- Jun 20, 2017
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Thank you.Just done with it, and its fun and the art is quality throughout.
4 slight issues if you can even call them that.
1 only being able to change time in the tent, might not be an issue as more content is added but now having to go back some screens to forward the time to go back to the screen you were on is a tad tedious.
2 the black sheep, it's not immediately obvious that the one under the tree is not who gets the picture to unlock.
3 having the map unlocked before the place to wash is. I went exploring and then realized it did nothing anywhere at that time.
4 The woodcutters wife mentions that her clothes sometimes get taken so it would be nice if you catch that happening and she has to embarrassingly walk by back to her house as you make small talk with her while perving.
Thank you very much for your feedback!Art looks great, including the semi-animations.
Wish the UI was a bit more game specific.
Game feels heavy, saving and loading or clicking things instead of being snappy either doesn't register or takes a second.
Hoping in the end he does get that orgy with his moms.
Most of the text is great with no typos, or purposefully used ones. The stuff below is just what kind of stood out to me. Left of the colon is in game, right is thoughts or fixes.
Don't worry (or feel guilty) about not being able to support, man. Just enjoy it.Hot damn the art is amazing. If i could afford it, i'd deffo support this on patreon. alas, i have no income
- So you were referring to Ren'py's main UI rather than the game's (bag, map, etc.). I honestly didn't play around much with the gui and maybe it's something we can improve on in the future.The UI seems to be mainly the basic Ren'Py UI for save/load etc. Everything else about the game seems top notch, so it feels like it should have a UI that also is top notch.
I would like a more interesting UI font when choosing save/load etc, also having the non chosen items to not be as hard to see.
Add the option for players to decide on opaqueness of the text box.
Probably should put the patreon icon next to your name on the title screen.
On typos I probably found more but since I couldn't tell if it was the person's personal style in talking. Like having an extra y on a Really. etc. The ones I wrote were mainly the easy to notice, and at least half the things I mentioned are mainly that they wouldn't make too much sense to someone who has English as a second language.
Small edit, if you talk to the princess about pixies, you can't talk to others like the gypsy, makes people miss some laughs by blocking the ability to still ask.
Oh if you aren't yet, make sure to separate your audio. A lot of first time devs shove all their sounds on the music track and thus people who don't want music also lose out on any other sound.
A bit of both.Awesome first start -- question for dev tho... Are you gonna be able to choose who takes the virginity and focus on specific girls or will the game have content that is unavoidable and hardwired into the story regardless of choices made?
where do I find salt and pepper ?
Visible concernCan't wait to see her scenes!
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