Ren'Py Whispers of Desire [v0.30] [Mr_Fable]

[Enlight432]

Mr Fable
I gave it a full-star review, but I really hope not all the females in this game are just some combo of bitch and slut. I mean, it seems like Sarah's the only one who isn't, right? 'Cause since a big part of this game is about the male protagonist, the other female characters are super important too. That psychiatrist here was such a bitch; she totally loved seeing a chance to screw up Sarah's life, and she's smiling and happy about it.

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I haven't finished the update yet, but it seems Eva has been blackmailed here. If she's been blackmailed, she still counts as a character with an attractive look and a captivating aura for me. But if she wants to ruin the great relationship between the MC and Sarah over just a small favor, then I'll agree with you, her appeal for me would really diminish
My personal preference is for variety
We should have both positive, likable, and allied characters
As well as negative, "slutty," and enemy characters
If everyone is an ally and positive, it gets boring
If everyone is an enemy and "slutty" it gets boring too

 

[Eleanorduval]

I haven't finished the update yet, but it seems Eva has been blackmailed here. If she's been blackmailed, she still counts as a character with an attractive look and a captivating aura for me. But if she wants to ruin the great relationship between the MC and Sarah over just a small favor, then I'll agree with you, her appeal for me would really diminish
My personal preference is for variety
Both positive, lovable, and allied characters
And negative, slutty, and protagonist-enemy characters
If everyone is an ally and positive, it gets boring
If everyone is an enemy and "slutty" it gets boring too

boring for u maybe keep in your mind,the reds line u mention are necessary because they are NTR/NTS classic.An example U will never find a lovely enemy in a NTR game.

Each character have his own personality.I got inspression emma are nice girl.John and Jessica seem to be nice too,but maybe is wrong about it (she is just playfull).

Dr eva role in between in my opinion,she can play for both team.If she help alex and sarah maybe she will espace from the blackmail.A option to be considerate in the future maybe?If it is too risky she should switch to team Alex-sarah.

 

[PonderingPotatoPal]

I haven't finished the update yet, but it seems Eva has been blackmailed here. If she's been blackmailed, she still counts as a character with an attractive look and a captivating aura for me. But if she wants to ruin the great relationship between the MC and Sarah over just a small favor, then I'll agree with you, her appeal for me would really diminish
My personal preference is for variety
We should have both positive, likable, and allied characters
As well as negative, "slutty," and enemy characters
If everyone is an ally and positive, it gets boring
If everyone is an enemy and "slutty" it gets boring too

Yeah, I'm totally down with a mix of both too. That combo could be awesome too

 

[Mr Fable]

Mr Fable
I gave it a full-star review, but I really hope not all the females in this game are just some combo of bitch and slut. I mean, it seems like Sarah's the only one who isn't, right? 'Cause since a big part of this game is about the male protagonist, the other female characters are super important too. That psychiatrist here was such a bitch; she totally loved seeing a chance to screw up Sarah's life, and she's smiling and happy about it.

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Thank you for the feedback. Hopefully next update will answer some of these questions.

 

[Mr Fable]

And Jessica just seems like a total slut, like anyone can just bang her? And that secretary, she kinda seems like the boss's slut, but I'm not really sure.
I'm just guessing here, maybe I'm totally wrong. Hope it's not like that. Seriously, hope we get some actually good female characters.

I wouldn't count them all as sluts.. maybe just one of them. But which one ? ...

 

[Eleanorduval]

I wouldn't count them all as sluts.. maybe just one of them. But which one ? ...

For jessica is a lifestyle,like i said she playfull it is doesn't mean she is bad.There is more bitchy bestie,like kylie from memories.

 

[Mr Fable]

Dev, I understand that in addition to ntr/nts, there will be a loyalty patch in the game? If so, I think you need to put it in the game description (or indicate in the tags) that ntr/nts can be avoided, so you can possibly attract more players to your game, since not everyone uses the search to find information. At the moment, the game looks good even for me, who doesn't like ntr/nts. Good luck with the development.

Thank you for the suggestion. And glad you enjoyed the game so far.

 

[Enlight432]

I wouldn't count them all as sluts.. maybe just one of them. But which one ? ...

A guessing game, huh? lol
I guess Abigail is a slut, a very short skirt at work... but it's not strong evidence
We have no logical evidence for the other girls
We have to wait

Dr eva role in between in my opinion,she can play for both team.If she help alex and sarah maybe she will espace from the blackmail.A option to be considerate in the future maybe?If it is too risky she should switch to team Alex-sarah.

That's a good idea
As NullVector said, one aspect of this game is a male protagonist, Eva can be a great love interest instead of a home-wrecker

 

[DressedToThrill]

I think the German translation should remain the most formal High-German, especially during the pornographic scenes, because intercourse in the German Empire is strictly unemotional and only for the sake of procreating. That is making new workers for the munitions factories, and soldiers for the Kaisers army. And also the occasional musician for the Prussian marching bands.

 

[bababooi]

Mr Fable

Given the tags (specifically swinging and NTR, which happen to not be my thing), would it be accurate to assume this project does not allow the player to keep the husband on the straight and narrow while the wife does the corruption stuff on her own and in secret?

hmmm i will assume this is indeed not in the cards then.

 

[Mr Fable]

hmmm i will assume this is indeed not in the cards then.

