VN Ren'Py Witness Protection [v0.2] [Seductive Galaxy]

[TsubameYui]

Having us change the relationships of people we've never met (as the player) is odd. The prompt to change things comes up before you even see Samantha so I just guessed after I closed that menu, went back into the phone and read the bios that got added. I'm assuming it's mom and four sisters and then the neighbor Angelica is Lily's mom?

Same conclusion I came to. I commented a few posts up with a suggestion to improve the relationship setup. Would be much easier for the players if we got a brief introduction to Samantha, and then just set all other relationships based on what we choose for her.

Also, definitely don't need nearly as many relationship variables as there are. There are a lot of redundant variables, since you set like 5 variables each as "sister", "brother", "Mom", and "daughter", but they could just use the same single variable for each of those and cut it from about 20 variables to 4.

 

[joryh]

I found the characters in this game beautiful, but when I play a game I like to give the protagonist a name since this gives a feeling of closeness to the protagonist, I didn't like playing with a character whose name is pronounced like demon.

I don't like playing with names of ppl I know. Or knew, in this case. I do not talk to him anymore. For good reasons.

 

[joryh]

Your female LI's practically have the same bust +/- 2 on average except for Lily, the daughter of the neighbour. While there are a vast majority of huge boobs lovers around the AVN community, there are those that prefer "reality" over fiction even in a fictitious story. I think you'd want to watch that as you introduce more female LI's and add variety here to cater for a wider audience and would-be subscribers.

I find udders utterly revolting. Over a C, and I'm unlikely to be there. It's a rare instance where some other redeeming factor overcomes my revulsion for saggy bags of mostly fat.

 

[Enigemm]

I find udders utterly revolting. Over a C, and I'm unlikely to be there. It's a rare instance where some other redeeming factor overcomes my revulsion for saggy bags of mostly fat.

LOL . I thought it was me only that had such a revolting mentality.

 

[TsubameYui]

LOL . I thought it was me only that had such a revolting mentality.

I'm a big fan of variety, personally. All boobs are good boobs. I love everything from "loose-fitting A-cup" to "hoist them up with a few sticks, and I can camp under these". Dev definitely played very fast and loose with the sliders on this one. You're definitely right that the game needs more diversity in the bust department.

I don't like playing with names of ppl I know. Or knew, in this case. I do not talk to him anymore. For good reasons.

MC's name is now customizable.

 

[Famescua]

Here is my take on this vn.
pros:
First off the women are sexy, some might not like the females dimensions but im ok with them.

That's it.

Cons:
The MC is supposedly in the military and they discontinued some special ops that he was in. Now im ex military and when they closed my squadron down they transferred all of us to other places to finish up our enlistment. They didn't just say your squadron is disbanded go home, lol. Yeah just not very realistic.
The MC hasnt seen his family in 4 years believing that they are dead. He meets them and the only thing said is by one of the girls asking him why he never looked for them. ???? Well obviously becausehe thoughtyou were dead. Nothing else is said about that. The MC isnt even a little upset that he was lied to all this time.
Now he is said to have shares in a company but has no money, and can't access it. Now I'm not an investment specialist but I do know that if he has stock in a company he would be getting some money from the investment on a regular basis, or he can just sell some stock and get money. He makes it sound like there's nothing he can do about it.
Even though I do think the women are pretty sexy, the clothes they wear is a bit overboard, especially the mom wearing that micro skirt. Lol
Then the mc walks around with what looks like a washcloth wrapped around him like it was a regular towel.He wakes up in the morning with morning wood every day and it looks fucking ridiculous
Now the MC hasn't seen his family in 4 years and right away he just perves on them and wants to fuck them from the very first day. I guess what I'm trying to say is I'm tired of playing the basic pervy MC that only thinks with his dick.
OK I'm done with my little spiel. Good luck with your game.

All in all the game really needs a rewrite because, well just because

 

[SupremYoda]

Nice game

 

[Bobber Tail]

Started new game, got this ERROR so far. Using the patch in Win (yes, all the info is in the Traceback). Add this one.

