jowishg

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The art is gorgeous, and it's so cool to finally play a good looking MC, i'm sick of playing the ugly nerd who's getting laid with all the women for no reason lol
 
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magicnuts

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Just done with it, and its fun and the art is quality throughout.

4 slight issues if you can even call them that.

1 only being able to change time in the tent, might not be an issue as more content is added but now having to go back some screens to forward the time to go back to the screen you were on is a tad tedious.

2 the black sheep, it's not immediately obvious that the one under the tree is not who gets the picture to unlock.

3 having the map unlocked before the place to wash is. I went exploring and then realized it did nothing anywhere at that time.

4 The woodcutters wife mentions that her clothes sometimes get taken so it would be nice if you catch that happening and she has to embarrassingly walk by back to her house as you make small talk with her while perving.
Thank you.
1. I see what you mean. It will, as you point out, be less bothersome in the future when you actually have things to do which will advance time. There is another way to advance time though (only when its afternoon, evening, or night):
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. But I admit that it is not much.

2. The idea behind the photographing sheep is that he's the one who will be taking all the hidden photos. For you to unlock the hidden photos, you'll have to find him. He'll be hiding in random parts of the world. In the afternoons, he's enjoying the scenery near the shepherdess's shack. Maybe it wasn't too clear. We'll add a couple of more hidden photos in the next release.

3. Yeah. Having map locations and not being able to actually go there sucks. We'll be adding them slowly with each character's story.

4. (y)
 
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magicnuts

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Art looks great, including the semi-animations.

Wish the UI was a bit more game specific.

Game feels heavy, saving and loading or clicking things instead of being snappy either doesn't register or takes a second.

Hoping in the end he does get that orgy with his moms.

Most of the text is great with no typos, or purposefully used ones. The stuff below is just what kind of stood out to me. Left of the colon is in game, right is thoughts or fixes.
Thank you very much for your feedback!

- Could you elaborate a bit more about the UI you have in mind? What would you have included/changed?

- About it being a bit heavy, I honestly don't know why. I'm only a novice coder (at best) so I might later have someone check the code and tell me all the things that I've been doing wrong and may be slowing it down.

- Ahh, the orgy... not saying no :LOL:

- Really appreciate that you've put the time to find these typos. You would believe how many times I've read and re-read the text. But still...
 
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gartal

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i love it keep up the good work..................

i can't wait till the next update :love::love::love::love::love:

sorry bro if my f**king government let i would support you on patron :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry: :cry:
 
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The UI seems to be mainly the basic Ren'Py UI for save/load etc. Everything else about the game seems top notch, so it feels like it should have a UI that also is top notch.

I would like a more interesting UI font when choosing save/load etc, also having the non chosen items to not be as hard to see.

Add the option for players to decide on opaqueness of the text box.

Probably should put the patreon icon next to your name on the title screen.

On typos I probably found more but since I couldn't tell if it was the person's personal style in talking. Like having an extra y on a Really. etc. The ones I wrote were mainly the easy to notice, and at least half the things I mentioned are mainly that they wouldn't make too much sense to someone who has English as a second language.

Small edit, if you talk to the princess about pixies, you can't talk to others like the gypsy, makes people miss some laughs by blocking the ability to still ask.

Oh if you aren't yet, make sure to separate your audio. A lot of first time devs shove all their sounds on the music track and thus people who don't want music also lose out on any other sound.
 

aderpofni

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Fantastic first release! The art is great, characters revealed so far are well done, and it's obvious a lot of effort went into development. Definitely adding to my support list.
 
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LionHeart131

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Awesome first start -- question for dev tho... Are you gonna be able to choose who takes the virginity and focus on specific girls or will the game have content that is unavoidable and hardwired into the story regardless of choices made?
 

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The UI seems to be mainly the basic Ren'Py UI for save/load etc. Everything else about the game seems top notch, so it feels like it should have a UI that also is top notch.

I would like a more interesting UI font when choosing save/load etc, also having the non chosen items to not be as hard to see.

Add the option for players to decide on opaqueness of the text box.

Probably should put the patreon icon next to your name on the title screen.

On typos I probably found more but since I couldn't tell if it was the person's personal style in talking. Like having an extra y on a Really. etc. The ones I wrote were mainly the easy to notice, and at least half the things I mentioned are mainly that they wouldn't make too much sense to someone who has English as a second language.

Small edit, if you talk to the princess about pixies, you can't talk to others like the gypsy, makes people miss some laughs by blocking the ability to still ask.

Oh if you aren't yet, make sure to separate your audio. A lot of first time devs shove all their sounds on the music track and thus people who don't want music also lose out on any other sound.
- So you were referring to Ren'py's main UI rather than the game's (bag, map, etc.). I honestly didn't play around much with the gui and maybe it's something we can improve on in the future.

- A lot of the typos you found were valid and I'll be correcting them for the next build.
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- The reason that I let MC talk with Serena (the princess) right away was that I didn't want it to turn a bit grind-heavy (having you go and talk to each of the characters beforehand). But you're right that that content is potentially lost (in fact we kept forgetting to check these dialogues when playtesting). What do others think?

- The audio files are played using 4 sfx channels and are all separated (if that is what you meant).
 
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Awesome first start -- question for dev tho... Are you gonna be able to choose who takes the virginity and focus on specific girls or will the game have content that is unavoidable and hardwired into the story regardless of choices made?
A bit of both.

There are some scenes that will not be avoidable and they (almost always) will have to do with the main story.

Aside from that, you're free to choose whichever character you want. And do her content.

In fact, once there are enough character stories in place, you will be able to somewhat delay playing the main story's quest and do all the females you want from the wood and the village, before bothering to try to enter the city.
 

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It's just the first version and I'm already in love. Great art style and love the characters. Hope there will be some monster girls and incest added. Great work so far, looking forward to future updates.
 
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