VN Ren'Py Wild Cats [v0.2 Public] [LopaPhi]

[longjohngold]

MC was given a list of the volleyball team members. There were 5 people on the list. Bianca is not in there, so there is no reason for MC to count Bianca as he doesn't know anything about her. Same reason as why he isn't really counting on Desiree either.

Right, that makes sense when he has 0 knowledge of the situation. But once he finds out she's glued to the hip of Zoe, to the point of playing volleyball with her at the private fancy gym then it was pretty clear they were a package deal. Desiree who you mention, is both on the banner and ingame girl list, so my point about Bianca getting the short end of the stick stands.

 

[jvbatman]

Right, that makes sense when he has 0 knowledge of the situation. But once he finds out she's glued to the hip of Zoe, to the point of playing volleyball with her at the private fancy gym then it was pretty clear they were a package deal. Desiree who you mention, is both on the banner and ingame girl list, so my point about Bianca getting the short end of the stick stands.

He asked her and she said no. What else do you want from him?

 

[longjohngold]

He asked her and she said no. What else do you want from him?

Other than the first one, Eve?, they allll said no.

It's not a big deal, just seemed weird how he never paired her with Zoe as a 2-for-1 win. Then the excluded from the in game tracker thing is a separate one of her just not being a LI I guess, but we'll see. It's not like I'm really pushing for her to be one or anything, just seems like she's being kind of left on the side despite being an obvious team-member.

 

[JoeTheMC84]

I downloaded it but it still ends at chapter 1's end for me. I'm not getting and error message or anything but I even started over from the beginning and ctrl-ed my way through and it still kicks me back to the main menu after getting to where chapter 1 ended. Anyone else have this problem or know a fix?

Edit: Seems like I got it working, the pixeldrain version I downloaded didn't work but when I downloaded it from the gofile link it did,

 

[clover0823]

Great game overall; it has definitely been added to my list of AVNs that I actually bother to read through. The story arcs were very enjoyable and refreshing, as most AVNs don't have the most impactful story arcs. However, in this case, I thought it hit all the right beats, especially with Saki, and I’m looking forward to Fiona’s story as well. Additionally, the development of interpersonal relationships between the different team members and the addition and unraveling of more side characters, like Bianca.

 

[JenMistress]

I'll be honest, reading this, kinda want a Lexi and Eve sexy time scene now.

 

[Skylaroo]

Right, that makes sense when he has 0 knowledge of the situation. But once he finds out she's glued to the hip of Zoe, to the point of playing volleyball with her at the private fancy gym then it was pretty clear they were a package deal. Desiree who you mention, is both on the banner and ingame girl list, so my point about Bianca getting the short end of the stick stands.

You're mixing up two different things. The in-game girl list and the banner picture are for main LI only in which Bianca is not one. The story list is a different thing. Sure Bianca spent a lot of time with Zoe, but that still didn't change the fact that her name was not on the list that the MC got. I'm not exactly sure what you really want to happen. If MC counted Bianca, what exactly changed?

It's not like I'm really pushing for her to be one or anything, just seems like she's being kind of left on the side despite being an obvious team-member.

I mean, yes she's purposely left on the side because she is a side character. I'm just really confused. You aren't pushing her to be LI, but you said she got the short end of the stick. IMO, she already got a lot more development than most side characters in other games. She's a great "LI's friend" character with how loyal she is to Zoe and that she's upfront about MC not being her type too. Her being in the team will also give her more opportunities in the future to continue growing as a character, despite not being LI.

 

[OWSam000]

You're mixing up two different things. The in-game girl list and the banner picture are for main LI only in which Bianca is not one. The story list is a different thing. Sure Bianca spent a lot of time with Zoe, but that still didn't change the fact that her name was not on the list that the MC got. I'm not exactly sure what you really want to happen. If MC counted Bianca, what exactly changed?


I mean, yes she's purposely left on the side because she is a side character. I'm just really confused. You aren't pushing her to be LI, but you said she got the short end of the stick. IMO, she already got a lot more development than most side characters in other games. She's a great "LI's friend" character with how loyal she is to Zoe and that she's upfront about MC not being her type too. Her being in the team will also give her more opportunities in the future to continue growing as a character, despite not being LI.

