VN Ren'Py Where the Heart Is [S1 Rev1] [CheekyGimp]

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acewinz

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botc76 said:
The finished version is actually a further improvement over the beta.
I like the Monica scene more now, though I still think it ends too abruptly.
After all this waiting it didn't seem to last long enough. At least a second go should have been in there. Apart from that it was well done.

The Katie scene... I'll be honest here, it was a bit too much. If Katie really wants to work on how she behaves, it's about time it actually showed.
I don't mind her being a potty-mouth, I don't mind her cursing, but not all of the fucking time.
For me, that she couldn't keep from sounding like a drunk sailor for one evening made her less attractive.
And that's a pity, because she looked so gorgeous with her hair down and she was sweet whenever she let her real emotions through.
I don't want her to become a sweet-talking demure princess, but I would really appreciate it if she didn't run her mouth all the fucking time.

A romantic dinner should be romantic, not just about messing with the waiter.

I don't want to be too critical, I really liked the episode, both the scenes with Wanda and Angel and the Monica photo-shot, I liked the morning after with Jenna and I liked the Katy parts, but I would really have liked them more if she had a little more restraint.
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I just finished it at least the most important routes for me anyway and i just have to say my God!!! 15 episode's is all it took but we got there bois and girls we finaly fucking got there. Amazing episode loved every bit of it. Cheeky you outdid yourself on this one hand's down. Time to get my hand's on that fan sign, it's been long overdue. Can't wait for more, this game's episode's is like waiting for a breaking bad episode to come out when it was on going or GoT. That level of craving is real for this one. :love:
 
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Skylaroo said:
Simple answer, her being a loving mom to Katie/Jenna. So it starts with Katie and Jenna being OK with sharing the MC (easy enough to write for that), and then Monica found out and initially angry but eventually persuaded by them because MC makes them happy and it'd suck to break the family up just because they wouldn't share MC when MC loved all of them the same.

Note that harem doesn't necessarily have to mean group sex. So Monica could be ok with sharing MC without actually having to have sex with Katie and Jenna.
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yes, that seems like a plausible outcome. and i agree with you on the group sex thingy
 
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jamdan said:
She is working on it, its still very much a defensive mechanism I think. She was really struggling just to tell MC that she loves him. It'll take time for her to be fully "restrained" and not have to throw in some banter or something to feel comfortable with herself and her emotions.
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Of course it's partially a defense mechanism, I get that and I would have been fine with "some" of anything, but not a constant barrage.

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I usually choose my options by how the girls react to it and with Katie it always seems that she takes it badly whenever you actually say she should change, so I never did that and naive as I am I thought her constant talk about how she wants to change does have an effect.
Do you happen to know how telling her to actually work on her "potty-mouth" affects her score?
 
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Uhh... wasn't Katie a virgin prior to our corrupting influence and practiced seduction? Like all she'd ever done was vanilla kissing..... I would assume she would still be that way if you avoid courting her. So slut seems a counter intuitive descriptor.

She certainly does have more mood variance than some other major characters, but for late teen-early 20s aged women with self-confidence issues and a bitch exterior as a defense mechanism. Human beings aren't consistently on a given mood/attitude; I find Jenna's character model very attractive, but she's always felt flat and two dimensional compared to Katie and Monica to me.

I mean her character arc is basically
1. "I'm an ugly antisocial nerd"
2. *MC manipulates J towards gradual corruption*
3. "OH WAIT! I got a tan and realized I had a 10/10 body the whole time, so I don't have any interpersonal conflict! And now I want MC to plow my ass cause I saw it on the interwebz!"

If anything Jenna is probably dirtier in practice than Katie is...

The main problem here is that MC didn't actually improve her social and interpersonal skills, he just pushed her towards being comfortable naked (but specifically with him) and made her want the D. If you do anything other than solo Jenna path for ending, you're gonna ruin that girl for good; you've made her even less self-sufficient than before you got there...


Idk, I felt like Katie's arc, including the controversial (but in my opinion not far-fetched or altogether unrealistic) revenge porn chapter, you were actually helping her to confront and hopefully resolve the obstacles in her life (again, certainly not in the most positive, healthy way, but Karma's a bitch). With Jenna you're just grooming a fucktoy.

I'll take a somewhat erratic (again, young females are rarely held up as the pinnacle of emotional stability) sensitive girl with a hard shell over stagnant conversation; you measure your progress with Jenna by how naked she gets each time she comes to see you, which is way too on the nose...
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Actually, I am not interested in either Ketiе or Jenna. Not any courtship for them, I tried to keep their lust points in the red. The fact that Ketiе is a virgin does not play any role, for me she can fuck with everyone in a row, and the fact that there also appears lesbian inclinations, so in general she can walk in the woods.
 
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I'm working on the new version of the Incest+Walktrough Mod, but in the new version the name of Monica isn't changed. i've searched all the files, but i don't see any difference to EP14. Usually that controls the script.rpy with the names, but in EP15 it doesn't seem to work.
Everything I change in EP15.rpy will be adopted, only Monica's name won't work.

maybe someone can give me a tip on how to fix this.

Thank you

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DrAddy said:
I'm working on the new version of the Incest+Walktrough Mod, but in the new version the name of Monica isn't changed. i've searched all the files, but i don't see any difference to EP14. Usually that controls the script.rpy with the names, but in EP15 it doesn't seem to work.
Everything I change in EP15.rpy will be adopted, only Monica's name won't work.

maybe someone can give me a tip on how to fix this.

Thank you

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Why is incest needed here?
 
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acewinz

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botc76 said:
Of course it's partially a defense mechanism, I get that and I would have been fine with "some" of anything, but not a constant barrage.



I usually choose my options by how the girls react to it and with Katie it always seems that she takes it badly whenever you actually say she should change, so I never did that and naive as I am I thought her constant talk about how she wants to change does have an effect.
Do you happen to know how telling her to actually work on her "potty-mouth" affects her score?
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So far telling her you wouldn't change her gives a nice boost in relations, but asking her to change a little or a lot only sets how high her change variable is without any negative relations hit.
 
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LantisGT

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Episode 15 was kind of a disapointment, except for Monica the best part was the one with the lawyer. This game used to build a story around very nice milfs except for Monica´s daughter´s but for a while now it feel like only Katie here Katie there....

Would not even be surprised if the game gets renamed to "Where the Katie is" at some point.
Sorry but thats just me, i´m happy for all those who like her but personally i cant stand that wannabe goddess dumb teeny anymore. For me i would love to see way more Jolina and Bella and Elaine. Even Zarah, which has no appeal to me, does suit the story and has her place in the Game. Comparing the daughters, Jenna is nice and also part of the story, Katie feels like to be there to be worshipped for basically...nothing?

Of course thats just my current subjective sense to where the game is going and feels like for me.
And all Katie lovers feel free to hate-inbox me :p:p:p :ROFLMAO::ROFLMAO::ROFLMAO:
 
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