Ren'Py Witches Out Times 3 [v0.9.0] [The_MangaGirl]

[Pomni XIV]

Really like the protagonist and art. Always loved the wizardly magic theme. Looking forward to see where this goes. Good luck with your project!

 

[The_MangaGirl]

Really like the protagonist and art. Always loved the wizardly magic theme. Looking forward to see where this goes. Good luck with your project!

Thank you very much

 

[Arikania]

Thx for your comment. The backgrounds are currently created with AI. In the course of time they will be replaced with mine because the backgrounds should also flow into the game but at the moment my skills for backgrounds are not good enough or I am too critical of myself because I want to achieve a certain style.

Typically, artists are their own most demanding critics. So why not just post some examples here in this thread and let us be the judges of that?

 

[Syrinfox]

I'm still at the beginning and I feel like dialogue is repeating itself. Viv brought up the Banshee then later when Jen comes they bring the Banshee up again and Lis acts like she Vic didn't JUST tell her about it and then they say it was a hard battle that they won because they were prepared for it but the previous time Viv says it showed up unexpectedly and Jen sent it back with a spell so how were they "Prepared?". Then later Jen says she's tired and going to bed and Lis says she's going to watch more tv then RIGHT after that line Jen once again says she's tired and going to bed and Lis once again says she's staying up to watch tv.

 

[The_MangaGirl]

Typically, artists are their own most demanding critics. So why not just post some examples here in this thread and let us be the judges of that?

I think you’re absolutely right about that! I occasionally share some of my work publicly on my Patreon, so anyone can take a look. I actually posted something there recently that I’m considering incorporating into the game.

 

[The_MangaGirl]

I'm still at the beginning and I feel like dialogue is repeating itself. Viv brought up the Banshee then later when Jen comes they bring the Banshee up again and Lis acts like she Vic didn't JUST tell her about it and then they say it was a hard battle that they won because they were prepared for it but the previous time Viv says it showed up unexpectedly and Jen sent it back with a spell so how were they "Prepared?". Then later Jen says she's tired and going to bed and Lis says she's going to watch more tv then RIGHT after that line Jen once again says she's tired and going to bed and Lis once again says she's staying up to watch tv.

I see exactly what you mean, and you're absolutely right. Thank you very much for your constructive criticism! I will revise the repetitions and contradictions and fix them in the next updates.