MC may not be the type of man whose Bianca like at the moment, but you can't be sure she won't be in the future.

 

[Zxynthia]

Shit I'm so excited for this one

 

[nasty.pickle]

Really enjoyed the storytelling and characters so far, thanks for all your work LopaPhi !
I couldn't care less about volleyball but it still got me hooked and your passion for the sport comes across clearly and adds a lot of immersion IMHO. Hope you will keep going and that I will be able to buy your game on steam in the (not too distant) future...

MC's character doesn't really bother me that much, I have accepted some time ago that if I'm gonna play these games, 99/100 the MC is not gonna behave like I would want him to, at least he is not a massive juvenile creep, it's refreshing tbh. Doesn't seem that pathetic or femdommed to me, he is desperate in his situation (as mentioned only about 10x in the game), does what he needs to hammer another nail/keep moving forward and I find most of the teasing fun. Quite possibly I'm not as alpha, macho, gigachad as some of the other posters here, but don't see this as being humiliated by the women - by his life situation and some of his past behavior, yes, perhaps, but humility can be a great teacher, let's see if he can find a better balance in his character as he changes further. Some of his introspection/development also seems delivered pretty well - based on his interactions with other characters contrasted with his own behaviour/past - comes out pretty natural and I hope this continues. For 0.2 version and first project apparently, very impressive!

 

[Lovemaking]

Edit: Seems like I got it working, the pixeldrain version I downloaded didn't work but when I downloaded it from the gofile link it did,

Yeah, if Gofile is available. You always download from there. Pixeldrain is dogwater compared to Gofile

 

[Tas Desdemotyranus II]

I hope this shit has a harem ending planned because there is no way a normal person could ever discard any of them.
I hate it.
"Give up" is the canon ending otherwise.

 

[ArhraCole]

I hope this shit has a harem ending planned because there is no way a normal person could ever discard any of them.
I hate it.
"Give up" is the canon ending otherwise.

Harem is in the planned tags on the OP so... probably safe to hope for.

 

[delpgg]

awesome game, awesome update ! really liked it so far.
yes, purification of mc is a little bit rushed but understandable
"humor" tag is already well earned. cant wait for chap 3

 

[Ulrich von Liechtenstein]

I'll be honest, reading this, kinda want a Lexi and Eve sexy time scene now.

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This scene is one of the funniest and hilarious scenes in the game. It killed me when Lexi ran up to Eve and said: dude, it's your type!

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I hope this shit has a harem ending planned because there is no way a normal person could ever discard any of them.
I hate it.
"Give up" is the canon ending otherwise.

I hear you brother, if I had such a choice in my life I don't know what I would do...
Of course in my heart and soul I would want to be with Eva, but Lexi is just a wonderful fun, cheerful, "free as the wind" girl, you can never get bored with her in fact in my life I've only met a couple of people like that each of them left me with memories that are unforgettable.
I see Saki as an extremely loyal and honest person. The very reason she signed up for the trainings stands out a lot I can't imagine how a girl like that could be abandoned.
We also have the intriguing and vulnerable Fiona, the sweetest Desiree and Zoe who is still a mystery. So if you have to pick just one it's not going to be an easy story.
And let's not forget about Bianca also a girl with a difficult fate similar to the MC I think they are on the same line with her. Despite the fact that she likes blondes for some reason she didn't want to date a guy from our protagonist's former team. Strange isn't it?

 

[relic767]

I love Saki so much.
Chapter 2 was just as good as the first, maybe even better. Excellent work.

 

[Pyrforos]

Really loving this so far, Saki has become my favorite and i love her interactions with the MC. Looking forward to see the next chapters in the future.

 

[jvbatman]

I think one thing this game does really well is the pacing. It's not forcing you to go through every trivial moment of every day and often just cuts to the next day for the next big important scene. And when it's doing volleyball stuff it's not dumping endless trivia at you and usually just does a quick montage or just cuts to the end of the practice.

 

[Lovemaking]

Saki has become my favorite and i love her interactions with the MC

Same, she for sure won me over with her mouth of a sailor and straight up comedy + she's adorable as heck.
When i was playing i could literally hear her voice in my head clear as the sky.

 

[jvbatman]

Zoe is my favorite. Not as she is now but I have a thing for the "prissy girl gets grounded by a good hard dicking" type.