HTML Abandoned Winter Cabin [v0.02] [david123]

[Forgeshield]

I'm looking forward to see where this goes. Besides mentioning mom's lips twice in two paragraphs while traveling, the writing is solid. Seems like forever since I've seen a Twine game that wasn't MtF transformation or sissy, which aren't genres I'm into.

Agree with others about the font. It's a monospace font that has letter and word-spacing to adjust it. Anytime you're adjusting letter/word spacing on body text, you're using the wrong font.

 

[david123]

So far this seems great. For me the text was large enough, but I wouldn’t mind if you were to modify it. The story is interesting, and I will keep an eye out for the development of it. Good Luck and keep up the good work.

Thankyou! I am planning on adding an option to allow you guys to adjust the size of the text.

 

[david123]

I'm looking forward to see where this goes. Besides mentioning mom's lips twice in two paragraphs while traveling, the writing is solid. Seems like forever since I've seen a Twine game that wasn't MtF transformation or sissy, which aren't genres I'm into.

Agree with others about the font. It's a monospace font that has letter and word-spacing to adjust it. Anytime you're adjusting letter/word spacing on body text, you're using the wrong font.

I agree! Most of the text based games on here deal with extreme fetishes that I'm not into . The closest thing to a text based game I found interesting was Cult of Corruption - even though it had corruption (something I despise in stories) the writing style was solid and erotic and the author's use of images was right on point.

 

[xןʞ]

You know you've got a pretty good thing when the only real complaint is the font.

Finally a text game that isn't sissification(please tell me the snow isn't gonna magically make son want to become a panty wearing bimbo.)

I actually think this is pretty awesome because I actually like reading the stuff on literotica and asstr and such, so teh idea that a text based story heavy(lets not even get started on how absolutely basic the plots are on most of the porn games out there are) game that actually has fetishes that aren't huge turn offs is right up my alley.

Def looking forward to seeing more.

 

[Fallen9182]

I agree! Most of the text based games on here deal with extreme fetishes that I'm not into . The closest thing to a text based game I found interesting was Cult of Corruption - even though it had corruption (something I despise in stories) the writing style was solid and erotic and the author's use of images was right on point.

There is a few good text based games, corruption of champions and Trials in tainted space both are very good. they each have 100k plus words and a lot of fetishes, both are mostly monster/furry sex games.

Bad Neverland is a text based game with 10+ fetishes that can be disabled or enabled, it has a few hours of content

i know of a few more, if you would like to know feel free to message me.

 

[barry509]

How long till next update??

 

[david123]

How long till next update??

I don't want to release short updates with small increments in the story. My plan is to finish the entire game within a handful of updates. I also do not want to rush anything - I want this to be very well thought out and polished. The updates so far were only to lay out the foundation and give a sense of the game for everyone. Also university classes take up a lot of my time.
The next update should be coming out in around 3 weeks - but this is not guaranteed. Just keep an eye on this thread

 

[gunderson]

Incremental improvement over the first release, but I'm glad to see you're still working on this one and expanding choices a bit. Definitely a project to watch.

 

[momsboy22]

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They are some artworks I made for a game I used to work on. Had to stop on the production since my artwork sucked and I got busy with University. Also people were complaining my art isnt too great so Im practicing right now and hopefully will get better. After this game I would like to go back to the other game. It is also supposed to be a incest themed but using RPGMakerMV.

If I make my own art for this game it will look something similar to those.

Oh snap! You made that game! Duuuude Mom was thiiicc! I enjoyed that!

 

[david123]

Oh snap! You made that game! Duuuude Mom was thiiicc! I enjoyed that!

Haha thanks man! I would like to continue on that game after this. The development for that game is hard for me because of how terrible I'm at art.

 

[dgc4571]

First impression was pretty damn good!

 

[chuckkey]

looks good so far

 

[NyuNyu]

i dont usually play html games but this has caught my attention......im simple i like pictures to look at while im having a jimmy wango

 

[cuty_wolfy]

That's a good start, very promising. I will look frequently for a real v0.1
Please continue !

 

[JohnEffinDoe]

Im really looking forward for the new update, amazing story so far man just that it cuts off abruptly when things started get heated made me feel sad thought it will be bigger since its version 0.2

 

[NyuNyu]

is the game going to be on a timer or will we have as long as we want to get it done?

 

[Vladtaltos]

I totally agree with the latest comment, this game has a little something that really got me into it! I'm not sure why, but I love it! Keep it up!

 

[Vayleton]

Hope another update is coming soon.

 

[Marantihr]

This was short, but fun. Nicely written intro, if I had to pick at something it would be the font, which could be maybe a bit more readable if it had more of letter-spacing. -1.8 makes for annoying keming, with -0.8 it was much better.

 

[punisher77]

any new for an update ??