VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Wings of Silicon [Ch. 12] [SinAppeal]

Just dont't bother with this one. Plain unbelivable story, subpar renders and animations, something like 7 sex scenes for whole 12 chapters.
Maybe developers next project will be worth your time, but this one got abandoned in a state, that isn't worth your data, not to mention money

Another case of MC being an absolutely pathetic spineless gerbil and still somehow managing to pull all the women in his vicinity. Also a slob of an MC who happens to be making AVNs for a living and has the social skills of an autistic horse, gee wonder who this character could be based upon? Oh right, it's the author writing a story about himself and his wet fantasies.

game had good renders and sexy Milf and girls. ,but sadly its choice\path system is really broken. seems like if you choose the Harem path, characters and dialogues seems off..often seems like Character speak of fact , choice and actions that you narver played\saw.it's seems, to me , that this happening cuz Harem path wasn't meant to be when general choice patrh code was created! seems game try to fuse the 2 path brutally, not having a proper story \ choice-outcome ! if this will be fixed i will surely increase my score. but seeing that bungs in ealry chapter aren't fixed after 5-56 chapters i higly doubt this will ever happen

Pros:
- good Art (renders and models)
- interesting / good written Characters
- average story
- has sound / music

Cons:
- Episodes are for my liking way to short / small
- you can change the names from Mia and Rachel but not from others and in some sentences the game still mentions them with their "original" names
- sometimes the story end abrupts and isn't proberly continued with the next update (one ep. ends with Mia and MC surfing and we see a shark but in the next ep. they are on land and it was never explained how they "survived" it)

Overall:
a average game you don't miss out on much if you don't play it but if you have nothing else to do you can try it

PS: Best girl Mia

If you want to read a story this is a good-ish story. If you want arousal, passion and sex frequently then this game is not for you. I am a 36 yo dad of 1 4yo with a tired wife that just physically give me what I need sexually. I turn to this fiction for release. I am not a female. I can't just orgasm from steamy text. Passionate story with a spice of taboo and filth is what every man needs. Not a love novel.

I think the game deserves more than the feedback being given now. The graphics are quite nice and the ladies look lovely. The idea of the story is quite nice, a game dev who doesn't have his life in order and then keeps growing as a person in romance.

Unfortunately, the game doesn't quite capture this development. After the first episode, you don't notice much of this development. Besides, it doesn't make much sense that the ladies are so crazy about him. For all we know, he is unhealthy, not orderly and awkward. Therefore, it does not make sense for a successful milf and young pretty girl to be so in love with him right away. All he did is allow the girl to wait in his flat.

The romance with Mia is very wholesome al be it out of nowhere. See is an amazing girl with a nice personality. The dev succeeds in making the romace wholesome.

All in all, I do think the game deserve four stars given the attractiveness of the woman and the graphics mentioned before. The wholesome romance with Mia increased it from three to four stars.

the biggest strength of this game are hot milfs.
dont mind much overly-frustrated (as it can be otherwise? ) loli-lovers going all over the place and throwing low ratings. if anything is enforced here that would be an annoying typical "omg, im so pure and innocent, im not even able to pronounce f-word" chick called mia. for example, my mc would pretty much prefer to keep interactions with her on minimum, yet for some reason she keeps reappearing while mc has no other choice but to "think" how hot she is or even to feel guilty (!!!??) if he is flirting with her aunty, a hot blonde milf (rachel).
that is one of few main drawbacks here - dont force (mentally)underaged chicks on players, wtf needs them anyway

apart from that, there is not that much of a story here, and plot is somewhat basic, with not that much potential drama to unfolds, as for now.
renders and animations are good though, and as being mentioned already, with milfs, particularly rachel, being by far the best assets the game has to offer.
for those milfs, and to balance a bit those low ratings ("omg, why mc cant fuck loli chick already...here, im gonna give you this bad review, so you shall see it!!"), it gets 5 stars from me.
keep up the good work and try to improve whenever possible!

Pros:
Kinsey
Mia

Cons:
Everything else.

Games like these are why I cringe when I hear remake this or remake that. After playing 10 chapters of this it's safe to say that the comparisons can fall off of a cliff. Ceasefire. There's many things I didn't appreciate but I'll start with the obvious one. Does every tech guy behave or act like this around women? Asking for a friend. It's hard to enjoy a guy constantly tripping over his words all the time at the sight of breast.

