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LUISIL

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Oct 11, 2021
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Well done buddy! you really improved language in the dialogue.
I was secretly expecting an extra or a bonus but don't mind me, it just greedy me.
OK...I'll sit and wait for chapter 2. Don't make it too short, I prefer waiting a little longer if a I'm gonna have a little more fun.
P.S: watch this
she looks alike (A LOT) your FMC, but redhead
10/10 for you
 
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AngryDogStudio

Newbie
Game Developer
Nov 8, 2024
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Well done buddy! you really improved language in the dialogue.
I was secretly expecting an extra or a bonus but don't mind me, it just greedy me.
OK...I'll sit and wait for chapter 2. Don't make it too short, I prefer waiting a little longer if a I'm gonna have a little more fun.
P.S: watch this
she looks alike (A LOT) your FMC, but redhead
10/10 for you
Thanks, friend! I wanted to fix the text as quickly as possible, so I decided not to include bonus materials with this patch, but they’ll definitely come in the future. Thanks for sticking with me!
 
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uiosi

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Aug 4, 2019
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it's nice but some sentences in english are bucherd hard. Also somtimes i dont know sems like girl is talking but it's mc... I dont know i think alot get lost in direct translation.
Amazing pictures thou, and some realy hard transitions woud think there is some dialog missing or somting. She dose soming bum new day.
 

bamachine

Well-Known Member
Nov 17, 2020
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Needs a serious proofreader, that was some major Engrish right there. Also, zero time spent as the FMC, shown in the tags. We just watched some delta(not even worthy of being called a beta) cuck, seeing his wife go straight from faithful to complete whore, overnight and loving it.

This needs to slow down a bit, if it is going to be more than just a few chapters. Not AWAM slow but not breaking the sound barrier fast either. Also, not clear if this is just going to be a kineti novel or if the player will be given any choices.

While, I like the idea of the FMC, who we would be in control over, becoming an office slut, over time. If it stays as yet another cuckold simulator, count me out.
 
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