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"...Could be better..."
How?
Seriously, unless you're going to, oh I dunno, make a porn game where you corrupt her and other female members of Hogwarts' faculty and pupils, I can't see how this can possibly be improved!!
Ren'Py With Hermione [v0.3.3.3.alpha] [Kirill Repin Art]
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How?
Seriously, unless you're going to, oh I dunno, make a porn game where you corrupt her and other female members of Hogwarts' faculty and pupils, I can't see how this can possibly be improved!!
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The intonations and inflections in some places could be improved, for the most expressive parts a had to regenerate text a couple of times, plus there's a fair amount of various parts that weren't originally connected with the narrative, I've generated them as separate fragments and edited them later. So there are some transitions that could be better. Also, writing feels somewhat chaotic.
But overall I'm quite happy with the result.
Could be cool to sync the voice with her character from the game acting out the monologue, with maybe some additional artwork. But it's all very time consuming still, so these are just thoughts.
Although the implementation of the voice into the game seems very realistic at this point. This monologue could be a reward for the player, after completing Hermione's corruption arc.
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Good job. A slight annoyance there is a lot of pop in the beginning with the T's and maybe some of the P's
I read your post from Tuesday. Please dont let your disillusionment from the world's affairs get you down. Having quality content for release at latter date just means you aren't rushed to produce anything substandard.
well that confession escalated somewhat at the end 
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When it started I thought " Oh OK, it can't use explicit terms due to a content filter somewhere".well that conession escalated somewhat at the end
By the end, I realised it had been a metaphor for her slowly-encroaching corruption. And I had to readjust my trousers...
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This will be the best game on the internet if you keep going like that, the art looks perfect better then real life, the voice is better then anything most porn stars can do, the story sounds great, maybe you should call JK and give her some writing advise. This is alredy better then the oficial new harry potter game, because that one has no dating, no sex and no romantic stuff. For real maybe it is just me but Harry Potter Fans love to write sexy fanfictions and stuff so every harry Potter gam should at least have dating. Whatever. So will you use all girls from the books in the final version or just hermione, is this going to be a harem game or more of the romantic love story of the year ?
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I think it benefit from the a bit more editing, to tighten up the script, I find that there are some places where I get bored and distracted while listening. But these aren't essential issues, in my opinion.
It started from we developing the main storyline and improving game mechanics, I thinks it's close to be done, by the way.
Then I've tasked AI to create a monologue to reflect this arc, it turned out to be promising and I've spent some time developing it more.
It started from we developing the main storyline and improving game mechanics, I thinks it's close to be done, by the way.
Then I've tasked AI to create a monologue to reflect this arc, it turned out to be promising and I've spent some time developing it more.
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Why i never had a girlfriend, but i imagine this is what a normal conversation sounds like if your girlfriend wants to talk right ?well that confession escalated somewhat at the end
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To be hones, I have no idea at this point. For now I'm just occasionally doing some stuff for it when I feel like it.
Here's what I have so far:
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pig potter
If Hermione's letter reaches Headmaster Dumbledore, we'll all end up in Azkaban. XD
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When your girlfriend says she "wants to talk", it does not usually result in this...
Dumbledore would have a heart attack reading that!
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The art is great and I'd like to see more from this game as well.
My only complaint would be that the art doesn't have the same chest proportions as the actress.
My only complaint would be that the art doesn't have the same chest proportions as the actress.
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to each their own. busty petite is the best
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I've not had a magazine subscription since the 20th century. Quibbler magazine could tempt me to change that!
geebus cripes awmitey. Match this wioth a corruption game, and you will ignite an entire new genre of porn games.
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Hey, I'm still into it, but I always find it odd to base something off a nearly photorealistic recreation of someone, and then mess with one thing. If I want to see a recreation, then I want a whole recreation.to each their own. busty petite is the best
It's like one of those "remixes" of a song you love that only adds a out-of-place super heavy drum track and nothing else.
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I don't find what Kirill did that jarring and considering the game is about corruption sems to be in universe vs being a book/movie aimed at young adults
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Just having some fun, very happy with her voice.
And those a pretty rough sketches, but I think she looks very close to the image I had in my head.
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So jeah, looking good. Can not wait to finaly get Luna Lovegood our favorite crazy big boobs slut in your art style. And Ginny of course. Redheads are hot. It is kinda cheating. If girls have red hair how could you not want to fuck them. Just to sexy. Jeah this art style looks better then real life.Good work