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Now I'm thinking about what to work on - whether to rework the art from the first сh, or work on the second. In both cases, I intend to release content by the end of the year. Thanks for your interest!
If you allow my humble opinion:
What I like to see and what I'd do, would be: work in the chapters til its completion and then Reworked the entire story to deliver a final version after you've heard all the feedback,
But its just my POV.
 
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AngryDogStudio

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If you allow my humble opinion:
What I like to see and what I'd do, would be: work in the chapters til its completion and then Reworked the entire story to deliver a final version after you've heard all the feedback,
But its just my POV.
Yes, there is a logic. But I wouldn’t want old art to prevent new people from enjoying the game :giggle:
 

LUISIL

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nah bro, this game is just a straight up disrespect. ZERO effort from the developer.
the funny thing is that the first thing you see when you start the game is his PATREON! HAHA!
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Bad moon rising from Credence Clearwater Revival is playing in the background and its sound louder and louder and out of the blue you hear: "Brazil decime ke se sieeente!" and a group of BWC's argentinians look at your sorry ass. Better start running and go back to your hole. Seriously dude...constructive feedback. God damn... why I do even bother ? Loose your shit all you want, I will not read a line that comes from you
 

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So, I finally got around to playing this. I don't know what to say, Where I can sorta see the potential here. Chapter 1 is a bit of a mess. This game needs a proof reader more than anything to be honest... there's so much Engrish here, the wife's name flip-flops between the custom one and the default one and there are numerous typos. The are errors in a lot of the generated images, a lot of errors. there's 6 fingers here and there, elements in the image that look out of place and body proportions that just look out of place.

For an opening chapter that is obviously designed to attract Patrons given that massive splash screen at the start. This could have been so much better.
 
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So, I finally got around to playing this. I don't know what to say, Where I can sorta see the potential here. Chapter 1 is a bit of a mess. This game needs a proof reader more than anything to be honest... there's so much Engrish here, the wife's name flip-flops between the custom one and the default one and there are numerous typos. The are errors in a lot of the generated images, a lot of errors. there's 6 fingers here and there, elements in the image that look out of place and body proportions that just look out of place.

For an opening chapter that is obviously designed to attract Patrons given that massive splash screen at the start. This could have been so much better.
Thanks for attention to my game. Translations already fixed, image with 6 fingers fix. And i also working on rework art in general.
 
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Thanks for attention to my game. Translations already fixed, image with 6 fingers fix. And i also working on rework art in general.
My apologies on that I downloaded this game when it dropped and only got round to playing it today. So obviously if its updated, I missed that. I meant more encouragement than discouragement Cause I said, I see a bit of potential here.
 
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I wanted to share my thoughts on this game. I haven’t played it yet, but I already have a sense of what’s going on. Yes, the game and its content might not be the best, and you should acknowledge that (there’s no final point of perfection—there’s always room for improvement). I’ve been through a similar process myself, and I can tell you for sure that this is completely normal. The criticism you’re receiving is also normal. Take it constructively, because there are areas that genuinely need improvement. However, keep in mind that you’re still at the early stages of your development path, and it’s physically impossible to achieve perfection as quickly as others who’ve been at it much longer. Consistency and steady improvement will lead you to success.
Don’t try to make this game as perfect as some people demand here. Instead, create it the way you envision it while continuing to improve what’s already there. Once you’ve gained more experience and understanding, you can move on to new, better projects. Remember that you’re developing this game on your own (as far as I understand), which is no small feat and takes time. Truly legendary creations often come from teams, as seen with iconic games from NLT Media. So, I hope that in the future, you’ll find like-minded individuals to collaborate with and create something extraordinary.
Good luck!
 

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I wanted to share my thoughts on this game. I haven’t played it yet, but I already have a sense of what’s going on. Yes, the game and its content might not be the best, and you should acknowledge that (there’s no final point of perfection—there’s always room for improvement). I’ve been through a similar process myself, and I can tell you for sure that this is completely normal. The criticism you’re receiving is also normal. Take it constructively, because there are areas that genuinely need improvement. However, keep in mind that you’re still at the early stages of your development path, and it’s physically impossible to achieve perfection as quickly as others who’ve been at it much longer. Consistency and steady improvement will lead you to success.
Don’t try to make this game as perfect as some people demand here. Instead, create it the way you envision it while continuing to improve what’s already there. Once you’ve gained more experience and understanding, you can move on to new, better projects. Remember that you’re developing this game on your own (as far as I understand), which is no small feat and takes time. Truly legendary creations often come from teams, as seen with iconic games from NLT Media. So, I hope that in the future, you’ll find like-minded individuals to collaborate with and create something extraordinary.
Good luck!
Yeah,I also agree with him....I know many people bad mounthing you for AI but I appreciate your hard work,Hope that you will continue this project,improve little by little.I suggest you to make the black man looking somewhat intimidating & alpha type, then it will be perfect.After all this is basically netorare game where any ntr lover will not appreciate cute blush cheek antagonist.
 

AngryDogStudio

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I wanted to share my thoughts on this game. I haven’t played it yet, but I already have a sense of what’s going on. Yes, the game and its content might not be the best, and you should acknowledge that (there’s no final point of perfection—there’s always room for improvement). I’ve been through a similar process myself, and I can tell you for sure that this is completely normal. The criticism you’re receiving is also normal. Take it constructively, because there are areas that genuinely need improvement. However, keep in mind that you’re still at the early stages of your development path, and it’s physically impossible to achieve perfection as quickly as others who’ve been at it much longer. Consistency and steady improvement will lead you to success.
Don’t try to make this game as perfect as some people demand here. Instead, create it the way you envision it while continuing to improve what’s already there. Once you’ve gained more experience and understanding, you can move on to new, better projects. Remember that you’re developing this game on your own (as far as I understand), which is no small feat and takes time. Truly legendary creations often come from teams, as seen with iconic games from NLT Media. So, I hope that in the future, you’ll find like-minded individuals to collaborate with and create something extraordinary.
Good luck!
Your words calm me down and help me get back on track. Thank you.
 

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While I appreciate the fact that you shared your game and you seem like you are being really responsive and receptive to feedback, you still need to put a Kinetic Novel tag on your game. This is due to the fact it does not have a single decision. This will save a lot of heartache from reviewers coming expecting more of a game and being disappointed.

Keep your head up and good luck continuing to create!

Edit: You did it - Thanks!
 
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AngryDogStudio

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While I appreciate the fact that you shared your game and you seem like you are being really responsive and receptive to feedback, you still need to put a Kinetic Novel tag on your game. This is due to the fact it does not have a single decision. This will save a lot of heartache from reviewers coming expecting more of a game and being disappointed.

Keep your head up and good luck continuing to create!
Did. Unfortunately, hands don’t get around to everything right away :censored:
 
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