I played this game for few minutes and got really bored and upset, i see potential in this game and art style but there are a lot of issues.
Good:
- Art style is nice
- Has potential for a good storyline, the universe of this game is neat with monsters, mages.
- MC has learning trees
- Game has Gallery! its always nice to have gallery
Bad:
- The game is very straight 1 line, you can not do anything other than what the developer wants you to do
- Many conversations and actions don't have options to choose between, and MC does things we would not want him to do
- There are not enough options to do with characters
- Certain areas feel like they should not be accessable at any time (example: MC can enter Amelia's room when she is asleep, maybe implement event she gives a key to MC thing, or breaking in)
- Player has no lifebar / energybar there is no combat system
- Player does not have inventory, or something easily accessable where he could see resources, and items. (i recommend resources are always visible as well as the status of MC: life, energy)
- Characters lose mood becouse MC mindcontrols them, or talks to them, their mood decreases, but does not increases at any time, it can go to negative values and it can only be change via Mood Potions
- Combat system should be expanded, added new abilities with icons, display enemy health bars, be able to have companions, allies in battles (i did not get that far in game to know if it is possible, if it is my mistake)
- Display what the things are when cursor is on the thing (for example: i accidently went in to the golem boss thing and maybe died? it didnt tell me exactly, and there were no penalty, but the thing is places, curios, objects could have name popup)
- Player death event does not appear to have any penalties, or any ways to knowledge that the player actually did die. Confusing (example: Golem says "Intruder eliminated" continues to play like nothing happened?)
- Blackscreen delays are really annoying, especially becouse the game doesn't seem to do anything different if it is speeded up by other program.
((- MC has fix name that i could not change so far, altho it isnt big of an issue))