Then Kinsey's situation. She was my favorite girl on here but quickly became an afterthought. Stop trying to force lesbianism in games, that teaser, if you wanna call it that came out of nowhere but then afterwards it's like the character got punished for it because there wasn't much content on her afterwards. So I have to settle for Mia, who I have no problems with and Rachel who I simply can't stand. There's two fucking scenes during these whole 10 chapters, I'm not going to critique that because I've played worse slow burns. I just wasn't impressed with that or this game. Last but not least I feel like every black male character is either written badly or they're trying to be a carbon copy of Liam from AL. Like what's the point of Ethan? Comic relief?

Visually, the characters are okay. But the rest. Meaningless interactions. And a running commentary. The text feels like its from a text adventure and the images were added as an afterthought. Don't describe everything. I have eyes and can see what is going on. Overall just meh.

Average game with "okay-ish" girls but a "everyone wants the guy" turn of event, and more and more girls coming into the story for less and less world building.
Also, each chapter is like 10 minutes of gameplay only so even if you think it has a good number of chapters, it's not even "one" episode usual duration.

The ingame walkthrough which is supposed to help you is confusing. If it's to give the player hint such as "one choice is wrong, the other is right", then do not help.
Another thing, one of the character is some rich woman; that's okay, no problem. But we know her because she lives in the same appartment as a "wannabe independant developer of some porn game" MC which is described as not rich... it's not really immersive to imagine that. Either she is not rich, or she places her wealth in wrong places, or the MC is more rich than said. Anyway, it feels that the world building was not studied before and things just got in "because".

Another point which support the "it's a game with new ideas at each chapters without setup" aspect of the game are:
- so many dev comment between "chapters".
- chapters seeming to have a focus, which can disappear in the next one
- the lack of global direction in the plot/story/girls place and presence in game

So all in all, a real missed game opportunity.

I just couldnt enjoy this one. I get that the author loves Rachel and wants it to be centered on her but she just wasnt my type and having her constantly inserting herself into everything just turned me off even more. I really wanted to experience the other characters but other then Mia there wasnt enough interaction for me. Also hated to be forced into saying Ash looked good when she seemed to have something to do with the MC losing his job, if you want me to like her make her a friend from the previous job. Anyway just my opinions.

As of Chapter 8

PROS

• Model's looks good

CONS

• All the main character's are really really unlikable, including the MC.
• Scenes aren't great.
• Story is boring.
• Choice's are meaningless to the story (which is always bad).
• Locked into paths.

CONCLUSION

Tried this twice now and been disappointed both times. Won't bother a third time.

This game definitely improved a lot with the latest chapters, especially with chapter 8. At first it's kinda meh, a lot of the dialogue didn't make sense and the cuts between scenes were pretty chaotic with worthless one option choices. Chapter 8 felt much better, dialogue is more natural and overall the flow between scenes has improved a lot. Definitely a 5 star in the future.

Eeeeeeeeh, it was okay -ish? Simple VN with some kick to it, but with lots of potholes. Models look good. (mostly) Animations look pretty decent. Writing is quite "meeeh", it's okay at its best and "GOD, it's so f dumb" at its worst. (that 'hit-and-run' accident was bad, like... OOF) Story itself doesn't catch me that, I can't feel spark to it. No "ding" for me. Characters themselves are okaaay, at least they do decent for the porn VN. Tho, MC feels like kind of self-insert, that doesn't mind to share his women with his friends. What a nice guy!
Anyaway, check it out , maybe this game is for you.

The renders are kinda meh, not bad, not good.

Characters seem pretty well developed, however i dont think i've played far enough to be able to give a proper review about that yet.

I just wanted to say that the main character completely ruined this otherwise good VN.

His a wimpy virgin of the highest caliber.
He stutters at the smallest thing.
And when Rachel made moves on MC she was VERY straightforward about what she wants.

And how does the MC respond?
"I want it, But only if you want it Rachel!"
Well shit you pathetic virgin she has been making moves and given you the bedroom eyes, she obviously wants it....

I seriously hope MCs personality develops as the VN continues.

There are a lot of things to like about this game. The women are all designed pretty realistically, the renders are solid and the characters are, for the most part, well written.

I was, however, disappointed with the paths. Essentially, you have either a Rachel or a Mia path and if you blow off both of them, at some point you are stuck with one of them... most of the time being Mia.

After re-reading the description, it seems the game is really about the MC and Mia so I guess I should not have been surprised with the paths. I was hoping for a solo Kinsey route but that is not the way the game is written.

I also don't understand when devs add features with no apparent value. Like only offering one choice or having to do a silly click game to unscrew the desktop cover or picking up the keys off the table. At one point, the MC got his knob polished by one of the characters (no choice, it just happened) despite the MC shooting her down at every opportunity.

