Voidyne
I guess the one thing that stands out to me to criticize is that the language (words and concepts like "introvert") and... the eyestone... that stuff is all too modern and too "our world" instead of "other world." A lot of the Japanese anime's have their problems, but usually the isekai's make attempts at making the common sense of the fantasy world a bit different than our world.
But this is just me, it may not bother other people.
The eyestone... LOL... I don't want smartphones following me into fantasy worlds.
The "weak male being beat up by a woman" story device is also tired and over-used.
I like the bit of rpg elements or maybe relationship elements that are clear. We know plainly if we're on a track for friendship with a character, that was nice.
The graphics aren't bad, but then again they're not outstanding either. I've seen a lot worse and I've seen a lot better, just in the AVN bracket of games. For the UI I'd suggest opacity controls for the text box and the ability to name saves, especially if there's going to be branching choices.
Anyway that's just some quick feedback if you're interested.
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