It is in the cards, but under certain conditions . If the husband is loving and caring, Sarah will probably not step out looking for intimacy (unless encouraged by Alex of course). Its difficult to imagine that as something Sarah would do.
But if Alex becomes too controlling, or if he neglects Sarahs sexual needs, then she might look for release somewhere else.

The lust bar on Sarahs character stats shows how ready she is for sex. If it stays at full for too long (when the second heart lights up) she might release the need her self. If that starts to happen frequently she might look for outside intimacy even if Alex is straight and narrow.

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

It is in the cards, but under certain conditions . If the husband is loving and caring, Sarah will probably not step out looking for intimacy (unless encouraged by Alex of course). Its difficult to imagine that as something Sarah would do.
But if Alex becomes too controlling, or if he neglects Sarahs sexual needs, then she might look for release somewhere else.

The lust bar on Sarahs character stats shows how ready she is for sex. If it stays at full for too long (when the second heart lights up) she might release the need her self. If that starts to happen frequently she might look for outside intimacy even if Alex is straight and narrow.

And ofc, balance in all things, let's hope the inverse is true too if the mmc has high lust and Sarah is 'too prude'.

 

[Enlight432]

Dev, I understand that in addition to ntr/nts, there will be a loyalty patch in the game? If so, I think you need to put it in the game description (or indicate in the tags) that ntr/nts can be avoided, so you can possibly attract more players to your game, since not everyone uses the search to find information. At the moment, the game looks good even for me, who doesn't like ntr/nts. Good luck with the development.

I didn't know we have a loyalty path!
The existence of this path is another strong point for this game
And it indirectly serves as a strength for MC's and Sara's personalities, showing how capable and intelligent they are to carry the story to the end without any Netorare or sharing events
This game is getting too good

 

[Eleanorduval]

say Mr fable how u get dom/sub points and are they linked to other variable too?

 

[Mr Fable]

say Mr fable how u get dom/sub points and are they linked to other variable too?

Dom and sub points can change how to react to a situation. Whether you watch silently or intervene, or stand up for you self. They will be used much later in the game., to trigger small events.

 

[MeltingTeapot]

And ofc, balance in all things, let's hope the inverse is true too if the mmc has high lust and Sarah is 'too prude'.

That's a really good point you brought up.
How much is this game gonna focus on Alex with other women?
So far, it's been like 90% on Sara with other people.

The dev putting more focus on Sara's relationships with others? That's amazing, truly awesome.
But it needs a little balance, otherwise the MC is gonna turn into a total loser and just a side character.
My two cents:
60% focus/gameplay on Sara with others.
40% focus/gameplay on Alex with others.

 

[Pr0GamerJohnny]

That's a really good point you brought up.
How much is this game gonna focus on Alex with other women?
So far, it's been like 90% on Sara with other people.

The dev putting more focus on Sara's relationships with others? That's amazing, truly awesome.
But it needs a little balance, otherwise the MC is gonna turn into a total loser and just a side character.
My two cents:
60% focus/gameplay on Sara with others.
40% focus/gameplay on Alex with others.

I imagine certainly some of it - there'd be no reason to introduce the new hot intern otherwise!

 

[Mr Fable]

That's a really good point you brought up.
How much is this game gonna focus on Alex with other women?
So far, it's been like 90% on Sara with other people.

The dev putting more focus on Sara's relationships with others? That's amazing, truly awesome.
But it needs a little balance, otherwise the MC is gonna turn into a total loser and just a side character.
My two cents:
60% focus/gameplay on Sara with others.
40% focus/gameplay on Alex with others.

He will get some action too. Also if you really look at it, Alex have more potential love interests than Sarah right now.

 

[Enlight432]

That's a really good point you brought up.
How much is this game gonna focus on Alex with other women?
So far, it's been like 90% on Sara with other people.

The dev putting more focus on Sara's relationships with others? That's amazing, truly awesome.
But it needs a little balance, otherwise the MC is gonna turn into a total loser and just a side character.
My two cents:
60% focus/gameplay on Sara with others.
40% focus/gameplay on Alex with others.

Conjectures about the reason for Mr. Fable's approach
Globally, men generally have less resistance and are more prone to deviance – worldwide statistics
That's why the developer focuses more on Sarah's encounters with others, aiming to see if her resistance is broken or not, depending on the player and the chosen path
However, you made a good point; a 70-30 ratio is good because Alex 'probably' has less resistance. If that's the case, then Alex, being in that 30% category, would engage in sexual acts with others more frequently than Sarah, who is in the 70% category
My remarks are based on global statistics and adult game statistics, which show men having less resistance

 

[Mr Fable]

Conjectures about the reason for Mr. Fable's approach
Globally, men generally have less resistance and are more prone to deviance – worldwide statistics
That's why the developer focuses more on Sarah's encounters with others, aiming to see if her resistance is broken or not, depending on the player and the chosen path
However, you made a good point; a 70-30 ratio is good because Alex 'probably' has less resistance. If that's the case, then Alex, being in that 30% category, would engage in sexual acts with others more frequently than Sarah, who is in the 70% category
My remarks are based on global statistics and adult game statistics, which show men having less resistance

This.
Alex's resolve will be tested. But not as much as Sarah's. Its difficult to give percentages right now though.