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Released on patreon.
Several days and upload here.
Thank you for waiting!
Several days and upload here.
Thank you for waiting!
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OK...Please dont make those "several" become Weeks Good Sir
I'm confused. This is not exactly what was announced for the second chapter or is it? If so, it seems far too rushed. I don't want to spoil here but last time we didn't even have penetration, and now... And the choices are without consequences.
I mean: you give us three very important choices how we react to her cheating, and it has exactly NO influence on the story, we get the same content. The time feels off, is it days, is it months? Judging by the escalation it has to be months, by this speed there is little left, next update gangbang, that's it. Also it's not clear why the elaborate setup with the computers or the colleague bringing USB sticks or the communication with David if this is not used to get more infos, more pics, more videos more live stream of her actions at the office. All we get are a few pics and he has access to her phone anyway. And we get nothing about her perspective.
Don't get me wrong - there is great potential with the visuals and she is gorgeous, but at the moment it doesn't feel like a story in any way, but just glimpses and a series of rather unconnected pin ups, which are hotter than the story itself.
I mean: you give us three very important choices how we react to her cheating, and it has exactly NO influence on the story, we get the same content. The time feels off, is it days, is it months? Judging by the escalation it has to be months, by this speed there is little left, next update gangbang, that's it. Also it's not clear why the elaborate setup with the computers or the colleague bringing USB sticks or the communication with David if this is not used to get more infos, more pics, more videos more live stream of her actions at the office. All we get are a few pics and he has access to her phone anyway. And we get nothing about her perspective.
Don't get me wrong - there is great potential with the visuals and she is gorgeous, but at the moment it doesn't feel like a story in any way, but just glimpses and a series of rather unconnected pin ups, which are hotter than the story itself.
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Thanks for the feedback. I’m not big on dragging things out either, and I totally get sticking to two erotic arts per chapter—it’s my vibe too. Sorry the pacing didn’t click for you though, I’ll keep that in mind moving forward. Appreciate you weighing in!
Just want your game to be a success and to give this babe the attention she deserves!
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Duuuuude! the spoilers Pleeeease
If you already seen it, please have mercy with those who have to wait several days damn it
If you call that spoilers... I just said things happen fast, not what exactly. That's it. Calm down. Didn't you read the preview at the end of last episode?Duuuuude! the spoilers Pleeeease
If you already seen it, please have mercy with those who have to wait several days damn it
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Have Faith, Trust in the Creator
He, better than anyone, knows what's best for his Oeuvre
He, better than anyone, knows what's best for his Oeuvre
I don't want to give a bad review of this new update because I enjoy the graphics and the sneaky ntr aspect but this new update is all over the place story wise a lot of things that were happening in the 1st chapters have very little to do with the new update. It feels like this new update could be a new story all together. I don't regret spending 5.50 as i feel that any work deserves to be paid but it made me realize that i should maybe wait until june-july and spend another 5.50 for more content and a story better laid out.
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BTW, add choices. Maybe add stats in future. Stay tuned, 3 chapter already in progress
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OH GAWD that was pleasently fast! hands down to you myLord
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Are you saying you might add choices. Adding choices at this point why. Are you going to add them in the beginning or next update. Usually choices are done in the beginning to create the story and progress the story. Stats maybe but for a primarily Kinetic game why bother kinetic is basically fixed path.BTW, add choices. Maybe add stats in future. Stay tuned, 3 chapter already in progress
Thanks for opinion!
I want to develope more interactive games in future, actually.
Just because my vision - it's just more immersive.
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I suggest changing the color of the character names. For example, the gray color of the wife's name doesn't fit at all. Maybe match the hair color or at least the gender... for example, male names are blue and shades like cyan, ultramarin, baby blue, navy blue..., and female names are pink and shades of pink...