JoleenStar
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I hope I see way more chapters first before giving a try.
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Wow these are some interesting doorways.
I am getting used that AI artists do not seem to have any clue how human anatomy works, but that even doorways are a mystery to them is a new one.
I didn't understand half of what i was reading.
Here are some examples of what i mean:
First image says "1 chapter". It should probably say "Chapter 1".
"Its a story about love" should probably be "This is a story about love."
"We live in a small town, the infrastructure and safety of which we are quite satisfied with" ->
"We live in a small town and we’re pretty happy with its infrastructure and how safe it feels."
"Our love began literately from a school desk" ->
"Our love literally began at our school desks. "
"I'm in music. I'm not as successful in my hard way, unlike May"
. Your hard way? what does that mean?
"...think about anything" ->
"... worry about anything"
I'm just 3 screens in and it seems to continue throughout the game.
If you are using AI for all the graphics you might as well use AI to rewrite the dialog to be more correct.
Allot of the text is a bit awkward and strange, like its been directly translated from another language.
Here are some examples of what i mean:
First image says "1 chapter". It should probably say "Chapter 1".
"Its a story about love" should probably be "This is a story about love."
"We live in a small town, the infrastructure and safety of which we are quite satisfied with" ->
"We live in a small town and we’re pretty happy with its infrastructure and how safe it feels."
"Our love began literately from a school desk" ->
"Our love literally began at our school desks. "
"I'm in music. I'm not as successful in my hard way, unlike May"
. Your hard way? what does that mean?
"...think about anything" ->
"... worry about anything"
I'm just 3 screens in and it seems to continue throughout the game.
If you are using AI for all the graphics you might as well use AI to rewrite the dialog to be more correct.
Allot of the text is a bit awkward and strange, like its been directly translated from another language.
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wildride69
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Nice to see you! I really enjoy My New Girlfriend. But i see a lot of errors in your visual style too. I'm not alone. It's AI, not all is good.
Also i want to upgrade visual style in next chapters, i know its not excellent. Thanks for help.
DimitarM12
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oi if you dont like the game dont play it and dont even bother to comment lol...
great, hope to see more chapters.
great, hope to see more chapters.
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At first NTR, but i want to create and illustrate psycholocial transformation from NTR to NTS. Like emotional shield. It's interesting that in real life husbands can do similiar transformations.
kristo0086
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In first chapter more NTR, but in future chapters more NTS.
1Teddy1
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kristo0086
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I’m open to it, but more likely in future parts, as it will require significantly more work.
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Oh, crap.
Thank you.
SymbioticLife
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But also MNGF doesn't have many visual errors in the more recent stuff... and most visual errors with AI can be easily corrected with inpaint or photoshop, or using control nets. But again, you don't seem to even have a proper upscaler here. Comparing to MNGF is a bit of a stretch.
I'm trying to give helpful critique, there's a lot of ways to increase visual consistency and quality in AI. Just saying "ah, it's AI" is not particularly accurate when there's so many tools now for corrections. Like, two different colored eyes or a dude caked in make up or 6 fingered hands are all not present in MNGF. Or Shadows, for that matter.