This was alright. I like Lexi though she's coming off really one-dimensional atm and hopefully will be more rounded out in the future. Zoe has grown on me a bit after an unfavourable start. Fiona I'm expecting to win me over once she gets in the mix too. The language is kinda flouncy and melodramatic in places (hard to explain), but I read through it all, the bit with Desiree's little friends stood out as having a nice flow and was fairly charming. All the animal analogies were a little awkward to me.
Lexi has some weird stuff going on with her hand during the BJ, it totally changed from it looked the rest of the time.
Main gripe is, why does the MC keep sleeping on his desk when there's a girl over - the dude has a bunk bed. Initially I thought that was an odd thing to have in a single room but he woulda gotten some good use out of it by now.
Also I'm not sure why Bianca wasn't being counted earlier, seemed like a given that she'd tag along with the Zoe (like she did in the other place) and become a member of the team. He knows he needs more players. But she's not on the banner, not in the ingame list, so I'm guessing just not a LI.
I wonder how a harem in this is gonna work out, it doesn't really fit the setting or the girls (unlike some rando dystopian game where the MC is a king or something).
That's not Zoe: