+ Younger girl (Elaine) looks hot. Nice model, didn't see that one before
+ Liked the little prologue, mild sci-fi vibes
+ Really liked the render quality and lighting, looked nice throughout - but sadly, only 720p and it shows
+ Eva looks nice
+- Elizabeth and Lucy are ok
+- Pretty bad Engrish at times, but not that bad
- Adrienne is ugly. She looks like she's 50 something
- Hazel looks like a mustard-colored rotisserie chicken
- The UI and the sandbox stuff, along with the convoluted tutorial on them, look really bad
- Using additional key bindings to navigate instead of using the mouse is the most unneeded feature I've ever seen
The sandbox was so infuriatingly confusing, hard to use and killing the fun without adding any worth to the game. You had me excited up until the moment the tutorial for the UI / sandbox started. From that moment on, I really tried having fun but it killed all the fun and after 10 more minutes of clicking through stuff, I just quit and checked the pictures via Unren... such a shame. I hope the dev will rethink this approach. If this was just a classic visual novel without sandbox stuff, it could be a hit. Elaine is just so hot.
Thank you, thank you very much for your feedback.
I am glad you liked some of the models, I tried to make everyone unique and different but mostly I wanted their characters to fit their personality.
I wanted to go a bit more sci-fi and maybe add some fighting elements too in the next version of the game, for now its just introduction to the story.
About 720p renders, I am aware of that but sadly I can't afford to get better machine to get all 1080p renders just yet, I know how bad it looks believe me but since there were so many renders, I didn't wanted to kill my machine even before my game is released, I promise I will get all the renders re-rendered in 1080p soon though.
About English...its not my first language, I am sorry if its, well bad. I will and still am trying to improve it.
I thought Adrienne looked good, but if players don't like it then I will make changes to the character and re-render her scenes in the next version, she is going to be one of the important characters in the story, so I will try to make a better model of her.
About the UI and the tutorial, criticism is noted, I got a bit too carried away with them, I will try to improve them too, I am not good at making UI, but I will try my best.
The reason I made it a sandbox game is because, I thought it fits the tone of the game and the free roam element of the game better.
I still don't think I will completely remove the sandbox I will try to improve it a bit, but I will still think about removing it.
And mostly, sorry if clicking is a bit too much of an hassle, I thought leaving all the navigation to keyboard and character interactions to mouse was a good idea, but clearly not.
I will see if I can improve upon that.
Anyway thanks for your time and feedback, I really appreciate you checking it out.
I guess I got a bit lenient thinking this play-style would fit most people, I will try to improve on it