Hey just finished your game and the artwork and the characters are awesome, the story, and the map, though mostly under development, shows great potential to be one of the best games in the next few years. I actually hate that I stumble on this game so early.
The only thing that kinda stands out, and this is absolutely just my personal opinion, and should bare no weight to your vision of game development, but maybe can be taken under consideration if that makes sense to you, is that sometimes characters' dialogues are having multiple letters in a word to emphasize on something that they said. Like for example, off the top of my head, almost every character will say things like "He issssssss" or "You areeeeee" or something akin to this effect. And that happens to a lots of characters, which I think might take away their agency a bit, like you might feel like you are having conversation with the same person instead of different people. Personally, I think that there are several ways to achieve the same effect, such as adding exclamation marks!!! Put the words in ALL CAPS, or put the words on bold. I think this could be an alternative way to convey emotions.