 

[jadepaladin]

Not sure what this VN is trying to be but I guess I've played worse. I thought it was gonna try to be serious and then went hard into Big Brother territory.

You'd think if the MC and his family haven't seen each other in five years, the entire day would have been some kind of mass reunion with all of them together. Instead they act shocked, hug him, and then it's business as usual, some of them even going off to nap. Somehow the MC is simultaneously some kind of special ops badass and yet a huge perv that gropes two of his sleeping sister and don't get me started on the mom getting "stuck" (though that one has to be just played up for laughs).

I guess I can overlook the weird way he was discharged for the sake of the story but that's typically not how it's done unless they had some kind of mission that went wrong and there's no indication of that. If his family really is under witness protection, Samantha wouldn't be answering the door like that for the neighbor without MC around. Also, he eats pizza with a chef's knife?

All in all, not terrible but not super memorable, other than the mom getting stuck being funnier than lewd.

 

[drifter139]

Here is my take on this vn.
pros:
First off the women are sexy, some might not like the females dimensions but im ok with them.

That's it.

Cons:
The MC is supposedly in the military and they discontinued some special ops that he was in. Now im ex military and when they closed my squadron down they transferred all of us to other places to finish up our enlistment. They didn't just say your squadron is disbanded go home, lol. Yeah just not very realistic.
The MC hasnt seen his family in 4 years believing that they are dead. He meets them and the only thing said is by one of the girls asking him why he never looked for them. ???? Well obviously becausehe thoughtyou were dead. Nothing else is said about that. The MC isnt even a little upset that he was lied to all this time.
Now he is said to have shares in a company but has no money, and can't access it. Now I'm not an investment specialist but I do know that if he has stock in a company he would be getting some money from the investment on a regular basis, or he can just sell some stock and get money. He makes it sound like there's nothing he can do about it.
Even though I do think the women are pretty sexy, the clothes they wear is a bit overboard, especially the mom wearing that micro skirt. Lol
Then the mc walks around with what looks like a washcloth wrapped around him like it was a regular towel.He wakes up in the morning with morning wood every day and it looks fucking ridiculous
Now the MC hasn't seen his family in 4 years and right away he just perves on them and wants to fuck them from the very first day. I guess what I'm trying to say is I'm tired of playing the basic pervy MC that only thinks with his dick.
OK I'm done with my little spiel. Good luck with your game.

All in all the game really needs a rewrite because, well just because

I agree with all your points

 

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[Famescua]

Not sure what this VN is trying to be but I guess I've played worse. I thought it was gonna try to be serious and then went hard into Big Brother territory.

You'd think if the MC and his family haven't seen each other in five years, the entire day would have been some kind of mass reunion with all of them together. Instead they act shocked, hug him, and then it's business as usual, some of them even going off to nap. Somehow the MC is simultaneously some kind of special ops badass and yet a huge perv that gropes two of his sleeping sister and don't get me started on the mom getting "stuck" (though that one has to be just played up for laughs).

I guess I can overlook the weird way he was discharged for the sake of the story but that's typically not how it's done unless they had some kind of mission that went wrong and there's no indication of that. If his family really is under witness protection, Samantha wouldn't be answering the door like that for the neighbor without MC around. Also, he eats pizza with a chef's knife?

All in all, not terrible but not super memorable, other than the mom getting stuck being funnier than lewd.

Lol, yeah when I saw the mom got stuck in a freaking dining room chair, I mean the chair was so open that it couldn't have been that hard to get unstuck, plus who crawls though a chair like that instead of going aroundit anyways......I was like WTF!!! Yeah that was some funny shit. A bit over the top but still funny. I'm not sure if the dev was intentionality trying to be funny or just got lucky.

 

[jadepaladin]

Lol, yeah when I saw the mom got stuck in a freaking dining room chair, I mean the chair was so open that it couldn't have been that hard to get unstuck, plus who crawls though a chair like that instead of going aroundit anyways......I was like WTF!!! Yeah that was some funny shit. A bit over the top but still funny. I'm not sure if the dev was intentionality trying to be funny or just got lucky.

The pizza with a chef's knife + coffee kills me.