Really well made game, in every aspect: art, details, humor, animations, story, text and grammar. It´s by far the best game I've played in years (within its universe).
But even so, I've found 2 minor things that could be fixed:
- during the cooking scene with Rose, the text says "... and let is sizzle over the fire.". The correct would be: "... and let IT sizzle over the fire.";
- during the conversation with Madeline, when she uses her powers and her eyes are yellow, her name does not appear above the text, just the mc's name (we know it's her speaking, because the text is in bold letters).
That's it for now, and thank you for this high quality game.