Regardless, the dev has put a lot of work into this and it shows. So I don't like some of the things they did, it doesn't mean I don't appreciate the effort and the hard work. It's worth a download and to check it out at the very least. If you are like me, however, you may find it a little frustrating.

A few pretty ladies, but right now you are pushed towards the ugly MILFS.
If you like the younger girls, don't bother, you probably won't get content anytime soon.

If you like MILFS you probably will like it. If you want any sexual content, you will need to like their silicon (except for pizza girl, who is hot enough but mainly just a filler.)

Too bad, because it started out nice, hinting at a Mia path, perhaps parallel to a MILF path, so you could choose the character you'd like.

Maybe one day in the future it's worth looking at the renders with Mia , but seeing how fast 3D rendering is improving, by that time she will probably look dated and not even worth the download.

Some of the negative reviews should be taken with a grain of salt as they seem to be very disappointed in very particular things. Overall, it is a good game with interesting LI, great renders etc. It will also give you flashbacks to My Sweet Neighbor, which is never a bad thing. The dev also updates regularly and consistently.

I had a long review writeen and i closed the browser after checking webps. Well i will have to shorten it. Lets go:

Lets talk about the redeeming qualities, that in this game are the renders,and the females, they look good, as long as they dont do sexual posistions, cause then they will look just as an other DAZ female with stretched textures, vaginas dissapearing leaving a default misplaced asset and that stuff. So its a redeeming quality, but not so much.

The Bad thing about this game is everything else. Lets check:
There is sexual interactions (i checked the game folder cause i rejected Rachel) with Rachel and one scene out of nowhere with Kinsey, after speaking to her like 1 time or 2.

If you pursue Rachel maybe you have enough, if you dont, you will lose your time playing this game.
Mia will give you a couple of POV kisses where you will clearly see that her face is quite far , sometimes you will even see that she is at forearm distance and still the game tells you that you are kissing. IT IS THAT BAD.

If you make any moves on her, its only to touch her slightly and thats it, you will lose points otherwise, and later in 2030 when she gives you more than kisses you will pay for your misdeeds. At the end fo the Chapter 5, with 45 RP and 20LP you get kisses and see her tits a couple of times, by acident, or peeking.
If you try to go further, you have one chance but its a game over.

The MC maybe drinks virgin sauce or something cause he stammers a lot, even in the presence of a girl who is 0 menacing like Mia, who is vanilla and boring as hell.
For a good part of the game there are a lot of 1 single choice options.

The game misleads you clearly and makes you lose time with a fake and badly written romance while at the same time it force feeds you a Milf that you can easily get only making a couple of choices right.

The same for Kinsey, you make a couple of choces and you get a blowjob, easy.

There are messages of the MC talking about working in Damaged goods. Damaged goods is an actual game, and its abandoned, i think the develoiper should take the time to remove those references from the game.

There is one moment when one of the characters calls you by the dev nickname "Sin" (Self inserting much)
You can not watch more than Mias tits, but there are a couple of clear shots of her feet.

There is a scene where Kinsey and Mia meet to try clothes, and these 2 grls have only spoken like once for 1 minute, and Kinsey removes her bra. The MC wll not do that until the characters from this game reincarnate in another game, adn if the game is not abandoned, maybe the MC will be able to remove her bra.

There are fanservice scenes where the MC can not see things happening, but the player can.

And finally the sex scenes.... So Vanilla and average. I played games where scenes are hot and intense, either for the shots or facial expressions, or both. These are quite average and offer nothing worth mentioning, really.
I would say that some are anticlimatic even like someone giving a handjob with a weird smile, i mean cmon, even the girls in the sex scenes seem to have no interest in what they are doing. Isnt there a preset for lustful face at least, and maybe some blush? I dont know, to make her look interested.

As i said, kind of mediocre.

This review is for chapter 5
PROS -
Well the renders are one of the best I have seen in games and all models are stunning . Music to the game was nice additional touch .
CONS-
A stammering weak Main character and too much self imposition early on the game instantly killed the game for me . Story after sometime becomes boring and the dialogues are filled with typos And unnecessary point and click on items like key , phone and mini games which not all players like to waste their time on playing it and choices like open the door , call someone and grab the keys are just tiresome . I don't know what is the use of those single choices in the game . And some of the female characters acts more stupid than main character and they all seem to fall for him with no reason even though he doesn't do anything .
So far apart from those incredible renders , boring story and unnecessary point and clicks makes this game poor at this moment , will change my review if it improves in later versions, but at present it's average or poor at best .