What do you think about my self designed character?

[Rafster]

Really good, you have talent.
With the MC I think that the face is ok, a young man's face, just the body, looks like a 14 years old boy. Compare his back, shoulders, height and arms to the normal females (not the body guard) I think than just making him a little bit taller and with better body proportions would be fine ( sorry, I am tired of childish MCs xD )

Oh yes, I think I agree on this. I focused on his face, but now after taking a second look on the body, if you could make it more.. buff, it would be perfect. He doesn't need to be a huge bodybuilder, but he needs a few extra plates of food lol.

Now, judging from your first photo, the one with the two chicks where he is wearing shorts, will he be an athlete, or an MMA fighter? if that's the case, some muscles would be good, and wouldn't be illogical at all.

 

[HQS-Games]

He is a beginner 'MMA' fighter.

So too buff at the beginning wouldn't really suit the story.

Maybe the player will be able to buff him up during the game.

The base for the characters body is a mixture between genesis 3 male base and Michael 7 base.

So I am honestly a bit surprised that a lot of you think that the body is too juvenile.

 

[Rafster]

He is a beginner 'MMA' fighter.

Hey, the fact he's a beginner does not have to mean he doesn't have muscles. he could have trained in martial arts, or just muscle training for quite some time before the game starts.

For example, on the scene with the ex-girlfriend he looks small compared to her, and the bodyguard girl could take him down easily. Especially the biceps, he does not look really threatening, unless that's your intention.

Your idea of buff him later can also work too.

 

[DorianGreyEminence]

Unique characters like this will always put a game up a few ticks on my interest meter. Not that I don't enjoy watching Jill Valentine get fucked by every man, woman, futa, and creature ever thought of, but I'm always a little more excited about new faces in these games.

 

[Yngling]

Hey, the fact he's a beginner does not have to mean he doesn't have muscles. he could have trained in martial arts, or just muscle training for quite some time before the game starts.

For example, on the scene with the ex-girlfriend he looks small compared to her, and the bodyguard girl could take him down easily. Especially the biceps, he does not look really threatening, unless that's your intention.

Your idea of buff him later can also work too.

He could also just be a featherweight.

Just because he doesn't look very muscular, doesn't mean he isn't dangerous.

Some MMA fighter look pretty scrawny. Some look a tad overweight. Both can be dangerous.

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[Tataro]

You should change her asshole. You put a mans asshole onto your women. I made a thread about this a few years ago:
https://f95zone.to/threads/use-of-male-assholes-for-female-models.16888/


Other than that its good work.

 

[woody554]

So I would be thankful for honest opinions on this character. The base was the standard genesis 3 female which I transformed with a shitload of morphs, props and shaders.

she's got a great personality.

 

[Deleted member 2741424]

Looks as good as any purchased character to me. I'd never know the difference. Nice job!

 

[Anonimed]

He is a beginner 'MMA' fighter.

So too buff at the beginning wouldn't really suit the story.

Maybe the player will be able to buff him up during the game.

The base for the characters body is a mixture between genesis 3 male base and Michael 7 base.

So I am honestly a bit surprised that a lot of you think that the body is too juvenile.

But even if he isn't an athlete, his skeleton looks childish, for example compare the distance between shoulders, and the proportion between his pelvis and his shoulders, and he is shorter than all the females. And for the meat, well he needs to eat more xD not even to look muscular, just to look like an grown man. I think that is because maybe you added meat to the basic female model and that makes like the male model is smaller.

 

[Anonimed]

He could also just be a featherweight.

Just because he doesn't look very muscular, doesn't mean he isn't dangerous.

Some MMA fighter look pretty scrawny. Some look a tad overweight. Both can be dangerous.

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Wtf the look the arms of the featherweight, are bigs and the dude is shredded bro xD, he looks strong

 

[HQS-Games]

Did anybody ask for a muscle bitch?

No?

Well, here is one anyway.

What do you think about such characters slightly outside the norm?

 

[Deleted member 5410619]

Did anybody ask for a muscle bitch?

No?

Well, here is one anyway.

What do you think about such characters slightly outside the norm?

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Left to right:
Ew. Femdom is disguisting. Grandma head, Not my style of clothing, Hello servant, You look lovely today.

 

[Yngling]

Did anybody ask for a muscle bitch?

No?

Well, here is one anyway.

What do you think about such characters slightly outside the norm?

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Outside the norm is fine. Welcome even. But personally I'm not a fan of BDSM clothing/subculture.

 

[Anonimed]

Did anybody ask for a muscle bitch?

No?

Well, here is one anyway.

What do you think about such characters slightly outside the norm?

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I love bondage, slaving and domination, but personally I am not very fond of muscle women. But that maid

 

[Anonimed]

Can I ask, what type of game are you making? (Kinks, gameplay, plot, etc.)

 

[HQS-Games]

It will be a game in the vain of classics like BB (but with less grinding) and man of the house only a bit kinkier.

That means some maledom/femdom/light bdsm and other fetishes but also a lot of vanilla sex.

I don't want to reveal too much about the plot. But it's a 'revenge' story. You get wronged by some mean bitches and have to pay them back (obviously the payback includes fucking/dominating them ).

Also a good quest journal is a priority.

I personally hate sandbox games where you don't know what to do.

 

[HQS-Games]

Your neighbour with her 'roommates'.

Let's call the guy Danny. All are of legal age of course.

Do they look young enough for you Malaficus?

Otherwise we might run into legal trouble.

 

[Atemsiel]

Kinda looks like Jennifer Lawrence lol. Still, that's not a bad thing. Good luck with your project.

 

[HQS-Games]

Who?

Danny?

And thanks.

 

[Atemsiel]

Who?

Danny?

And thanks.

Whoever the first girl you posted is. I haven't read all of the posts here so it could be Danny, no clue. But yeah, her face reminds me of jennifer lawrence for some reason.