I really like the writing dev I think you do a good job
And also, Alyssa is ok but compared to the sweetest girl in the game Leslie
It's no contest.
That's right everyone in this game Leslie is the girl for me
And also, Alyssa is ok but compared to the sweetest girl in the game Leslie
It's no contest.
That's right everyone in this game Leslie is the girl for me
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As I was enjoying the game, I realized that there wasn't any milf LI.
Katarina would be my choice.
Leslie, I like you, but Paige and I are about to start a serious relationship. I'm sorry, I created an alternate save for you.
I wonder about Athena, there was not much about her in this update.
Jordan has a perfect body.
June looks like a whore with an STD who sleeps with random men.
Katarina would be my choice.
Leslie, I like you, but Paige and I are about to start a serious relationship. I'm sorry, I created an alternate save for you.
I wonder about Athena, there was not much about her in this update.
Jordan has a perfect body.
June looks like a whore with an STD who sleeps with random men.
- Jun 28, 2018
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I could swear main chick looks exactly like Cara Delevingne.
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Save names, among other QOL features will be added in the next update.
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Does the MC has a story? Or is just a guest in the girl's stories? And have the girls actually stories? So far, I don't see where this game goes. It has great renders, most of the girls look amazing, some of them have realistic personalities (other ones don't, they are too flamboyant) but after 4 updates, I don't actually see what kind of game and story is this. Is just disjointed scenes in which MC will try to befriend and/or score with random girls?
I think the dev knows well how to do great renders, is cultivated enough to write isolated scenes that are OK, but I don't know if he knows how to write a whole script for a game. There are books and tutorials for that, btw.
I think the dev knows well how to do great renders, is cultivated enough to write isolated scenes that are OK, but I don't know if he knows how to write a whole script for a game. There are books and tutorials for that, btw.