hopefully that Astoria is just a WIP and not the final version, because those arms/hands perspective is really messed up looking. On the arm on the left, why is the forearm OVER the rest of the arm when the inner-arm is facing towards us?
Also, either her Head is way too big or her hands way too small, either way the proportions don't fit at all with the rest of the games style. I get that you're trying to do more original art, but I think the game would be served better if you just edited and reshaped pre-existing models instead of completely redrawing characters to the point where the style isn't even reminiscent of Akabur.